Takashi Harada (yuminosato) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello, I am very pleased with the good item I could bought. I would be very happy if you send it as soon as possible. ANd could you inform me Tracking number?

Best regards
Thank you.

修正後
Hello, I am very pleased with the good item I could buy. I would be very happy if you send it as soon as possible. And could you inform me the Tracking number?

Best regards
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I sent the good that I purchased from you to the address in Florida of my forwarding company.
But the company does not send it to Japan.
So I would like to ask you one thing. Please support me.
I would like to return the good first, and please send it the other address that I specify. Is it possible?
If not possible, I will raise a claim to PayPal and return it.
I will buy the goods next month again, please support me.

修正後
I sent the goods that I purchased from you to the address of my forwarding company in Florida.
But the company will not send them to Japan.
So I would like to ask you to help me.
I would like to return the goods to you first. Then please send them to another address that I specify. Can you do that?
If this is not possible, I will raise a claim to PayPal and return it.
I will buy the goods again next month, so please help me.