Tyler Balaskovitz (tylerbalaskovitz1) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Questions

For questions, opinions and demands, please inquire with the following form.

From our company's management will contact you.

Please understand that depending on the contents, there cases when we can not contact you.

修正後
Contact us

For questions, opinions and demands, please inquire with the following form.

Our staff will contact you.

Please understand that depending on the contents, there are cases where we cannot contact you.

元の翻訳
Questions

For questions, opinions and demands, please inquire with the following form.

From our company's management will contact you.

Please understand that depending on the contents, there cases when we can not contact you.

修正後
Inquiries

For questions, opinions and demands, please inquire with the following form.

Our staff in charge will contact you.

Please understand that depending on the contents, there may be cases where we can not contact you.

元の翻訳
I don't want 10 items. I want to purchase 5.
This will change the the price right?

For the shipping methods, please let your company support it.

Payment Methods: Please use paypal or a credit card.

Thank you very much.

修正後
I don't want 10 items. I want to purchase 5.
This will change the price right?

For the shipping methods, please let your company support it.

Payment Methods: Please use paypal or a credit card.

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Now, with the plot I think I want to make a big floor.
That is to say a one piece flat floor or possibly a floor made of a few parts? I'm still thinking about the shape.
I think the important part is the scheme for constructing the support for the floor.
I'm looking into the results and significance of the materials to support the floor on the upper and lower ends.

Finally, I was thinking of an item that you go up it and that feels like a stage. I plan on making a space where there can be performances.

修正後
Now, with the plot I think I want to make a big floor.
That is to say a one piece flat floor or possibly a floor made of a few parts? I'm thinking of the shape.
I think the important part is the scheme for constructing the support for the floor.
I'm looking into the results and significance of the materials to support the floor on the upper and lower ends.

Finally, I was thinking of an item that you go up it and that feel like a stage. I plan on making a space where there can be performances.

元の翻訳
<Other>
December, 2011 Solo Photo Blog (chercher)
May, 2012 Amoeba Blog "Bishokuon (Bijyo) Diary" Opening
November 2012 Solo Style Book "Chiaki Type AtoZ"
March, 2013 VANQUISH VENUS vol.5
July 2013, KOJIxAAA Ito Chiaki's produced fake eyelashes "Charming Kiss" goes on sale.

Charming Kiss' Official Homepage:
http://www.koji-honpo.co.jp/chiaki/

修正後
<Other>
December, 2011 Solo Photo Blog "chercher"
May 2012 Ameba Blog "Bishokuon (Bijyo) Diary" Opening
November 2012 Solo Style Book "Chiaki Type AtoZ"
March 2013 VANQUISH VENUS vol.5
July 2013 KOJIxAAA Ito Chiaki's produced fake eyelashes "Charming Kiss" goes on sale.

Charming Kiss' Official Homepage:
http://www.koji-honpo.co.jp/chiaki/

元の翻訳
<Other>

December, 2010 1st Photo Collection "Shinking"
June, 2011 Mika Niwagawa Photograph "Monthly Men Shinshirou" (On sale June,2011)
March, 2013 2nd Photo Collection "Atae Best"
October, 2013 Official Blog "You Only Live Once" Established

修正後
<Other>

December, 2010 1st Photo Collection "Shinking"
June, 2011 Mika Ninagawa Photograph "Monthly Men Shinshirou" (On sale June,2011)
March, 2013 2nd Photo Collection "Atae Best"
October, 2013 Official Blog "You Only Live Once" Established

元の翻訳
Takasaki club FLEEZ

Standing with a reference number / 5,650 (Tax Included)
An additional drink fee is required / 1 drink
Ages three and up, a admission fee is charged.

Disk Garage

修正後
Takasaki club FLEEZ

Standing with a reference number / 5,650 JPY (Tax Included)
An additional drink fee is required / 1 drink
Ages three and up, an admission fee is charged.

Disk Garage↵

元の翻訳
Kobe VARIT

Standing with a reference number / 5,650 (Tax Included)
An additional drink fee is required / 1 drink
Ages three and up, a admission fee is charged.

