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"Music Power (Ongaku-no-Chikara)"

Wednesday, October 29th
ytv "Music Power (Ongaku-no-Chikara"
*This program could be changed for some reason. Please note that.

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"Music Power (Ongaku-no-Chikara)"

Wednesday, October 29th, 25:59〜26:49
ytv "Music Power (Ongaku-no-Chikara)"
* Please be aware that the broadcasting content may subject to change.

元の翻訳
"The Power of Music"

Wednesday, October 29th, 25:59~26:49
ytv program: "The Power of Music"
NOTE: There is a possibility that broadcast content will be changed by circumstances. Please be understanding of this beforehand.

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"Ongaku no Chikara (Music Power)"

Wednesday, October 29th, 25:59~26:49
ytv "Ongaku no Chikara (Music Power)"
* Please be aware of the broadcasting content may subject to change.

元の翻訳
"ONGAKUNOCHIKARA"- the power of music-

Wednesday, October 29, 25:59-26:49
"ONGAKUNOCHIKARA" by ytv
*Please note that the broadcast contents could change for certain reasons.

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"ONGAKU　NO　CHIKARA　(Music Power)"

Wednesday, October 29, 25:59-26:49
"ONGAKU　NO　CHIKARA　(Music Power)" by ytv
*Please note that the broadcast contents may subject to change.

元の翻訳
I would like to change the sort of all categories and all locations (Not in alphabetical order) .
Please tell me the way to correct.

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I would like to change the display order of all categories and all locations (not in an alphabetical order) .
Please tell me how to fix them.

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I want to sort display order of list of all locations and all categories. (Not alphabetical order)
Please tell me how to fix.

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I want to sort the display order of lists of "all categories" and "all clocations" (not in an alphabetical order).
Please tell me how to fix them.

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We would like to change the display order of the lists of "all categories" and "all Locations", not alphabetically.
Could you please tell us how to do it.

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We would like to change the display order of the lists of "all categories" and "all locations" (not in an alphabetical order).
Please kindly advise us how to fix it.

元の翻訳
Sorry, I can not understand English if it's too long.

Also it is not possible to talk in English, I can't talk on the phone.

There Is no office of UPS close to my home, I am not able to go so soon.

I do not know how to do, but I checked the return address, ↵
may I send it back by EMS?
I will pay the postage.

If there are no problems, then I will send it out with the label that has been specified.
Sorry for you inconvenience, but please contact me.

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Sorry, I can not understand English if it's too long.

Also, I can't talk on the phone because I cannot hold an English conversation.

There Is no UPS office in my neighbourhood, so I am not able to visit one soon.

I do not know how it works exactly, but I was able to check the return address, so may I send it back by EMS?
I will pay for the postage.

If there are no problems, then I will ship it with the provided label on it.
Sorry for your inconvenience, but please contact me.

元の翻訳
I have successfully received the item. Thank you very much.

But the price on the Commercial Invoice that was attached when shipped was incorrect.
Please check the file I uploaded.

In addition, please make sure to point out the Taiwan shipment personnel again to fill out correct price from the next time.

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I have successfully received the item. Thank you very much.

But the price on the Commercial Invoice that was attached at shippment was incorrect.
Please check the file I uploaded.

In addition, please make sure to point out the Taiwan shipment personnel again to "fill out correct price on the Commercial Invoice" from next time.

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The goods were safely arrived. Thank you very much.
But the price of Commercial Invoice on the delivery was not accurate.
Since the file is uploaded, please check.
In addition, "Please fill the exact price of Commercial Invoice" and tell the person in charge of shipping in Taiwan

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The goods were safely arrived. Thank you very much.
But the price of the Commercial Invoice attached at shipment was not accurate.
I upload the file, so please check.
In addition, please remind the person in charge of shipping in Taiwan to "fill the correct price of the Commercial Invoice" from now on.

元の翻訳
I have safely received your product. Thank you very much.

However, the amount stated on the Commercial Invoice attached was inaccurate. Please check the file I uploaded.

If you could let the person in charge in the Taiwan office to "Make sure to state the correct amount on the Commercial Invoice" that would be most appreciated.

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I have safely received your product. Thank you very much.

