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I am thinking of changing the html of the Group page (for example,changing the H4 tag to H1 tag) and is the html that I'll be changing ,that I'll write below, right?
I changed the source and uploaded it by FTP, and I had a look but it hasn't changed anything, so I am wondering why this happened.
On top of that, I eliminated the abc.html through FTP, but it didn't show any error ( I thought it maybe because of the cash, and erased it, but somehow it didn't change anything)
Sorry for the elementry level question. If anyone knows why this happened, please give me an advice.

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I am thinking of changing the html of the Group page (for example,changing the H4 tag to H1 tag) and is the following html correct to change?
I changed the source and uploaded it by FTP, and I had a look but it hasn't changed anything, so I am wondering why this happened.
On top of that, I eliminated the abc.html through FTP, but it didn't show any error ( I thought it maybe because of the cash, and erased it, but somehow it didn't change anything)
Sorry for the elementary level question. If anyone knows why this happened, please give me an advice.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message
We apologize for our inefficiency that have caused you inconvenience.

If you cannot ship it to Japan, we can issue a refund.
You can still have the battery.
Appearing below shows the difference of the batteries .

Would you prefer a refund?

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Thank you for your message
We apologize for our inefficiency that has caused you inconvenience.

If you cannot ship it to Japan, we can issue a refund.
You can still have the battery.
Appearing below shows the difference of the batteries .

Would you prefer a refund?

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I apologize for the mistake, and thank you for confirming the product return.
You have requested to the POBOX address, but the redelivering process will be done by DHL or FEDEX↵
and therefore, I was informed by the forwarding service company, that I will need to know your domestic address.
Sorry for the inconvenience, but please inform your home phone number and your home address.
When the tracking is done I will inform you.
After you received the product, please subtract the charge for the redelivering service and the money that caused you troule , and refund the remain.

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Despite my mistake, thank you so much for accepting my return proposal.
You have requested to use your POBOX address as the return address, but I was informed by the forwarding service company that your domestic address is required for item return via DHL or FedEx.
Sorry for bothering you again, but please let us know your home address and phone number.
When your tracking number is issued, I will inform you.
After you received the product, please settle the payment in addition to the relisting fee while subtracting the fees for your inconvenience that has been caused to you.