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rated this translation result as ★★★★★ French → Japanese 18 Feb 2015 at 15:10
Comment 正しく翻訳されています。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 18 Feb 2015 at 08:43
Comment ビジネス向きの言葉選びをされるともう少し整理されるかと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 15 Feb 2015 at 16:00
original This Trucking number's package has been delivered on 13th. I havre already received three Rugs in this order. But the number of Rug i had ordered is totally 5 Rugs. Two more Rugs have not arrived yet. In addition only 3 Rugs had been shipped on the UPS Trucking Detail. Could you please ask vendor to ship them out as soon as possible. I want to receive them until 19th February at the latest. Please deal with this problem urgently. I have not received you yet for a long time. I am waiting for your reply.	corrected This Trucking [word confusion] number's package was delivered on the 13th. I havre [spelling] already received three rugs in this order. But the number of rugs I ordered is 5 in total. Two remaining rugs have not arrived yet. In addition, only 3 rugs have been shipped on the UPS Trucking [word confusion] Detail. Could you please ask the vendor to ship them out as soon as possible? I want to receive them before February 19 at the latest. Please deal with this problem urgently. I have not heard from you for a long time. I am waiting for your reply.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

15 Feb 2015 at 16:00

original
This Trucking number's package has been delivered on 13th.

I havre already received three Rugs in this order.
But the number of Rug i had ordered is totally 5 Rugs.
Two more Rugs have not arrived yet.
In addition only 3 Rugs had been shipped on the UPS Trucking Detail.
Could you please ask vendor to ship them out as soon as possible.
I want to receive them until 19th February at the latest.

Please deal with this problem urgently.
I have not received you yet for a long time.
I am waiting for your reply.

corrected
This Trucking [word confusion] number's package was delivered on the 13th.

I havre [spelling] already received three rugs in this order.
But the number of rugs I ordered is 5 in total.
Two remaining rugs have not arrived yet.
In addition, only 3 rugs have been shipped on the UPS Trucking [word confusion] Detail.
Could you please ask the vendor to ship them out as soon as possible?
I want to receive them before February 19 at the latest.

Please deal with this problem urgently.
I have not heard from you for a long time.
I am waiting for your reply.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 11 Feb 2015 at 10:09
original 18:00 (開場） 18:30-21:00 (詩評会 & 表彰） 21:00-22:30 (ジャズ & パーティー）参加費：2000円 (フリードリンクと商品抽選券込み）詩評会とは？詩人のグループが彼らの最も優秀な作品をマイクパフォーマンスで読み上げます。観客はどちらの詩がよかったか投票します。詩の世界だけでなく、詩のセッションの後には引き続いて生のジャズバンド「横浜サウンドスケープ」も用意しております。そして、さらに！詩の賞品に加え、観客の中から私たちの次回のショーのチケットが当たる商品抽選会があります。３月21日の土曜の夜はもう決まり、我々の最もファンキーで、最もジャズで、最も詩的なパーティーはに是非参加ください。	corrected 18:00 (開場） 18:30-21:00 (詩評会 & 表彰） 21:00-22:30 (ジャズ & パーティー）参加費：2000円 (フリードリンクと商品抽選券込み）詩評会とは？詩人のグループが彼らの最も優秀な作品をマイクパフォーマンスで読み上げます。観客はどちらの詩がよかったか投票します。詩の世界だけでなく、詩のセッションの後には引き続いて生のジャズバンド「横浜サウンドスケープ」も用意しております。そして、さらに！詩の賞品に加え、観客の中から私たちの次回のショーのチケットが当たる商品抽選会があります。３月21日の土曜の夜はもう決まり、我々の最もファンキーで、最もジャズで、最も詩的なパーティーに是非参加ください。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese

11 Feb 2015 at 10:09

original
18:00 (開場）
18:30-21:00 (詩評会 & 表彰）
21:00-22:30 (ジャズ & パーティー）
参加費：2000円 (フリードリンクと商品抽選券込み）

詩評会とは？詩人のグループが彼らの最も優秀な作品をマイクパフォーマンスで読み上げます。観客はどちらの詩がよかったか投票します。

詩の世界だけでなく、詩のセッションの後には引き続いて生のジャズバンド「横浜サウンドスケープ」も用意しております。

そして、さらに！詩の賞品に加え、観客の中から私たちの次回のショーのチケットが当たる商品抽選会があります。

３月21日の土曜の夜はもう決まり、我々の最もファンキーで、最もジャズで、最も詩的なパーティーはに是非参加ください。

corrected
18:00 (開場）
18:30-21:00 (詩評会 & 表彰）
21:00-22:30 (ジャズ & パーティー）
参加費：2000円 (フリードリンクと商品抽選券込み）

