S. H. (aliene) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Handing of presents and fan letters directly to the group members is strictly prohibited.

*We seek your understanding that the start times for the High Touch meetings and the CD sales may change without notice.
*Depending on circumstances at the venue, the High Touch meeting may end even if there are still customers waiting in line.
*For customers holding more than one participation ticket, kindly move to the back of the queue for your subsequent turns.
*Please refrain from making inquiries to the venue. This can cause the event to be cancelled.

修正後
Handing presents and fan letters directly to the group members is strictly prohibited.

*Please understand that the start times for the High Touch meetings and the CD sales may change without prior notice.
*Depending on the circumstances at the venue, the High Touch meeting may end even if there are still customers waiting in line.
*Customers holding more than one participation ticket will be required to kindly move to the back of the queue for their subsequent turns.
*Please refrain from making inquiries directly to the venue. This could cause the event to be cancelled.

元の翻訳
1

インターフェース：USB2.0
高速読み出し/書き込み
USBサービス電圧
環境温度：-40°C ～+70°C
ストレージ温度： -50°C ～ +80°C
ストレージの有効期間：10年以上
オペレーティングシステム：Win98/ME/2000/XP/ Vista/7 , OS 9.X/Linux2.4
持ち運びに便利
簡単で読み出し、高速読み出し
ドライブ不要、プラグ差し込めばいい
電源不要
USB ZIP/HDDをサポートする
コンパクトスタイルとおしゃれ
耐衝撃性、防湿、ライティング耐性、耐磁
3メートルから落下のインパクトが耐えられる
A-クラスのチップが使っている、繰り返して100,000回消去できる
PC、ノートパソコン対応
ギフトボックス包装

修正後
1

インターフェース：USB2.0
高速読み出し/書き込み
USBサービス電圧
環境温度：-40°C ～+70°C
ストレージ温度： -50°C ～ +80°C
ストレージの有効期間：10年以上
オペレーティングシステム：Win98/ME/2000/XP/ Vista/7 , OS 9.X/Linux2.4
持ち運びに便利
簡単で読み出し、高速読み出し
ドライブ不要、プラグ差し込めばいい
電源不要
USB ZIP/HDDをサポートする
コンパクトスタイルでおしゃれ
耐衝撃性、防湿、ライティング耐性、耐磁
3メートルから落下のインパクトが耐えられる
A-クラスのチップが使っている、繰り返して100,000回消去できる
PC、ノートパソコン対応
ギフトボックス包装

元の翻訳
Thank you for the additional offer. I would like to buy "A" in addition. Just to be sure, does this painting, as well as the other three, come with COA? Please let me know the total cost for the 4 paintings. Please give me the best price that you can, with the consideration that there may be continuous purchases. Thank you.

Thank you for your reply. As the payment has been completed, kindly confirm the receipt of payment and ship the items. I am looking forward to receiving the items. I look forward to working with you again in future.

修正後
Thank you for the additional offer. I would like to buy "A" in addition. Just to be sure, does this painting, as well as the other three, come with COA? Please let me know the total cost for the 4 paintings. Please give me the best price that you can offer, with the consideration that there may be my continuous purchases. Thank you.

Thank you for your reply. As the payment has been completed, kindly confirm the receipt of the payment and ship the items. I am looking forward to receiving the them. I look forward to working with you again in the future.

元の翻訳
I visited the Japanese post office today and spoke to the post master regarding the huge delay in delivering your package.

As the applications to investigate the issue have already been submitted, they are currently awaiting for the investigation results from the US postal service.

It appears that a reply is normally received 2-3 weeks after the submission of the investigation request.

I am very sorry for the inconvenience caused and seek your patience to wait till the end of this month.

In the case that the package is lost, I assure you that you will receive a full refund.

Additionally, in apology for the situation, I would like to offer you a waiver on shipping fees on your next purchase.

Thank you for your kind understanding.

修正後
I visited the Japanese post office today and spoke to the post master regarding the huge delay in delivering your package.

As the applications to investigate, the issue has already been submitted, and they are currently awaiting for the investigation results from the US postal service.

It appears that a reply is normally received 2-3 weeks after the submission of the investigation request.

I am very sorry for the inconvenience caused and seek your patience to wait till the end of this month.

In the case that the package is lost, I assure you that you will receive a full refund.

Additionally, in apology for the situation, I would like to offer you a waiver on shipping fees on your next purchase.

Thank you for your kind understanding.

元の翻訳
Yes, I would like to get the new mobile product.
Could you please send me the coupon code as soon as possible?

I see that the sweets have reached you.
They're famous sweets from Kyoto that are even eaten by the Japanese royals.
Please enjoy them with everyone else.

I look forward to working with you again going forward.
Thank you!

修正後
Yes, I would like to get the new model product.
Could you please send me the coupon code as soon as possible?

I see that the sweets have reached you.
They're famous sweets from Kyoto that are even eaten by the Japanese royals.
Please enjoy them with everyone else.

I look forward to working with you again.
Thank you!