73nyanko (73nyanko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Could I purchase 'Tour Issue RBZ "P"Version 8.0 Head' which you currently offer on ebay?
If it possible, I would like to get 10 of them. But if you don't have so much, I would like to have all what you have.

I appreciate your consideration.
Also, please inform me the price (inclusive shipping cost) if you know it.

Thank you.

修正後
Could I purchase 'Tour Issue RBZ "P"Version 8.0 Head' which you currently offer on ebay?
If possible, I would like to get 10 of them. But if you don't have that many, I would like to have all that you have.

I appreciate your consideration.
Also, please inform me of the price (including shipping cost) if you know it.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
・Please use the words which is stated on our web site when you want to describe something on our commodities or explanation.

・If you are asked to modify or delete the statement about us on your web site from us, you must obey it as much as you can.

・You are not allowed to do anything which make other people confuse with other EC shops.

・You must not present untrue information about us.

・You are not allowed to make any further commission contract with other companies.

・When you get questions or requests on the sword (ken katana) please inform us as soon as possible.

修正後
・Please use the words which are stated on our web site when you want to describe something for our commodities or explanations.

・If you are asked by us to modify or delete the statement about us on your web site, you must do so to the best of your ability.

・You are not allowed to do anything which makes other people confused with other EC shops.

・You must not present untrue information about us.

・You are not allowed to make any further commission contracts with other companies.

・When you get questions or requests on the sword (ken katana) please inform us as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
If you can admit those conditions, you may allow to make contracts with our members.

Thank you for your understanding.

Beside, please tell us the appropriate sizes of the pictures to put them on your web site. It takes a while but we prepare for it.

It is not simple to explain the price of the sword, but if you want only the Shirosaya (the sham which you can stick the sword in it), we can offer it from 13000 dollars.

We need 6 month to 1 year to make them.

If you only want Shirosaya, we can prepare it for 6 month. But if you want to have more improvements on such as saya or gaku, it might take 1 year to make those.

修正後
If you can admit those conditions, you may allow to make contracts with our members.

Thank you for your understanding.

Beside, please tell us the appropriate sizes of the pictures to put on your web site. It takes a while but we will prepare for it.

It is not simple to explain the price of the sword, but if you want only the Shirosaya (the sham which you can stick the sword in it), we can offer it from 13,000 dollars.

We need 6 months to 1 year to make them.

If you only want Shirosaya, we can prepare it in 6 months. But if you want to have more improvements on such as saya or gaku, it might take 1 year to make those.

元の翻訳
ブラジルのベロオリゾンテ。この場所のサッカー博物館にて重要な歴史的事実が思い起こされるだろう。スポーツファンは州最大級のサッカー場「ミネイロン」にて、真のスポーツである「ミネイロ」の記録に出会うことができる。このアイディアは連合カップとブラジルワールドカップのために発案され、「ミネリア」人口と観光客はこのスポーツの歴史を守っていくのに一躍かっている。（さらに博物館はスタジアムのすぐそば！）

修正後
ブラジルのベロオリゾンテ。この場所のサッカー博物館にて重要な歴史的事実が思い起こされるだろう。スポーツファンは州最大級のサッカー場「ミネイロン」にて、真のスポーツである「ミネイロ」の記録に出会うことができる。このアイディアは連合カップとブラジルワールドカップのために発案され、「ミネリア」住民と観光客はこのスポーツの歴史を守っていくのに一躍かっている。（さらに博物館はスタジアムのすぐそば！）