Yumebanchi

修正後
Kobe VARIT

Standing with a reference number / 5,650 JPY (Tax Included)
An additional drink fee is required / 1 Ticket
Ages three and up, a admission fee is charged.

Yumebanchi

元の翻訳
Can I receive a picture of the damage?
It was damaged while in the mail so perhaps inquire with the post office.
Only, please understand that with the warranty's adaption has a likelihood to take several months.

修正後
Could you please send me a picture of the damaged part?
As it was an accident during delivery, we will inquire with the post office.
Please understand, however, it could possibly take over few months even though it is covered by the warranty.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry. No. 3839 was bought by another person.
I'm still waiting to use it.

修正後
I'm sorry, No. 3839 was bought by another customer.
We look forward to your future business with us again.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry. No. 3839 was bought by another person.
I'm still waiting to use it.

修正後
I'm sorry. No. 3839 was bought by another person.
I'm looking forward to serving you again. ↵

元の翻訳
I think that this item is still not for sale in Japan

This wonderful item is the highest grade of safety for pregnant women and unborn children.

Just the other day, my friend encountered an accident.
She was pregnant. Because she wasn't wearing a seat belt, the shock from the accident killed the unborn baby.
Surely, if she had this item then the child would have been saved.
She is depressed and still can't get back on her feet.

I want to decrease the amount of women with the same thoughts as her.

修正後
I think that this item is still not for sale in Japan

This wonderful item is the highest grade of safety for pregnant women and unborn children.

Just the other day, my friend got into a car accident.
She was pregnant. Because she wasn't wearing a seat belt, the shock from the accident killed the unborn baby.
Surely, if she had this item then the child would have been saved.
She is depressed and still can't get back on her feet.

I want to decrease the amount of women with the same thoughts as her.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and is currently receiving care.
I want to send it quickly but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

My teacher's negotiations will be reached by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait but I can send it on Monday.

I know you were looking forward to this and I'm sorry but please wait a little longer.

修正後
Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and is currently receiving care.
I want to send it quickly but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

According to the doctor, the baby should arrive by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait, but I can send it on Monday.

I know you are looking forward to this and I'm sorry but please wait a little longer.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and is currently receiving care.
I want to send it quickly but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

My teacher's negotiations will be reached by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait but I can send it on Monday.

I know you were looking forward to this and I'm sorry but please wait a little longer.

修正後
Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and I am at the hospital to take care of her.
I want to send it quickly, but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

The doctor said the baby will be born by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait but I can send it on Monday.

I know you were looking forward to the arrival of your item, but please wait a little longer.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and is currently receiving care.
I want to send it quickly but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

My teacher's negotiations will be reached by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait but I can send it on Monday.

I know you were looking forward to this and I'm sorry but please wait a little longer.

修正後
Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and I'm currently taking care of her.
I want to send it quickly, but since I don't know when the baby will be born I can't leave the hospital.

Our doctor says the baby will arrive by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait but I can send it by Monday.

I know you are looking forward to this.↵
I'm sorry but please wait a little longer.↵
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and is currently receiving care.
I want to send it quickly but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

My teacher's negotiations will be reached by Sunday.

I'm sorry for making you wait but I can send it on Monday.

I know you were looking forward to this and I'm sorry but please wait a little longer.

修正後
Thank you for the message.

My wife has gone into labor and is currently receiving care.
I want to send it quickly but since I don't know when the baby will be born, I can't leave the hospital.

My teacher's negotiations will be reached by Sunday [mistranslation: he means that his wife's doctor says the baby will be born by Sunday].

I'm sorry for making you wait but I can send it on Monday.

I know you are looking forward to this and I'm sorry but please wait a little longer.

元の翻訳
(Please write within 80 characters)

In the condition column, the used item was listed as new.
The item delivered was different than that in the picture.
So, I will not apologize.
There was nothing in the explanation area so it was difficult to understand.
As for the box, with a magic marker, many straight lines were drawn.

