Ariel W. (ariel_w) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
您好。
新冠肺炎的情形如何呢？
在日本每天仍然有500人左右的感染患者。
请好好保重身体。
商品大约何时能够完成呢？
日期确定的话我再预约DHL收货。

修正後
您好。
新冠肺炎的情形如何呢？
在日本每天仍然有500人左右的患者新增。
请好好保重身体。
商品大约何时能够完成呢？
日期确定的话我再预约DHL收货。

元の翻訳
辛苦了。
用J或是ｃ称呼的话会很混乱，因此我们称之为管度及弯度吧。
因为这次订购的J没有了，因此和上次的J一起购买就行了。
我已经在Excel上写下管度了。
再麻烦了。

修正後
辛苦了。
用J或是ｃ称呼的话会很混乱，因此我们称之为管度及弯度吧。
因为这次订购的J没有了，因此和上次的J一起购买即可。
我已在Excel上写明管度。
致礼。

元の翻訳
注目！
茶专家严选　静冈县产有机茶

抗氧化作用
抗老化
减肥

修正後
请看！
由茶叶专家精选的静冈县有机茶

抗氧化
抗衰老
助减肥

元の翻訳
We deeply appreciate your effort to make the documents.
However, we declined the application for selling goods.
The reason is that it did not fulfill the requirements and we cannot disclosure the the standards, contents, and the results of the judgement. (The invoice is the minimum necessary document.)

Although the payment is already finished, we are asking that if you could cancel the dealing this time? We apologize for the inconvenience.

Although the result this time is disappointed, we would still like to purchase products from you next time. We are looking forward to continuing business with you in the future.↵

修正後
We deeply appreciate your effort to make the documents.
However, we declined the application for selling goods.
The reason is that it did not fulfill the requirements and we cannot disclosure the the standards, contents, and the results of the judgement. (The invoice is the minimum necessary document.)

Although the payment is already finished, we are asking that if you could cancel the dealing this time? We apologize for the inconvenience.

Although the result this time is disappointed, we would still like to purchase products from you next time. We are looking forward to continuing business with you in the future.