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Would you kindly pack it up, firmly so that it won't be broken during the transportation?

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Would you kindly pack it up firmly so that it won't be broken during the transportation?

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I can receive the product either in the U.S. or in Japan. The address of the rental storage in Florida and my office in Okinawa, in Japan are below. I would like the estimates of shipping fees for both addresses as I would like to receive it with a cheaper cost. The recipient, Mark is my business partner.

Please send me the estimates of shipping costs for both addresses as I would like the parcel to be sent to one of the addresses that can be cheaper.

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I can receive the product either in the U.S. or in Japan. The address of the rental storage in Florida and my office in Okinawa, in Japan are below. I would like the estimates of shipping fees for both addresses as I would like to receive it with a cheaper cost. The recipient, Mark is my business partner.

Please send me the estimates of shipping costs for both addresses as I would like the parcel to be sent to one of the addresses for which the shipping fee is cheaper.

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You can receive the product either in the USA or in Japan. Following are the addresses of the rented warehouse in Florida and my office in Okinawa.
Please estimate the shipping fee for both shipping addresses, as I would like you to ship it out to one of those which has cheaper shipping fee.
Mark, the recipient is my business partner.

Please estimate the shipping fee for both addresses, as I would like you to ship it out to one of those addresses with cheaper shipping fee.

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I can receive the product either in the USA or in Japan. Following are the addresses of the rented warehouse in Florida and my office in Okinawa.
Please estimate the shipping fee for both shipping addresses, as I would like you to ship it out to one of those which has cheaper shipping fee.
Mark, the recipient is my business partner.

Please estimate the shipping fee for both addresses, as I would like you to ship it out to one of those addresses with cheaper shipping fee.

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I've checked at FedEx web site, and this package was shipped as one package in total. I've checked my own Amazon account, and it was shown as A, B, and C items are shipped all together. However, there were only A and B items in the box. C wasn't there. It's not a problem of delivery company. You forgot to put the item. Please send the C you missed to put ASAP. I'm in a big trouble because the item is not here. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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I've checked at FedEx web site, and this package was shipped as one package. I've checked my own Amazon account, and it showed that items A, B, and C had been shipped all together. However, there were only items A and B in the box. C wasn't in there. It's not a problem caused by delivery company. You forgot to put the item in. Please ship the item C to me urgently. I'm in a big trouble because the item is not here. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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When I checked FedEx site, the item has been shipped as one piece.
When I checked my account at Amazon, it said A, B and C items were shipped together. However, I found only item A and B in the box. There was not item C in it. It is not an issue of forwarder. You had forgotten to ship it. Please ship the item C which was forgotten to ship to me as soon as possible. I am in trouble without the item.
I look forward to hearing from you.

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When I checked FedEx site, the items have been shipped as one piece.
When I checked my account at Amazon, it said items A, B and C had been shipped together. However, I found only item A and B in the box. Item C was not in it. It is not an issue caused by forwarder. You did not ship the product. Please ship the item C which was not shipped to me urgently. I am in trouble without the item.
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Excellent! We are honored that we could trade with your company!
We really appreciate that you have accepted our difficult request as for the minimum lot number, too.

Now, can you tell me what steps do we need to take in order to go through the trade?
Please let us know about the payment method, the way to make shipment, the shipping cost and so on.

We look forward to your reply.

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Excellent! We are honored to do business with your company!
We really appreciate that you have accepted our difficult request for business at the minimum lot.

Now, can you tell me what steps do we need to take in order to proceed with the transaction?
Please let us know about the payment method, the way to make shipment, the shipping cost and so on.

We look forward to your reply.