Mark Endo (acdcasic) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
これからVergil Day Trader 2nd Generationをお送りいたします。
有効化する必要のあるアカウントがあれば、お知らせください。

我々としてはVergil Day Trader 2nd Generationのお求めにはwww.icmarkets.com をお勧めしております。lcmarketsの取引通貨のプロファイルも追加させていただきましたので、lcmarketsのbrokerをお使いであれば、下記の要領でプロファイルを読み込んでくださいますようお願いいたします。

Vergil Day TraderがインストールされたMT4を開いてください。

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これからVergil Day Trader 2nd Generationをお送りいたします。
有効化する必要のあるアカウントをお知らせください。

我々としてはVergil Day Trader 2nd Generationのお求めにはwww.icmarkets.com をお勧めしております。lcmarketsの取引通貨のプロファイルも追加させていただきましたので、lcmarketsのbrokerをお使いであれば、下記の要領でプロファイルを読み込んでくださいますようお願いいたします。

Vergil Day TraderがインストールされたMT4を開いてください。

元の翻訳
Thank you for message.
The product was shipped in June 25th.
As I shipped by SAL, many time takes.
Please accept this.

I'm sorry for inconvenience.

Thank you for message.
I'm sorry for not arrival of the product.
About product, I confirmed as soon as possible and found it returned back to our place.
I shipped by AIR again.
I'm sorry for inconvenience.

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Thank you for your message.
The product was shipped on June 25th.
As I shipped by SAL, it takes long.
Please accept this.

I'm sorry for inconvenience.

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry that the product has not arrived yet.
About product, I confirmed as soon as possible and found it returned back to our place.
I shipped by AIR again.
I'm sorry for inconvenience.

元の翻訳
I appreciate your email. The good news is, I have finally become the advisor of A at last.
Aside of this, my strong committment towards the contribution to your company has remained the same as ever. I would be more than happy if we could discuss about this matter by all means. I will leave my schedule open in the afternoon of 10th, so please specify your available time and venue.
Looking forward to seeing you very soon.

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I appreciate your email. The good news is, I have finally become the advisor of A at last.
Aside of this, my strong committment towards the contribution to your company has remained the same as ever. I would be more than happy if we could discuss this matter by all means. I will leave my schedule open in the afternoon of 10th, so please specify your available time and venue.
Looking forward to seeing you very soon.

元の翻訳
I corresponded to an exhibitor by an email immediately, and all the exhibition products deleted it. Thank you for your cooperation.

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I replied to the seller by email immediately, and all the listed products were deleted. Thank you for your cooperation.

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We are the business group who professionally develops nice business articles of the world on the market by ultra marketing know-how.
We make the E.C. site which matches the image and the target of the business articles and I do my best in gathering customers, sale and after-sale service .
Or we can approach any sale root and any sale promotion medium for example making store on wholesale, a wholesale firm, a department store, an actual store, a magazine, a press and an exhibition and a gift show of a most scale in Japan.

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We are a business group who professionally introduces nice products around the world to the market with our cutting edge marketing know-how.
We build E.C. sites which match the image and the target of products and we do our best on attracting customers, sales and after-sale service .
In addition, we can approach any channel and sales promotion medium, such as wholesale dealers, department stores, brick and mortar stores, magazines, presses and one of the biggest exhibition/gift show in Japan.

元の翻訳
I am afraid that I sent you the wrong email.

We currently have stocks so that I would like to ship it as you ordered, is it okay for you to ship it?

If it's okay, I would like you to contact me.

Also we are planning to ship it on June 20th.

It takes about 4 days from your address.

Thank you.

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I am afraid what I told you on my previous email was wrong.

We currently have stocks, so we would like to ship it as you ordered, is it okay for you?

If it's okay, would you please contact me?.

Also we are planning to ship it on June 20th.

It takes about 4 days from here to your address.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Is this watches diamond were custom made?↵
or usual design?

http://www.ebay.com/itm/Mens-Audemars-Piguet-Royal-Oak-Offshore-Diamonds-Everywhere-Display-Model-/310973357153

is this new?
Any damage?
オーデマピゲwarranty and box will include this?
please tell me width of belt and face size.

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Are the diamonds on this watch custom made or the originally designed?

http://www.ebay.com/itm/Mens-Audemars-Piguet-Royal-Oak-Offshore-Diamonds-Everywhere-Display-Model-/310973357153

is this new?
Any damage?
Are Audemars Piguet certificate and the box included?
please tell me the width of the belt and the face size.

元の翻訳
ｓｐ1511
納得できません。注文前から2つ在庫があったのは昨日から明らかです。
最初の注文を取り消したのは、送り先の住所が間違っていたからです。そのため、正しい住所で再注文しました。貴社は、在庫について単なる言い訳をしているように思えます。
2日前にも在庫を確認しており、まだ1つ在庫があることはわかっています。
私の息子は8月の誕生日にこの商品を楽しみにしており、昨日は息子に一番欲しかったおもちゃを注文しよたと伝えたところです。
アマゾンにできないなんて信じられません。たくさんの商品をこのサイトから前にも以前にも購入しているのですから。

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ｓｐ1511
納得できません。注文前から2つ在庫があったのは昨日から明らかです。
最初の注文を取り消したのは、送り先の住所が間違っていたからです。そのため、正しい住所で再注文しました。貴社は、在庫について単なる言い訳をしているように思えます。
2日前にも在庫を確認しており、まだ1つ在庫があることはわかっています。
私の息子は8月の誕生日にこの商品を楽しみにしており、昨日は息子に一番欲しかったおもちゃを注文しよたと伝えたところです。
アマゾンがこんなことをするなんて信じられません。たくさんの商品をこのサイトから前にも以前にも購入しているのですから。

元の翻訳
*Please obey the instructions of persons in charge in the venue. In addition, persons in charge may touch a shoulder or the arm of participants when they derive participants.
*For prevention of an accidents and confusion, we may arrange various limits such as limits of the access line on that day depending on the need.
*Please note that we as the host cannot take all responsibility for the last train time after end of the event.
*We do not receive letters and presents and set of present BOX in the venue,.
*Please note that you are not allowed to enter the venue and participate in the event with drinking or under the influence of alcohol.