修正後
(Please write within 80 characters) [This is not part of the text]

In the condition column, the used item was listed as new.
The item delivered was different from that in the picture.
So, I will not apologize [mistranslation: wrong subject].
There was nothing [mistranslation] in the product description, so it was difficult to understand.
As for the box, with a magic marker, many straight lines were drawn.

元の翻訳
(Please write within 80 characters)

In the condition column, the used item was listed as new.
The item delivered was different than that in the picture.
So, I will not apologize.
There was nothing in the explanation area so it was difficult to understand.
As for the box, with a magic marker, many straight lines were drawn.

修正後
(Please write within 80 characters)

In the "condition" column, the used item was listed as new.
The item delivered was different than that in the picture.
However, there were no apologies.
The description said there were missing parts, but it was difficult to understand.
As for the box, many straight lines were drawn with a magic marker.

元の翻訳
ICOM SM 20x Hf radio について聞いています。新しければ192.84ドールがかかりますけどDHLかEMSには日本からイタリアまでいくら掛かりますか？
出来るだけ早くPayPalで払います。
本当にこのマイクに興味をもっています。私のSM 20が壊れていますから使えません。

DHLかEMSの送金と値段の合計を教えてください。自分のPayPalで払えますので。

敬具

修正後
ICOM SM 20x Hf radio について聞いています。新しければ192.84ドルかかりますけどDHLかEMSで、日本からイタリアまでいくらかかりますか？
出来るだけ早くPayPalで払います。ありがとうございます。
本当にこのマイクに興味をもっています。私のSM 20が壊れていますからラジオが使えません。

DHLかEMSの値段の合計を教えてください。自分のPayPalで払えますので。

敬具

元の翻訳
Fee: Standing
1. Princess Power Fruit Can (Single Person)
Advanced Sale: 3,300 Yen. Day of Price: 3,800 Yen. (Tax Included. One Drink Fee)
2. Tokyo Girl's Fashion (Single Person)
Advanced Sale: 3,300 Yen. Day of Price: 3,800 Yen. (Tax Included. One Drink Fee)
3. Princess Power Fruit Can. Tokyo Girls' Fashion (Two Person)
Advanced Sale: 4,000 Yen. Day of Price: 4,500 Yen. (Tax Included. One Drink Fee)
*Fees apply to Elementary School Students and above. Preschool Children may enter for free.

修正後
Fee: Standing
1. Princess Power Fruit Can (Single Person)
Booking price: 3,300 Yen. Door price: 3,800 Yen. (Tax Included. One Drink Fee)
2. Tokyo Girl's Fashion (Single Person)
Booking price: 3,300 Yen. Door price: 3,800 Yen. (Tax Included. One Drink Fee)
3. Princess Power Fruit Can. Tokyo Girls' Fashion (Two Person)
Booking price: 4,000 Yen. Door price: 4,500 Yen. (Tax Included. One Drink Fee)
*Fees apply to Elementary School Students and above. Preschool Children may enter for free.

元の翻訳
A-Nation Island powered by In Jelly. Sunday August 17th. A-Nation Island powered by In Jelly Asia!
Progress ~Departure~. Performances Decided

From Sunday May 27th, 12:00, applications begin at Seven Eleven.
Application Duration: May 27th, 12:00PM to Sunday, June 8th, 11:59PM

Application Link
Seven Eleven
http://pia.jp/sp/a-nation14sej/
[PC * Smartphone * Mobile Phone]

修正後
A-Nation Island powered by In Jelly. Sunday August 17th. A-Nation Island powered by In Jelly Asia!
Progress ~Departure~. Performances Scheduled

Applications begin Tuesday May 27 at 12:00, starting at 7-Eleven.
Application Duration: Tuesday May 27th, 12:00PM to Sunday, June 8th, 11:59PM

Application Link:
7-Eleven First Priority
http://pia.jp/sp/a-nation14sej/
[PC * Smartphone * Mobile Phone]