However, the amount stated on the Commercial Invoice attached was inaccurate. Please check the file I uploaded.

If you could let the person in charge in Taiwan office know to "Make sure to state the correct amount on the Commercial Invoice" that would be most appreciated.

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The item has arrived without incident. Thank you .

However, the price stated in the commercial invoice put before the shipping was not accurate.
I will upload the file, Please check it.
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Also, please report to the shipping representative in Taiwan to put a correct value in a commercial invoice from the next time.

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The item has arrived without incident. Thank you .

However, the price stated on the Commercial Invoice that was attached at shipping was not accurate.
I will upload the file, so please check
Also, please report to the shipping representative in Taiwan to "put a correct value in the Commercial Invoice" from the next time.

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I received the package. Thanks.

However, the price on the Commercial Invoice which was put at the time of shipment wasn't right.
Please look at the attached file.

I would also like to ask you to tell the person in charge in Taiwan to fill out the right price on the Commercial Invoice next time.

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I received the package. Thanks.

However, the price on the Commercial Invoice which was put at the time of shipment wasn't correct.
Please look at the attached file.

I would also like to ask you to tell the person in charge in Taiwan to "fill out the correct price on the Commercial Invoice" next time.

元の翻訳
The goods have arrived safely, thank you.

However, the price on the commercial Invoice that was attached at the time of shipping was incorrect.
I will upload the file, please check it.

Again, I have been asked by the Taiwan shipping PIC to ask you again to "Please make sure the commercial Invoice shows the correct price from now on please"

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The goods have arrived safely, thank you.

However, the price on the Commercial Invoice that was attached at the time of shipping was incorrect.
I will upload the file, please check it.

Also, please remind the Taiwanese shipping PIC to "enter the correct price on the Commercial Invoice."

元の翻訳
I was so happy about his kind consideration. He was very good at guiding. A rickshaw man’s simile comforted me. His strongly built body attracted me all the time. Feast for the eyes☆ Now I’m a middle-aged woman, and yet my heart was full of joy about Kyoto which I had never experienced when I was young.

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I was so happy about his kind consideration. He was very good at guiding. A rickshaw man’s simile comforted me. I could not take my eyes off his well-built body the whole time. Feast for the eyes☆ Now I’m a middle-aged woman, and yet my heart was full of joy about Kyoto which I had never experienced in my youth.

元の翻訳
Their mindful care pleased me. The guide was very good. The rikisha-man's smile made me comforted, and I could not help but gazing his trim body. It was really a feast to my eyes.
Visiting Kyoto in middle life gave me a lot of sensation that I did not feel when I was young.

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Their mindful care pleased me. The guide was very good. The rickshaw man's smile comforted me, and I could not help but gazing his trim body. It was really a feast to my eyes.
Visiting Kyoto in middle life gave me a lot of sensation that I did not feel when I was young.

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It was raining, wind blowing, and cold. We rode to the bus worrying the ropeway might stop. However the rain stopped when the bus had arrived. There was a cable car to the summit straight away (it is probably extra for emergency). It was wild. The wind was so strong I felt to be blown away, but about 120 degrees of view was bright like midday. It was good.

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It was raining, windy, and cold. We boarded the bus worrying the ropeway might stop. However no sooner had we arrived than it stopped to rain. The ropeway departed shortly (it seemed to be a temporary operation) and we transfered to a cable car on the way up to the summit. It was wild. The wind was so strong and I nearly got blown away, but about 120 degrees of the view felt so bright like the midday. It was good.↵
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元の翻訳
It was raining, windy and cold, we got on a bus but were told the aerial tram may be cancelled. However, as soon as the bus arrived, it stopped raining, so the aerial tram departed (it seemed to be a special service). On the way to the top, it was exciting when we changed to a cable car. Although It was so windy and I felt I would be blown away, I enjoyed the view with about 120 degree which was bright like the day time. I liked it.