詩評会とは？詩人のグループが彼らの最も優秀な作品をマイクパフォーマンスで読み上げます。観客はどちらの詩がよかったか投票します。

詩の世界だけでなく、詩のセッションの後には引き続いて生のジャズバンド「横浜サウンドスケープ」も用意しております。

そして、さらに！詩の賞品に加え、観客の中から私たちの次回のショーのチケットが当たる商品抽選会があります。

３月21日の土曜の夜はもう決まり、我々の最もファンキーで、最もジャズで、最も詩的なパーティーに是非参加ください。

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 18 Feb 2015 at 23:16
Comment 「直感的なアピール」は、直感的には人の心を動かす力、とかがいいかも。「99.coが検索結果や検索リストの中でいの一番に家を提供したい、家を貸したいとした方法の中に直感的なアピールがある」は、 99.coがいかに、その検索結果や検索リストで、いの一番に家や借り手を探し...

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 05 Feb 2015 at 10:19
original ４.スタートアップの強固なコミュニティー：eコマースにおける約束の範囲を超えて、中小企業はよりユビキタスとなっている。スタートアップを含むこれらの企業はベトナム経済の90％を超える割合を占めている。政府が2013年に中小企業の発展を支援するためにファンドをローンチした時、この年の終わりには新しい会社の数が350,000社に到達するだろうとして計画された。これらのトレンドは制度上のサポートをより素晴らしいものにするだけでなく、ネットワークと同様にスタートアップがオペレーションを拡充するためのより多様な展望を示している。	corrected ４.スタートアップの強固なコミュニティー：eコマースにおける約束の範囲を超えて、中小企業はよりユビキタス（至る所にある）となっている。スタートアップを含むこれらの企業はベトナム経済の90％を超える割合を占めている。政府が2013年に中小企業の発展を支援するためにファンドをローンチした時、この年の終わりには新しい会社の数が350,000社に到達するだろうとして計画された。これらのトレンドは制度上のサポートをより素晴らしいものにするだけでなく、ネットワークと同様にスタートアップがオペレーションを拡充するためのより多様な展望を示している。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

05 Feb 2015 at 10:19

original
４.スタートアップの強固なコミュニティー：eコマースにおける約束の範囲を超えて、中小企業はよりユビキタスとなっている。スタートアップを含むこれらの企業はベトナム経済の90％を超える割合を占めている。政府が2013年に中小企業の発展を支援するためにファンドをローンチした時、この年の終わりには新しい会社の数が350,000社に到達するだろうとして計画された。これらのトレンドは制度上のサポートをより素晴らしいものにするだけでなく、ネットワークと同様にスタートアップがオペレーションを拡充するためのより多様な展望を示している。

corrected
４.スタートアップの強固なコミュニティー：eコマースにおける約束の範囲を超えて、中小企業はよりユビキタス（至る所にある）となっている。スタートアップを含むこれらの企業はベトナム経済の90％を超える割合を占めている。政府が2013年に中小企業の発展を支援するためにファンドをローンチした時、この年の終わりには新しい会社の数が350,000社に到達するだろうとして計画された。これらのトレンドは制度上のサポートをより素晴らしいものにするだけでなく、ネットワークと同様にスタートアップがオペレーションを拡充するためのより多様な展望を示している。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 02 Feb 2015 at 14:33
Comment Very good!!

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 20 Jan 2015 at 16:14
original カシマさん私たちは今インビクタージャパンのウェブサイトで働いてるということをご理解お願い致します。来月はご都合よろしいでしょうか？私たちは添付のモデルのためにアマゾンジャパンでよい販促活動をしようと進めております。参考までに敬具	corrected カシマさま私たちは今インビクタージャパンのウェブサイトに取り組んでおります旨、ご理解お願い致します。来月には準備が整う予定です。またアマゾンジャパンにおいて添付モデルの販促活動もしようと進めております。ご参考まで敬具

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 18 Jan 2015 at 12:02
original カシマさん私たちは今インビクタージャパンのウェブサイトで働いてるということをご理解お願い致します。来月はご都合よろしいでしょうか？私たちは添付のモデルのためにアマゾンジャパンでよい販促活動をしようと進めております。参考までに敬具	corrected カシマさん私たちは今インビクタージャパンのウェブサイトで働いてるということをご理解お願い致します。来月には準備ができます。私たちは添付のモデルのためにアマゾンジャパンでよい販促活動をしようと進めております。参考までに敬具

