Tyler Balaskovitz (tylerbalaskovitz1) — 付けたレビュー

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Good afternoon.
I am contacting you form Japan.
Your shop is one of our favorites.
I have been purchasing from you for about 3 years now.
When I checked my account.
I have purchases 5000 EURO from you since March 2013.
(Please check this)
But why am I not able to use my gift vouchers?
Not being able to use them is a little strange.
I plan to purchase again on the 17th of July,
could you give me the promotional codes for these vouchers?
I will be purchasing more and more from your store.
I await your reply.
Thank you.

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Good afternoon.
I am contacting you from Japan.
Your shop is one of our favorites.
I have been purchasing from you for about 3 years now.
When I checked my account.
I have purchases 5000 EURO from you since March 2013.
(Please check this)
But why am I not able to use my gift vouchers?
Not being able to use them is a little strange.
I plan to purchase again on the 17th of July,
could you give me the promotional codes for these vouchers?
I will be purchasing more and more from your store.
I await your reply.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
May J is going to show up at a TV program "Ichiban Song (No.1 song ) SHOW" which is presented by Nohon TV on July 2nd (Wed) !!

"Ichiban song show" broadcasted by Nihon TV
・Date: July.2nd(Wed) 2014
・Broadcasting hours: 19:00-20:54
・HP regarding the program： http://www.ntv.co.jp/ichiban/

A theme of the program tonight : "In a special 2hours, celebrity artists who have gotten on the top will be on the show altogether! Funassy will shale a leg! Secret stories relating to masterpiece compositions will be disclosed "

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May J will perform on the TV program "Ichiban Song (No.1 song ) SHOW" presented by Nihon TV on July 2nd (Wed) !!

"Ichiban Song Show" broadcasted by Nihon TV
・Date: July.2nd(Wed) 2014
・Broadcasting hours: 19:00-20:54
・The Program's Homepage： http://www.ntv.co.jp/ichiban/

A theme of the program tonight : "In a special 2hours, the best celebrity artists will appear on the show altogether! Funassy will shale a leg! The secret stories of popular music hits will be confessed!"

元の翻訳
Should you wish to purchase Japanese products, please check the interchangeability. Some of those used items (NES, Gameboy and those old cartridge games in particular) may not come with attachments such as package, instruction manual, special gift, etc. It will take approximately 10 business days from the date of shipment. Or it may take longer when the shipping destination is outside Canada. When your item is inspected at the customs, its expenses will have to be covered at your end. Please contact us in the case of not receiving the item after 2 weeks of the shipping date as it may be involved with a delivery issue.

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Should you wish to purchase Japanese products, please check the compatibility. Some of those used items (NES, Gameboy and those old cartridge games in particular) may not come with attachments such as package, instruction manual, special gift, etc. In regards to this, when necessary, please contact us before purchasing. When sent from Japan, there will be a tracking number attached. It will take approximately 10 business days from the date of shipment. Or it may take longer when the shipping destination is outside Canada. When your item is inspected at the customs, its expenses will have to be covered at your end. Please contact us in the case of not receiving the item after 2 weeks of the shipping date as it may be involved with a delivery issue.

元の翻訳
1. Thank you for your reply.
Your evaluation is not reflected on Amazon yet.
Sorry to bother you, but kindly send us your evaluation from the below steps.

2. If your evaluation was of the highest rating, you will be entitled to receive $5 value of Amazon gift card as a sign of our gratitude.

3. If have already placed your evaluation, please ignore this message.

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1. Thank you for your reply.
Your evaluation is not reflected on Amazon yet.
Sorry to bother you, but kindly send us your evaluation by following steps below.

2. If your evaluation was of the highest rating, you will be entitled to receive a $5 Amazon gift card as a sign of our gratitude.

3. If have already placed your evaluation, please ignore this message.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
This item is available for shipment to Indonesia.
Its shipping fee may vary depending on the destination, but it should be about the similar shipping fee for the US.
The shipment will take place via EMS or Resitered AIR small Packet

Thank you for the message.
In the case of refund

It will be issued through Amazon for following its policies.
We could issue a refund immediately.
Best regards,

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Thank you for the message.
This item is available for shipment to Indonesia.
Its shipping fee may vary depending on the destination, but it should be a similar shipping fee for the US.
The shipment will take place via EMS or Registered AIR small Packet

Thank you for the message.
In the case of refund

It will be issued through Amazon for following its policies.
We could issue a refund immediately.
Best regards,