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It was raining, windy and cold, we got on a bus because we were told the aerial tram may be cancelled. However, as soon as the bus arrived, it stopped raining, so the aerial tram departed right away (it seemed to be a temporary operation). On the way up to the mountain top, it was powerful and exciting that we changed to a cable car. Although It was so windy and I felt I would be blown away, I enjoyed about the 120-degree view that was bright like the daylight. I liked it.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。お忙しいところすみませんが、注文されたシューズ、VIP2014100307534の実際の色は添付してあるものワインレッドのような感じです。これで問題ないかどうかの確認をお願いします。
こちらがあなたの注文したものになります。

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こんにちは。お忙しいところすみませんが、注文されたシューズ、VIP2014100307534の実際の色は添付してあるものワインレッドのような感じです。これで問題ないかどうか御確認をお願いします。
こちらがあなたの注文したものになります。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。お忙しい中すみませんが、お客様が注文された靴（VIP2014100307534）についてですが、繋がる部分の本当の色は赤ワイン色に近いですが、ご確認お願いします。以下はお客様が注文されたアイテムです：

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こんにちは。お忙しい中すみませんが、お客様が注文された靴　VIP2014100307534についてですが、添付にもございますとおり実際の色はワインレッドに近いのですが、こちらでよろしいかどうかご確認をお願いします。以下はお客様が注文されたアイテムです。

元の翻訳
とつぜん失礼いたします。ご注文の靴（VIP2014100307534）ですが、私たちが入手した実際の色はワインレッドでした。添付しますので、よろしいかどうかご確認ください。ご注文の品はこちらで保管しています。

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とつぜん失礼いたします。ご注文の靴（VIP2014100307534）ですが、私たちが入手した実際の色はワインレッドでした。添付しますので、よろしいかどうかご確認ください。ご注文頂いた商品はこちらです。

元の翻訳
こんにちわ、迷惑をかけてすみません
シューズのオーダーNo.VIP2014100307534ですが、私たちに届いたのは添付ファイルのようにワイン色のようでしたが↵
貴方が欲しいのと間違いないでしょうか？↵
こちらは貴方がオーダーいした商品：

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こんにちは、ご迷惑をおかけします。
ご注文の靴No.VIP2014100307534に関しまして、当方に届いたのは添付ファイルのようにワインレッドのようですが、こちらでよろしいかどうかご確認いただけますでしょうか？お客様がご注文された商品はこちらになります。

元の翻訳
Received product.
However, a button on the shirt was broken.
Also, the button on the sleeve fell off.
Seems as it can be fixed, so I will not return the product, but would like to ask for partial refund.

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Received the product.
However, a button on the shirt was broken.
Also, another button on the sleeve fell off.
Seems as it can be fixed, so I will not return the product, but would like to ask for partial refund.

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I asked xx that he/she would apply for a visa by Nov.1st.
The contract of AAAAA-BBBB is needed as precondition, if possible, it would be helpful if you proceed to the next.

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I asked xx that he/she would apply for a visa by November 1st.
The contract of AAAAA-BBBB is needed as precondition, so if possible, it would be helpful if you proceed to the next (step).

元の翻訳
I have asked Mr/Ms OO to make some progress on the visa before the 1st November.
In the previous conditions AA-BB contract was necessary so, if possible if you could assist with the progress of that it would be of great assistance.

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I have asked Mr./Ms. ●● to make some progress on the visa application by 1st November.
As a prerequisite, AAAAA-BBBB contract is necessary, so if possible, your prioritizing this task would be helpful.

元の翻訳
Sorry for writing so many replies this time.
I'm very happy about all the consideration regarding the transaction.
Thank you very much.
Of course the shipped products will not be returned to me.
But it's also a fact that they haven't arrived with you.
Iif possible I want to have good relations with you.
If from now on the products don't arrive please contact me anytime.
I will do my best to refund you as fast as possible.
I think from now on I want to let everyone know about Japanese products through ebay.
If there are any questions please contact me.

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Sorry for troubling you writing me so many replies this time.
I'm very happy about your kind consideration regarding the transaction.
Thank you very much.
Of course the shipped products has not been returned to me.
But it's also a fact that it has not been delivered to you either.
If at all possible, I would like to sustain a good relationship with you.
If from now on the item does not arrive to you please contact me anytime.
I will refund you as fast as possible.
I think I will further strive to introduce the world about Japanese products through eBay.
If there are any questions please contact me.