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rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 28 Jul 2014 at 14:39
Comment 和訳経験の浅い、あるいは業界に不慣れな方でしょうか。失礼お許し下さい。カタカナの表記や和訳された単語の誤用が多く見られます。日本語が一応ネイティブの私でさえもこちらの和訳は多々ご指南をいただくことがあるので、おそらくスポンサー様もこの内容では辟易されてしまうとおもいます。日...

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese

28 Jul 2014 at 14:39

Comment
和訳経験の浅い、あるいは業界に不慣れな方でしょうか。失礼お許し下さい。カタカナの表記や和訳された単語の誤用が多く見られます。日本語が一応ネイティブの私でさえもこちらの和訳は多々ご指南をいただくことがあるので、おそらくスポンサー様もこの内容では辟易されてしまうとおもいます。日...

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 30 Jul 2014 at 19:04
original By the way, there were 5 messages about ● from me to you And on the 17/4 that I sent you I would wish to buy ● from you again. Not A's ● but B's ● I think I will attach the photos so could you kindly confirm? Please kindly tell me if there are still stocks available for the product. As I would like to buy the product again. Thank you very much, I am regretful as I am currently in Japan, the postage is going to be higher. However, I am really satisfied with your responses. Do you have not A's ● but B's ●. When I buy this time round, I would be really glad if it could be cheaper.	corrected By the way, there were 5 deals of ● with you And on the 17/4 that I sent you I would wish to buy ● from you again. Not A's ● but B's ● I think I will attach the photos so could you kindly confirm? Please kindly tell me if there are still stocks available for the product. As I would like to buy the product again. Thank you very much, I am regretful as I am currently in Japan, the postage is going to be higher. However, I am really satisfied with your responses. Do you have not A's ● but B's ●. When I buy this time round, I would be really glad if it could be cheaper.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

30 Jul 2014 at 19:04

original
By the way, there were 5 messages about ● from me to you
And on the 17/4 that I sent you I would wish to buy ● from you again.
Not A's ● but B's ● I think
I will attach the photos so could you kindly confirm?
Please kindly tell me if there are still stocks available for the product.
As I would like to buy the product again.
Thank you very much,

I am regretful as I am currently in Japan, the postage is going to be higher.
However, I am really satisfied with your responses.
Do you have not A's ● but B's ●.

When I buy this time round, I would be really glad if it could be cheaper.

corrected
By the way, there were 5 deals of ● with you
And on the 17/4 that I sent you I would wish to buy ● from you again.
Not A's ● but B's ● I think
I will attach the photos so could you kindly confirm?
Please kindly tell me if there are still stocks available for the product.
As I would like to buy the product again.
Thank you very much,

I am regretful as I am currently in Japan, the postage is going to be higher.
However, I am really satisfied with your responses.
Do you have not A's ● but B's ●.

When I buy this time round, I would be really glad if it could be cheaper.

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 30 Jul 2014 at 14:05
original 6th November (Wednesday) Limited Edition Koda Kumi's [Happy Love Song Collection 2014] album would be released! 6th November (Wednesday) Limited Edition Koda Kumi's [Happy Love Song Collection 2014] album will be released! Koda Kumi's June Bride and ten famous songs that people would love to hear in summer hear are all in this album. Limited Edition delivery lasts till 26 August 2014	corrected 11th June (Wednesday) Limited Edition Koda Kumi's [Happy Love Song Collection 2014] album would be released! 11th June (Wednesday) Limited Edition Koda Kumi's [Happy Love Song Collection 2014] album will be released! Koda Kumi's June Bride and ten famous songs that people would love to hear in summer hear are all in this album. Limited Edition delivery lasts till 26 August 2014

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 30 Jul 2014 at 13:13
Comment Perfect. The translator did it according to client specifications - great job!

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 30 Jul 2014 at 23:02
Comment seems to have no mistakes.

