akiko_707 — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
○Activity plan of BD
The establishment of BD association and the setting up of school
The practical guidance in hospital and university.

○Request for P
The admission and recommendation of government organization.
Support for activity
School management
Invitation of Dr

○The assistance available from Japan
Technical guidance
Sending Japanese doctor
Reception of research student to Japan

○Time
June participant meeting(Dr、government participant)

August No.2 participant meeting (Curriculum, Teaching contents, confirmation of support system)

October establishment of school cooperation with hospital cooperation with university

If you agree with the suggestion above, please send me a offer letter with BD participants' joint signature for confirmation.

修正後
○Activity plans of BD
The establishment of BD association and the setting up of school
The practical guidance at hospitals and universities

○Requests for P
The admission and recommendation of government organization.
Support for activity
School management
Invitation of doctors

○The assistance available from Japan
Technical guidance
Sending Japanese doctors
Reception of research students to Japan

○Time
June participant meeting (doctors, government participant)

August: second participant meeting (curriculum, teaching contents, confirmation of support system)

October: establishment of school cooperation with hospital cooperation with universities

If you agree with the suggestions above, please send me an offer letter with BD participants' joint signature for confirmation.

元の翻訳
The position of our company's stock
General consumer goods are put in AmazonFBA center in British and America.
Antiques are in Japan.

The plans that we want to develop from now on
The goods which are on sale on Amazon can also be bought on eBay.
Cooperate with Shopify and eBay on the field of antiques.
Sale goods in India, Brazil and China.
Have a shop on major companies in the world like MarketPlace.
Practical use of Comparison Shopping.

That's all. Thank you very much.

修正後
The location of our company's stock
General consumer goods are placed in AmazonFBA center in Britain and America.
Antiques are in Japan.

The plans that we want to develop from now on:
The goods which are on sale on Amazon can also be bought on eBay.
Cooperate with Shopify and eBay on the field of antiques.
Sale goods in India, Brazil, and China.
Have a shop on major companies in the world such as MarketPlace.
Practical use of Comparison Shopping.

That's all. Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Although I don't have any questions,
I will explain present situation and outlook of our company for reference.

The market places and goods that our company has account now.
Amazon(general consumer goods)→one to hundreds
Antiques→one

The market places that will be set up
Shopify(almost antiques only)

About goods sold on Amazon
It is not original goods made from our company, some sellers are selling big brand goods.

修正後
Although I don't have any questions,
I will explain the present situation and outlook of our company for reference.

The market places and goods that our company has account now.
Amazon (general consumer goods) => (Inventory) one to hundreds items
eBay (Antiques) => (Inventory) one-off items

The market places that will be set up
Shopify (Mostly antiques only)

About goods sold on Amazon
It is not original goods made from our company, but some sellers are selling big brand goods.