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Thank you for your visit yesterday.
I am looking forward to working with ***.

I am sending a time sheet. Please enter your work hours.

If you have any question, please feel free to contact us.

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Thank you for your visit yesterday.
I am looking forward to working with ***.

I am sending a time sheet. Please enter your work hours.

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us.

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Hello.
Thank you for contacting me.
That's the package.

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Hello.
Thank you for contacting me.
That's the package.

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I once worked at Bar when I was 20 years old.
I left work because I could not avoid unhealthy lifestyle.
Right now, I am a designer for magazines and books.
I come up with designs when publishers bring me a job.

She ( Stacy) is a lot of fun to be with!
I had some drinks with her at the bar in Hawaii a while ago. She is my cousin but I consider her as my friend.. a person I like very much.

I go to Nakano for a drink sometimes. I have been to the Bar named Juke 80s for my work.
Old songs excites me! What kind of music do you like to listen, Luke?

If you see my picture, you will remember me. I am going to send you a special one some other time!

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I once worked at Bar when I was 20 years old.
I left work because I could not avoid unhealthy lifestyle.
Right now, I am a designer for magazines and books.
I come up with designs when publishers bring me a job.

She ( Stacy) is a lot of fun to be with!
I had some drinks with her at the bar in Hawaii a while ago. She is my cousin but I consider her as my friend.. a person I like very much.

I go to Nakano for a drink sometimes. I have been to the Bar named Juke 80s for my work.
Old songs excite me! What kind of music do you like to listen, Luke?

If you see my picture, you will remember me. I am going to send you a special one some other time!

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Thank you for contacting us.

When you ship items abroad, you usually have to be responsible for custom duties.

Fortunately, your first order was not caught for duties, however a second order was charged for it as regulations applies

Custom Duties regulations are strict especially in Canada and Europe.

We are sorry but as the URL page explains, a buyer is responsible for any custom duties.

We apologize any inconvenience that may have caused you.

Thank you.

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Thank you for contacting us.

When you ship items abroad, you sometimes have to be responsible for custom duties.

Fortunately, in your first order there was no need to pay for duties, however a second order was charged for it as regulations applies

Custom Duties regulations are strict especially in Canada and Europe.

We are sorry but as the URL page explains, a buyer is responsible for any custom duties.↵
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We apologize any inconvenience that may have caused you.

Thank you.

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Some users have reported that a home button stopped working during editing memos. After our research, we have discovered the home button stops working immediately after opening memos although this incident occurs barely. The incident seems to happen depending on timing of pushing the home button.↵

After looking into this problem by creating test code, we found out that the problem is clearly not our application but OS. Therefore, we have issued a bug report to Apple Inc.

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Some users have reported that a home button stopped working during editing memos. After our research, we have discovered that pressing home buttons immediately after opening memos rarely caue this problem.
After looking into this problem by creating test code, we found out that the problem is clearly not our application but OS. Therefore, we have issued a bug report to Apple Inc.