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*Please follow the instructions of persons in charge in the venue. In addition, persons in charge may touch shoulders or arms of participants when they derive participants.
*For prevention of accidents or confusion, we may arrange various limits such as limits of access lines on that day depending on the need.
*Please note that we as the host cannot take all responsibility for the last train time after end of the event.
*We do not receive letters or presents and do not set present BOX in the venue,.
*Please note that you are not allowed to enter the venue and participate in the event with drinking or under the influence of alcohol.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for the duplicated emails.
I would like to change the value of :attribute in abc.php from English to Japanese. Kindly let me know which file I should modify with the change.
*Kindly find the attached images for your information.
Best regards,

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I am sorry for the frequent emails.
I would like to change the value of :attribute in abc.php from English to Japanese. Kindly let me know which file I should modify.
*Kindly find the attached images for your information.
Best regards,

元の翻訳
いくつかのルートからガラス製のものを注文しなければならないようですが、ほとんど全部到着してしまいました。6月16日月曜日に到着予定のものがもう1つあります。この注文だけにからんでＨＤ1201が1ペア足りないという連絡をうけました。ＨＤ800やＨＤ801であれば余剰在庫があるので、この注文を完了させるための代替のペアということで可能であればそのようにしたいと思いますがいかがでしょうか？

それから、弊社の昔のバックオーダー分がついに供給元から月曜日に発送されるとのこと。その1セットのグラスぶんの代替として対応可のうであればご連絡ください。現状残っている注文を全て来週月曜日までに完了させたいと考えています。

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いくつかのルートからメガネを注文しなければならなかったようですが、ほとんど全部到着してしまいました。6月16日月曜日に到着予定のものがもう1つあります。この注文だけにからんでＨＤ1201が1ペア足りないという連絡をうけました。ＨＤ800やＨＤ801であれば余剰在庫があるので、この注文を完了させるための代替のペアということで可能であればそのようにしたいと思いますがいかがでしょうか？

それから、弊社の昔のバックオーダー分がついに供給元から月曜日に発送されるとのこと。その1セットのメガネぶんの代替として対応可のうであればご連絡ください。現状残っている注文を全て来週月曜日までに完了させたいと考えています。

元の翻訳
It says, the account registration was completed on June 7th from Japan... but I receive no approval notice. What is going on? Please RSVP ASAP. My e-mail address is xxx.

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Hello, this is (...). I had registered my account from Japan on June 7th, but I haven't received any approval notice. What is going on? Please RSVP ASAP. My e-mail address is xxx.

元の翻訳
I am writing to let you know there is some error in registered information.

We are going join the conference with a group of total three people.
The member is as follows.

XXXX

I have just now registered myself through your URL address. Please kindly confirm.

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I am writing to let you know there is some error in registered information.

We are going to join the conference with a group of total three people.
The member are as follows.

XXXX

I have just now registered myself through your URL address. Please kindly confirm.

元の翻訳
Research theme
Until the last survey, we conducted a survey on speed and distance, and then obtained a result for us to consider of using a variety of methods.
However, there is a question that can not be avoided when we examine more specific scene to use it: "Does the radio waves of iBeacon penetrate a building or a person?" So, as the last fourth research, we are going to experiment on "transparent" of the iBacon radio wave.

Research summary
This research intercept obstacles of various materials between the originating beacon terminal and the receiving iPhone5S and experiment if they can notify each other.

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Research theme
Until last survey, we conducted surveys on speed and distance, and then obtained some results for us to consider of a variety of usage.
However, there is a question that can not be avoided when we examine more specific scene to use it: "Does the radio waves of iBeacon penetrate buildings or human bodies?" So, as the last fourth research, we are going to experiment on "transmittance" of the iBacon radio wave.

Experiment overview
To put obstacles made of various materials between the originating beacon terminal and the receiving iPhone5S and experiment if they can notify each other.

元の翻訳
40 km/h: reception impossible
Or no reception impossible at all when moving?

Finally, we tried 30 km/h, which we didn't expect any good news.

Wow, one receiver did receive!
The first success in 30 km/h!
Why the one terminal received, depending on reception terminals?
We've got some issues to be clarified, but this success is really surprising and amazing.
If we consider the usage below this velocity, a slow-driving cars, for example advertising trucks, motorized bicycle, etc. may send the signal.

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40 km/h: reception impossible.
Or no reception is possible at all when moving?

Finally, we tried 30 km/h, which we didn't expect any good news.

Wow, one terminal did receive!
The first success in 30 km/h!
Why could just one terminal receive? Is there any dependence on reception terminals?
We've got some issues to be clarified, but this success is an important outcome.
If we consider usages below this velocity, slow-driving cars like advertising trucks, motorized bicycle, etc. could send the signal.