✿Apple Tea✿ (appletea) — もらったレビュー

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We recommend you 7 seconds exercise formed by posture beauty stylists. Anyone can brush up their inner muscles, and with this product, base metabolism will be enhanced effectively.

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We recommend you 7 second interval exercises designed by posture beauty stylists. Anyone can brush up their inner muscles, and with this product, base metabolism will be enhanced effectively.

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・You can purchase Japanese products much cheaper than other stores.
・Cheaper than ebay and amazon
・Possible to buy from 1 item to many
・rapid delivery

・Thank you very much for buying our products. We are looking forward to your next shopping.
・Contact from here

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・You can purchase Japanese products much more inexpensive than in other stores.
・More inexpensive than on ebay and amazon
・Possible to buy from 1 item to many
・rapid delivery

・Thank you very much for buying our products. We are looking forward to your next shopping.
・Contact from here

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Thank you very much for sending us an invoice.

However, the estimate of this invoice is set as 21 units.

I purchased 20 units last time.

Please kindly ship us 21 units, including the rest of another unit.

Last time, you shipped 20 units to Japan at the cost of $511.80.
Please revise the estimate and send us an invoice to this paypal. (paypal)

Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you very much for sending us an invoice.

However, the estimate on this invoice is set for 21 units.

I purchased 20 units last time.

Please kindly ship us 21 units, including the last one from the other order.

Last time you shipped 20 units to Japan at the cost of $511.80.
Please revise the estimate and send us an invoice to this paypal. (paypal)

Thank you for your understanding.

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I contacted you on August 1st, and talked about the refund which both of us agreed.
At that time, I told you my account ID as you inquired.
You answered me to refund as soon as possible.

However, I can't confirm your refund at present.

If I still can't confirm your refund by August 16th, I'm going to click Open Dispute start procedures.

I'm looking for your sincere response.

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I contacted you on August 1st, and talked about the refund which both of us agreed.
At that time, I told you my account ID as you inquired.
You answered me to refund as soon as possible.

However, I can't confirm your refund at present.

If I still can't confirm your refund by August 16th, I'm going to click Open Dispute and proceed with the necessary procedures.

I'm looking forward to your sincere response.

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お客様のアカウントトラブルを解決するために、ご協力をお願い致します。この問題に時間を要するため、私達は一時的に、アカウント問題が解決するまでお客様がアカウントでご利用できる範囲を限定させて頂きました。ペイパルアカウントのサービスを全てご利用できず、ご不便をお掛けして申し訳ございません。お客様にご協力頂き、早急に通常通りアカウントをお使い頂けるように励みたいと存じます。

問題についてお知らせください。

お客様がアカウントをしばらくご利用になっていらっしゃいません。ペイパルのサービスを安心してご利用いただくため、お客様のアカウントについてもう少しお聞かせ下さい。

参照番号： PP-001-278-254-803

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お客様のアカウントトラブルを解決するために、ご協力をお願い致します。この問題に時間を要するため、私達は一時的に、アカウント問題が解決するまでお客様がアカウントでご利用できる範囲を限定させて頂きました。ペイパルアカウントのサービスを全てご利用できず、ご不便をお掛けして申し訳ございません。お客様にご協力頂き、早急に通常通りアカウントをお使い頂けるように励みたいと存じます。

問題についてお知らせください。

お客様はアカウントをしばらくご利用になっていらっしゃいません。ペイパルのサービスを安心してご利用いただくため、お客様のアカウントについてもう少しお聞かせ下さい。

参照番号： PP-001-278-254-803

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UK
Thank you very much for your contact.
There are no errors found.
My UK account has been deleted.
Please kindly let me know concrete reason (attachment included).
Also, please inform me how I can bring back the right to access my account.
I will do my best on anything.

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UK
Thank you very much for contacting me.
There are no errors found.
My UK account has been deleted.
Please give me a detailed explanation as to why my account was deleted (attachment included).
Also, please tell me what to do to restore my account.
I will do whatever it takes.

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Thank you very much for your warm consideration!
We are going to send you a comment after we receive the item sample and investigate the quality.

Japanese is globally known as being strict about quality of an item, and we can make use of the experiences from buying foreign products. We can estimate whether the item samples have quality worth selling.

The concept of this product is amazing, so if we find this has enough quality, we would like to sell this item in Japan.

We are sincerely looking forward to develop business with you.

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Thank you very much for your warm consideration!
We are going to send you a comment once we receive the item sample and investigate its quality.

Japanese is globally known to be strict about product quality. We make use of our experiences from buying foreign products to check the item sample, and then determine whether the quality is enough to be sold in Japan.

The concept of this product is amazing, and if we are satisfied with it, we would like to sell this product in Japan.

We sincerely look forward to doing business with you.

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Awww, I love this game the best! I wish the next version will be updated soon!! LOL

That's a sad news... I hope they will try to upload the game again. I'm praying.

I'm glad that you are interested in the game.

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In group 【グループ名】, I especially like 【人名】. How about you?

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Awww, I love this game the best! I hope the next version will be updated soon!! LOL

That's a sad news... I wish they would try to upload the game again. I'm praying for it.

I'm glad that you are interested in this game.

