翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

私も20歳の時、バーで働いた事がある！
でも不規則な生活が続いてやめちゃった…
今の仕事は雑誌や本のデザインをしています
出版社から依頼を受けて制作しているんだ

彼女は（ステイシィー）楽しいよね！
私も、この間ハワイのバーで
一緒にお酒を飲んだよ♪　従姉妹だけど友達のような…大好きな人です

中野ではたまに飲んだりするよ！Juke 80sというバーは一度仕事で行った事あるよ。
昔の歌を聞くと盛り上がるよね！ルークはどんな曲を聞くの？

私の写真見れば思い出すよ（笑）今度とっておきの写真を送るね！

英語

I once worked at Bar when I was 20 years old.
I left work because I could not avoid unhealthy lifestyle.
Right now, I am a designer for magazines and books.
I come up with designs when publishers bring me a job.

She ( Stacy) is a lot of fun to be with!
I had some drinks with her at the bar in Hawaii a while ago. She is my cousin but I consider her as my friend.. a person I like very much.

I go to Nakano for a drink sometimes. I have been to the Bar named Juke 80s for my work.
Old songs excites me! What kind of music do you like to listen, Luke?

If you see my picture, you will remember me. I am going to send you a special one some other time!

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mapmetroiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/29 16:17:15

元の翻訳
I once worked at Bar when I was 20 years old.
I left work because I could not avoid unhealthy lifestyle.
Right now, I am a designer for magazines and books.
I come up with designs when publishers bring me a job.

She ( Stacy) is a lot of fun to be with!
I had some drinks with her at the bar in Hawaii a while ago. She is my cousin but I consider her as my friend.. a person I like very much.

I go to Nakano for a drink sometimes. I have been to the Bar named Juke 80s for my work.
Old songs excites me! What kind of music do you like to listen, Luke?

If you see my picture, you will remember me. I am going to send you a special one some other time!

修正後
I once worked at Bar when I was 20 years old.
I left work because I could not avoid unhealthy lifestyle.
Right now, I am a designer for magazines and books.
I come up with designs when publishers bring me a job.

She ( Stacy) is a lot of fun to be with!
I had some drinks with her at the bar in Hawaii a while ago. She is my cousin but I consider her as my friend.. a person I like very much.

I go to Nakano for a drink sometimes. I have been to the Bar named Juke 80s for my work.
Old songs excite me! What kind of music do you like to listen, Luke?

If you see my picture, you will remember me. I am going to send you a special one some other time!