Kiraline (413kiraline_) — 付けたレビュー

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I am sorry that the delivery of the product did not reach you by estimated date.

Usually, the product should be delivered in a week since shipping.

The possible reason for arrival delay of the product is that the procedure of the customs clearance has been taking long time.

Canada's custom clearance takes too much time.

If you hope to cancel, I will give you a full refund.

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I am sorry that the delivery of the product did not reach you by the estimated date.

Usually, the product should be delivered within a week after shipping.

The possible reason for arrival delay of the product is that the procedure of customs clearance has been taking long time.

Canada's custom clearance takes a lot of time.

If you wish to cancel, I will give you a full refund.

元の翻訳
I was relieved that the product is safely arrived.
Please let me know if there are any products you are looking for.
I can search products for you even if they are not on my Ebay list.
Let's build a good relationship.

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I was relieved to hear that the product had arrived safely.
Please let me know if there are any other products you are looking for.
I can search those products for you even if they are not on my Ebay list.
Let's continue to build a good relationship.

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Do you mean that you want XX with $200?

It's hard for us to take this proposal.
It will become a deficit.

We can sell it with $XX without a shipping fee.

This is pretty special price since we've had a business before.
Please consider our proposal.

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Do you mean that you want XX for $200?

It's hard for us to take this proposal.
It will become a deficit.

We can sell it with $XX without shipping fee.

This is a very special offer since we've done business with you before.
Please consider our proposal.

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Today, December 3rd (Wednesday), We released a new single "Fureaudakede -Always with you- / IT'S THE RIGHT TIME"! (Fureaudakede : By only touching you.)

It contains a "Fureaudakede - Always with you-" which is a long waited CD of NIVEA brand TV-CM song in 2014, a "IT'S THE RIGHT TIME" which is the ending theme of a rumored TV anime show called "KiseiJu Sei no kakuritsu" and also a "Bring it Down" which is a main theme of d video original drama, "Hung".

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Today, December 3rd (Wednesday), We are releasing a new single "Fureaudakede -Always with you- / IT'S THE RIGHT TIME"! (Fureaudakede : By only touching you.)

It contains "Fureaudakede - Always with you-" which is a long waited CD of NIVEA brand TV-CM song in 2014, "IT'S THE RIGHT TIME" which is the ending theme of a rumored TV anime show called "KiseiJu Sei no kakuritsu" and also "Bring it Down" which is the main theme song of the d video original drama, "Hung".

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With regard to the lessen scheduled at a cafe in Shinjuku on Sept 1, could I postpone it?
Things at work has started getting busy all of the sudden, and I am likely to be working on weekends until the end of Oct.
I was supposed to take a trip to Singapore next month, but it's likely to be cancelled...
I will get in touch with you once things started going back to normal. If our schedue meet then, I would like to take your lesson again.
I am very sorry for the inconvenience caused.
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Could you please schedule a lesson for me from 14:00 on 9/6, or 18:00 on 9/7? Would the venue be okay to meet you at ~ station?

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With regard to the lesson scheduled at a cafe in Shinjuku on Sept 1, could I postpone it?
Things at work has started getting busy all of a sudden, and I am likely to be working on weekends until the end of Oct.
I was supposed to take a trip to Singapore next month, but it's likely to be cancelled...
I will get in touch with you once things start getting back to normal. If our schedules meet then, I would like to take your lesson again.
I am very sorry for the inconvenience caused.
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Could you please schedule a lesson for me from 14:00 on 9/6, or 18:00 on 9/7? Would the venue be okay to meet you at ~ station?

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Thank you for your reply.
As I thought you would not be able to help out I tried all sorts of things today and have fixed it myself. Sorry for the trouble.
I think it was a bug, so for the sake of others, next update please fix it.

It is really a wonderful script. When I put the cocnonical tag on Twitter and share the post it's great. Even as it is now I'm really happy with it.

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Thank you for your reply.
As I thought you would not be able to help out I tried all sorts of things today and have fixed it myself. Sorry for the trouble.
I think it was a bug, so for the sake of others, please fix it in the next update.

It really is a wonderful script. It would be great if I can put the cocnonical tag on and share it on Twitter too . But even as it is now I'm really happy with it.

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The peeling on the bridge is clearly an initial defect of the maker. I sent the guitar to be able to receive the repair warranty of the maker, but it is not possible to receive the warranty so it did not make any sense. The guitar that was sent back to me was not repaired nor improved and since the condition became worst so that is the reason why I was seriously in doubt if it was really repaired by Taylor. I will send the guitar by next week so can you kindly issue the refund? I would not be requiring an exchange for the product.

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The peeling on the bridge is clearly an initial defect of the maker. I sent the guitar to be able to receive the repair warranty of the maker, but it is not possible to receive the warranty so it did not make any sense. The guitar that was sent back to me was not repaired nor improved and since the condition became worse, that is the reason why I was seriously in doubt if it was really repaired by Taylor. I will send the guitar to arrive by sometime next week so can you kindly issue the refund? I would not be requiring an exchange for the product.