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 18 Jan 2015 at 12:43
original we just refunded (). We are sorry for our mistakes about arrangement. We will take it more carefully in the future. Could you please change your estimation to positive one with the request we send you. We apologize it. Touch panel doesn't work. The part of cassette doesn't work. Please tender as for investigation and for the parts. Zoom functions	corrected We have just refunded (). Please accept our apologies for the inconvenience caused by our oversight. We will take it [unclear antecedent] more carefully in the future. Could you please change your evaluation to a positive one with the request we send [tense confusion] you? We apologize. [article missing] Touch panel doesn't work. The part of cassette doesn't work. Please tender as for investigation and for the parts [unclear]. Zoom functions.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

18 Jan 2015 at 12:43

original
we just refunded ().
We are sorry for our mistakes about arrangement.
We will take it more carefully in the future.
Could you please change your estimation to positive one with the request we send you.
We apologize it.

Touch panel doesn't work.
The part of cassette doesn't work.
Please tender as for investigation and for the parts.
Zoom functions

corrected
We have just refunded ().
Please accept our apologies for the inconvenience caused by our oversight.
We will take it [unclear antecedent] more carefully in the future.
Could you please change your evaluation to a positive one with the request we send [tense confusion] you?
We apologize.

[article missing] Touch panel doesn't work.
The part of cassette doesn't work.
Please tender as for investigation and for the parts [unclear].
Zoom functions.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 18 Jan 2015 at 14:38
original thank you for contacting us about G company's guitar. we never intend to invade the trademark right. we will list up the goods according to the policy of eBay. for our reference , could you please let us know which models are invaded? on the eBay there are a lot of guitar. we want you to advise us not to sell the guitar which the trademark right invaded without noticing it.	corrected Thank you for contacting us about G company's guitar. We never intend to invade [word choice] the trademark right. We will list up items according to the policy of eBay. For our reference, could you please let us know which models are invaded [word choice] [incomplete]? On eBay there are a lot of guitars [incomplete]. We want you to advise us not to sell a guitar which the trademark right invaded without noticing it [unclear, awkward].

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

18 Jan 2015 at 14:38

original
thank you for contacting us about G company's guitar.
we never intend to invade the trademark right.
we will list up the goods according to the policy of eBay.

for our reference , could you please let us know which models are invaded?

on the eBay there are a lot of guitar.
we want you to advise us not to sell the guitar which the trademark right invaded without noticing it.

corrected
Thank you for contacting us about G company's guitar.
We never intend to invade [word choice] the trademark right.
We will list up items according to the policy of eBay.

For our reference, could you please let us know which models are invaded [word choice] [incomplete]?

On eBay there are a lot of guitars [incomplete].
We want you to advise us not to sell a guitar which the trademark right invaded without noticing it [unclear, awkward].

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 18 Jan 2015 at 09:10
original Thank you for contacting us. I am sorry not to reach your goods to you in time. Please inform us in case you won't receive it until next week. I am sure to refund you the cost you already paid as soon as possible. I promise you to take care with sincerely to finish our contract. Surely you can get back the cost already paid in case you won't get it after some week. Thank you for buying the goods in my shop.	corrected Thank you for contacting us. I am sorry for having failed to deliver your order to you on time. Please inform us in case you won't receive it until next week. I will issue you a refund immediately. I promise you to take care [object missing] with sincerely to finish our contract [awkward]. Surely you can get back the cost already paid [unnatural] in case you won't receive it after some week [unclear]. Thank you for buying the goods in my shop.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

18 Jan 2015 at 09:10

original
Thank you for contacting us.
I am sorry not to reach your goods to you in time.
Please inform us in case you won't receive it until next week.
I am sure to refund you the cost you already paid as soon as possible.
I promise you to take care with sincerely to finish our contract.

Surely you can get back the cost already paid in case you won't get it after some week.
Thank you for buying the goods in my shop.

corrected
Thank you for contacting us.
I am sorry for having failed to deliver your order to you on time.
Please inform us in case you won't receive it until next week.
I will issue you a refund immediately.
I promise you to take care [object missing] with sincerely to finish our contract [awkward].

Surely you can get back the cost already paid [unnatural] in case you won't receive it after some week [unclear].
Thank you for buying the goods in my shop.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 18 Jan 2015 at 09:13
original sorry for my late reply. we can delivery it to you for 3 or 5days from us when this shipment pass the customs clearance smoothly. please consider it. best regards	corrected Sorry for my late reply. We can delivery it to you in 3-5 days if this shipment pass [s-v agreement] customs smoothly. Please consider it. Best regards

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