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 30 Jul 2014 at 02:41
original お客の糾問をウェインさん（CC）におわたしになります。あの方は本社の製造者で働いて、日本の卸業者の連絡先が上げてくださいます。	corrected 誰が何をするのか、少し分かりにくいです。↵ 敬語の使い方「なります」「くださいます」にミスがあるので、誰がすることなのかsubjectが変わってしまいました。↵ 相手がすることか、自分がすることか、敬語によって変わってしまいます。↵ ↵ お客の糾問を↵ ＞お客様のお問い合わせを↵ 「お客」はcustomer、「お客」をyouで呼ぶときは「お客様」。↵ ↵ ウェインさん（CC）におわたしになります。↵ ＞ウェインさんにCCで転送いたします。↵ forward＝「転送する」。↵ 「わたす」は、メールではなく直接手であげること。↵ 「V　になります」は、自分がすることには使わない。↵ ↵ あの方は本社の製造者で働いて、↵ ＞弊社の腕時計の製造を担当なので、↵ Heは訳さないほうが自然、もしくは名前で「ウェインさんは」。↵ watchが抜けている。↵ 「製造者」は実際に製造している人、もしくは会社。この場合、ウェインさんは会社の中で製造に関する担当をしていると考える方が自然。↵ ↵ 日本の卸業者の↵ ＞日本の販売業者の↵ distributor＝「販売店、販売業者」↵ 「卸売業者」はwholesaler。↵ ↵ 連絡先が上げてくださいます。↵ ＞直接の連絡先をお伝えできます。↵ provideを「あげる」にしたのでしょうか。「あげる」と「上げる」は意味が違います。giveの「あげる」は漢字を使いません。↵ この場合は、実際にものを「あげる」わけでなく、連絡先をメールで教えるという内容なので、「伝える」がいいと思います。↵ 「V　くださる」は、自分や自分のグループの人がすることに使わない。↵ ↵ ↵

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese

30 Jul 2014 at 02:41

original
お客の糾問をウェインさん（CC）におわたしになります。あの方は本社の製造者で働いて、日本の卸業者の連絡先が上げてくださいます。

corrected
誰が何をするのか、少し分かりにくいです。↵
敬語の使い方「なります」「くださいます」にミスがあるので、誰がすることなのかsubjectが変わってしまいました。↵
相手がすることか、自分がすることか、敬語によって変わってしまいます。↵
↵
お客の糾問を↵
＞お客様のお問い合わせを↵
「お客」はcustomer、「お客」をyouで呼ぶときは「お客様」。↵
↵
ウェインさん（CC）におわたしになります。↵
＞ウェインさんにCCで転送いたします。↵
forward＝「転送する」。↵
「わたす」は、メールではなく直接手であげること。↵
「V　になります」は、自分がすることには使わない。↵
↵
あの方は本社の製造者で働いて、↵
＞弊社の腕時計の製造を担当なので、↵
Heは訳さないほうが自然、もしくは名前で「ウェインさんは」。↵
watchが抜けている。↵
「製造者」は実際に製造している人、もしくは会社。この場合、ウェインさんは会社の中で製造に関する担当をしていると考える方が自然。↵
↵
日本の卸業者の↵
＞日本の販売業者の↵
distributor＝「販売店、販売業者」↵
「卸売業者」はwholesaler。↵
↵
連絡先が上げてくださいます。↵
＞直接の連絡先をお伝えできます。↵
provideを「あげる」にしたのでしょうか。「あげる」と「上げる」は意味が違います。giveの「あげる」は漢字を使いません。↵
この場合は、実際にものを「あげる」わけでなく、連絡先をメールで教えるという内容なので、「伝える」がいいと思います。↵
「V　くださる」は、自分や自分のグループの人がすることに使わない。↵
↵
↵

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 30 Jul 2014 at 10:34
original Thank you for your reply It would be shipped out today. Lastly, I would like to confirm the model that would be sent this time is （200001.200003）, as the attached photos, there would be metal fixtures.	corrected Thank you for your reply Kindly, please make sure to ship It out today. Lastly, I would like to confirm the model that would be shipped this time （200001.200003）, is provided with a metal part to use it as a standing type as described by the the attached photo.↵ ↵ We look forward to hearing from you.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 29 Jul 2014 at 11:37
original Thank you for your reply It would be shipped out today. Lastly, I would like to confirm the model that would be sent this time is （200001.200003）, as the attached photos, there would be metal fixtures.	corrected Thank you for your reply Could you please ship the item today? Thank you very much in advance. Lastly, I would like to confirm the model that would be sent this time is （200001.200003）, as the attached photos, there would be metal fixtures.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 28 Jul 2014 at 11:53
original Thank you for leaving a message There is a possibility that instead of the item being lost through delivery overseas, it might rather be being held at the customs. The cost of the product would be returned. I am deeply sorry about that. If the product is delivered, kindly contact us. Thank you for your help.	corrected Thank you for leaving a message Since it was shipped as an overseas delivery, there is a possibility that your item might be either lost or held at the customs. We will issue you a refund for the shipping cost. I am deeply sorry about that. If the product is delivered, kindly contact us. Thank you for your help.

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