元の翻訳
It's been a while since I last wrote you.
Today, I would like to sell 100 stocks of the Waterworks Bureau that you take care of on my behalf. Kindly advise the steps.
Also, would it be possible to receive the fund after sales in US$?
If it does not work, Riel would do.
Kindly find the attached statement you sent me.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,

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It's been a while since I last wrote you.
Today, I would like to sell 100 stocks of the Waterworks Bureau. Would the following procedures be permissible?
And, would it be possible to receive the fund after sales in US$?
If it does not work, Riel would do.
Kindly find the attached statement you sent me.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,

元の翻訳
Sorry to keep being of annoyance, but the problem has not been resolved.
As you advised I offset the items shortage.
The item is now Active.
However, on the items page, I can not display the information for my store.
Please refer to the item pages below.

So can you see that my shop name is not displayed?
Naturally, I can not get orders from customers this way.
Please tell me how to remedy this.
Again sorry for the many inquiries.

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Sorry to keep being of annoyance, but the problem has not been resolved.
As you advised I compensated for the lack of information about the item.
So, the item is now Active.
However, on the items page, the information for my store is not displayed.
Please refer to the item pages below.

So can you see that my shop name is not displayed?
Naturally, I can not get orders from customers this way.
Please tell me how to remedy this.
Again sorry for the many inquiries.

元の翻訳
I saw your email.

After investigating the causes of the issue, we found the following problems and have detailed them for you below.

1. After receipt of the order, there was a mistake when the shipment was made from the manufacturer's warehouse
2. The courier responsible did not confirm the products from the order

Until we received communications from you we were not aware of aforementioned errors regarding the products.
Furthermore, after that we also did not give you appropriate service to make up for the error.
I deeply apologize for the mistakes and the inconvenience.

From now on, we will resolve the causes of the problem and commit to giving you the best service that meets your needs and brings you satisfaction.
Thank you for your valuable contributions in pointing out this mistake.

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I saw your email.

After investigating the causes of the issue, we found the following problems and have detailed them for you below.

1. After receiving the order, there was a mistake when the shipment was made from the manufacturer's warehouse
2. The courier responsible did not confirm the products from the order

Until we received communications from you we were not aware of aforementioned errors regarding the products.
Furthermore, after that we also did not give you appropriate service to make up for the error.
I deeply apologize for the mistakes and the inconvenience.

From now on, we will resolve the causes of the problem and commit to giving you the best service that meets your needs and brings you satisfaction.
Thank you for your valuable contributions in pointing out this mistake.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
We have acknowledged.

We will issue a refund.
Thank you for your kind understanding.
We apologize for the inconvenience caused.

Thank you for your message.
We have shipped your item.
We will double check later.
Thank you and best regards,

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Thank you for your message.
Certainly, we will do it. [We have acknowledged sounds strange in English]

We will issue a refund.
Thank you for your kind understanding.
We apologize for the inconvenience caused.

Thank you for your message.
We have shipped your item.
We will double check later.
Thank you and best regards,

元の翻訳
○○ Sales Team
Mr./Ms. xx,

Thank yu for contacting me.
We have acknowledged ○○ in the EOL status.
Hence I would like to go with 1. Refund of your proposal.
For other items except for ○○, I would assume the shipping schedule to be on Monday or later, but your prompt shipment would be highly appreciated.
Sorry to bother you on this. Thank you and best regards,

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○○ Sales Team
Dear Mr./Ms. xx,

Thank you for contacting me.
We have acknowledged ○○ in the End of Life status.
Hence I would like to go with option 1: the refund of your proposal.
For the other items except for ○○, I would assume the shipping schedule to be on Monday or later, but your prompt shipment would be highly appreciated.
Sorry to bother you on this. Thank you and best regards,

元の翻訳
Date of Birth: July 8th, 1993
Height: 187 cm
Blood Type: O
Birthplace: Saitama

The 20 years old SOLIDEMO member who present the natural self.↵
Challenged to numerous auditions,
and passed the "MEN'S NON-NO" audition from Shuueisha during the summer of junior year of the high school, and became the exclusive model in March of 2010.

His favorite word is "Suit."

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Date of Birth: July 8th, 1993
Height: 187 cm
Blood Type: O
Birthplace: Saitama

A simple 20 year old member of SOLIDEMO . [The way the English was phrased seemed unnatural]↵
Attempted [挑戦 can also mean to try/attempt. To challenge to number auditions also seems unnatural in English] numerous auditions,
and passed the "MEN'S NON-NO" audition from Shuueisha during the summer of their junior year of high school, and became an exclusive model from March of 2010.

His favorite word is "Suit."