【人名】 is in group 【グループ名】, and 【人名】 is in group 【グループ名】.

Wow! I like 【グループ名】, 【グループ名】, and 【グループ名】 very much, too!
In group 【グループ名】, I especially like 【人名】. How about you?

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Thank you very much for your question!!

I'm sorry, this item is only available in Japanese.

I'm sorry the shipment was delayed.

I'm shipping the item soon.

I'm shipping by EMS, which is the fastest way so that you can get it very soon after dispatch.

Please look forward to the item to reach you.

Thank you!!

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Thank you very much for your question!!

I'm sorry, this item is only available in Japanese.

I'm sorry the shipment was delayed.

I'm shipping the item soon.

I'm shipping by EMS, which is the fastest way so that you can get it very soon after dispatch.

Please look forward to the item's arrival.

Thank you!!

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Thank you as always.
and thank you very much for your reply.

The holds with defects are as follows;
Cuajo 2XL×２
Smallholds × 10(Until Now)

Anyway,

I appreciate it if you could send us in-stock items.
I'm sorry to bother you when you are busy.
Thank you.

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Thank you as always.
and thank you very much for your reply.

The holds with defects are as follows:
Cuajo 2XL×２
Smallholds × 10 (up to now)

Anyway,

I would appreciate it if you could send us your in-stock items first.
I appreciate your taking the time.
Thank you.

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Thank you.
Please fill in the Google form as soon as you get back.
I will reply you right away when you finished writing.

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Thank you.
Please fill out the Google form as soon as you get back.
We will respond as soon as you complete the form.

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Thank you as always, George.
I'm going to place an order, so please send me an invoice if you don't find any problems.

We are not enjoying profits as the yen has become weaker.
Is there any items you can discount?
I appreciate an invoice after discount, if possible.

I would like to trade with you continuously, and also would be happy to increase the amount of the deal.

Please introduce any popular items which enable me to import with cheaper price.

I appreciate if you could display the price on the receipt cheaply due to the custom.

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Thank you George, as always.
Here is my order, if everything is okay, please send me an invoice.

We are not enjoying profits at the moment as the yen has become weaker.
Is there by any chance any items you can give us a discount on?
I'd appreciate an invoice with the discount, if possible.

I would very much like to keep trading with you, and I am considering increasing my orders.

Please introduce me other popular items I can import a low price.

I'd appreciate it if you could write a smaller price on the receipt to avoid charges at the customs.

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I can't send you an invoice with revised rate.
The reason is, I can't change the price of the item due to the ebay's policy. Therefore, It makes me impossible to issue an invoice because of the following error.
What I think I can do for you, is I make payment of 16$ to your paypal account in advance.
After confirming my payment, would you pay the price on the invoice?
Let me know your e-mail address so that I can pay you.

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I can't send you an invoice with the revised rate.
The reason is because I can't change the price of the item due to eBay's policy. Therefore, It makes it impossible for me to issue an invoice because of the following error.
What I think I can do for you is I will make a payment of $16 to your paypal account in advance.
After confirming my payment, would you pay the price on the invoice?
Let me know your e-mail address so that I can pay you.

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and thank you very much for accepting my idea. I was searching for tools that makes easy to research at Ebay and sell the items for you, and that's why it took this long.

Finally, I discovered a sales tool 24, which was developed for Japanese sellers. That manual is on the site below. I'm going to hand you a list of the displayed items next time, so please learn about this tool.

I'm going to ask you to display the products which includes lithium battery. Please add attached sentences to the camera itself this time.

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and thank you very much for accepting my proposal. I was searching for tools that would make it easy to research and put the items up for sale at Ebay, and that's why it took this long.

Finally, I discovered a sales tool called 24, which was developed for Japanese sellers. That manual can be found on the site below. ↵
Please familialize yourself with the tool before I send you the list of the merchandise for sale next time.

I'm going to ask you to put up for sale the products which includes a lithium battery. Please add attached sentences to the camera itself this time.

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月曜は社外勤務の予定が入っていますので、7月1日はメールにアクセスできません。緊急を要する場合は、ミッチェルまで(444-539-1400 xt. 204)、もしくは、いつでも support@comfortfirst.comまでメールをご送信下さい。

帰ってお会いできるのを楽しみにしております。

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月曜日は休みの予定ですので、7月1日にはメールを見ることができません。緊急の際は、ミッチェルまで(444-539-1400 xt. 204)ご連絡ください。もしくはsupport@comfortfirst.comであれば、いつでもメールをお送り頂けます。

戻った際にお返事できることを楽しみにしております。

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I can import Japanese products cheaper for you.
I'm sorry to bother you with sudden contact.
I'm looking forward to do business with you.
If you have any interest in me, let me know.
Thank you very much for reading this to the very end.

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I can import Japanese products reasonably for you.
I'm sorry to bother you with sudden contact.
I'm looking forward to do business with you.
If you have any interest, let me know.
Thank you very much for reading this to the very end.

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I just checked the tracking number, but according the status, the item has reached you.

The tracking number is, EG225716653JP.

Haven't you got it already?

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I just checked the tracking number, but the record shows that the item has reached you.

The tracking number is EG225716653JP.

Are you sure you have not received it already?