Tearz (tearz) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I am in the watch selling business on Yahoo Auction and Yahoo Shopping.
This is the web site of my shop.

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I am in the watch selling business on Yahoo! Auction and Yahoo! Shopping.
This is the web site of my shop.

元の翻訳
1. The details of the defective item
Order Defect Rate (ODR) has exceeded 1%, and no longer meets Amazon's performance goals.
For the above reasons, selling rights have been removed.
The defect rate of Filed A-to-z Claim Rate is 1.27%
The defect rate of the Negative Feedback Rate is 0.63%
The total defect rate is 1.9%.
The above shows that the numerical target exceeds 1%.

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1. The details of the defective item
Order Defect Rate (ODR) has exceeded 1%, and no longer meets Amazon's performance goals.
For the above reasons, selling privileges have been removed.
The defect rate of Filed A-to-z Claim Rate is 1.27%
The defect rate of the Negative Feedback Rate is 0.63%
The total defect rate is 1.9%.
The above shows that the numerical target exceeds 1%.

元の翻訳
I am using the xxx.com service.

This address is properly validated.

Actually, I have received more than 200 items with this address so far.

On top of that, I hope you refer to feedbacks to me.

Having said that, if you still would not like to make a deal with me, please let me know. I will accept the cancellation request.

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I am using the xxx.com service.

This address is properly validated.

Actually, I have received more than 200 items with this address so far.

On top of that, I hope you refer to feedbacks I have received.

Having said that, if you still would not like to make a deal with me, please let me know. I will accept the cancellation request.

元の翻訳
I believe it would be cheaper if you use Canada Post's Tracked Packet™ International shipping.
It includes a tracking number and you should be able to send it under $20.

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I believe it would be cheaper if you use Canada Post's Tracked Packet™ International shipping.
It includes a tracking number and you should be able to send it around $20.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support Mr. J.
I am Mr. M from O (Pty. Ltd.)
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It seems that the contact has not been made.
I think Mr. S has already received a refund.

I must apologize for the mistake on my company's behalf.

If you have any further orders in the future please pass them on to Mr. S.

Thank you.

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Thank you for your support Mr. J.
I am Mr. M from O.
It seems that the contact has not been made.
I think Mr./Ms. S has already received a refund.

I must apologize for the mistake on my company's behalf.

If you have any further orders in the future please pass them on to Mr./Ms. S.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Regarding AA you ordered the other day, we proposed another product because the ordered product was lost on the way from the warehouse, but today the warehouse has just informed me that they have stocks of AA.
We will prepare the shipment as soon as we receive the product and confirm that there are no problem.
If you would like to cancel the order, please take the procedure according to the way showed below.
Please feel free to contact us for any doubts.

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Regarding AA you ordered the other day, we proposed another product because the ordered product was lost on the way from the warehouse, but today the wholeseller has just informed me that they have stocks of AA.
We will prepare the shipment as soon as we receive the product and confirm that there are no problem.
If you would like to cancel the order, please take the procedure as per stated below.
Please feel free to contact us if any.

元の翻訳
The invoice has not been attached with the product you have shipped.
So that the product is now stopped at custom.
Please send invoice asap to the email which is my paypal account.
The product will back to you if there is no invoice.

Thank you very much for shortly respond.

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The invoice was not attached to the product you have shipped.
For this reason, the product is now stopped at customs.
Please email the invoice to my paypal account ASAP.
The product will be returned to you without the invoice.

Thank you very much for your prompt action.

元の翻訳

The product you sent me is at hold at the customs since the the product did not have the invoice attached.
To resolve this situation, would you please send me the invoice to my paypal e-mail address ASAP?
(Without the proper invoice, the product will automatically be sent back to you.)

Thank you in advance.

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The product you sent me is held at the customs since the the product did not have the invoice attached to it.
To resolve this situation, would you please send me the invoice to my paypal e-mail address ASAP?
Without the proper invoice, the product will automatically be sent back to you.

Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I've confirmed that the bug have been fixed.
It would be helpful if you could clearly state which would be the updated file when you implement an update. Since all the files are translated, it might be overwritten by an update.
If this request troubles you, I can go with the status quo.

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A used to listen to this song while A's family was in hospital (A was in third grade at that time).
Although A's family recovered, his family suffered from a life-threatening severe illness.
This experience motivated A to be a singer.
And he said that his dream come true at the live shown on this video.

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I've confirmed that the bug have been fixed.
It would be helpful if you could clearly state next time which would be the updated file when you implement an update. Since all the files are translated, it might be overwritten by an update.
If this request troubles you, I can go with the status quo.

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A used to listen to this song while A's family was in hospital (A was in third grade at that time).
Although A's family recovered, his family suffered from a life-threatening severe illness.
This experience motivated A to be a singer.
And he said that his dream come true at the live shown on this video.

元の翻訳
ご連絡ありがとうございました。アカウントの専門家によるアカウントの確認により、私たちはあなたの販売の権限を復活しないことを決定しました。

残念ながら、この状況に関する詳細な情報を提供することができません。あなたの販売アカウントの閉鎖に関する対応にはお答えできないかもしれません。

このアカウントの閉鎖は永久的なものです。開いているどの後続のアカウントも同様に閉じられます。

R

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ご連絡ありがとうございました。アカウントの専門家によるアカウント審査により、弊社は御社の販売権限を復活しないことを決定いたしました。

残念ながら、この状況に関する詳細情報をこれ以上提供することは差し控えさせて頂きます。御社の販売アカウントの閉鎖に関するこれ以上のお問い合わせにはお答えできない場合もございます。

このアカウントの閉鎖は永久的なものです。（既存あるいは新規で）開設されている後続のアカウントも同様に全て閉鎖されることになります。

R

元の翻訳
You can try to use with connection fixed to 3G, while normally it is automatically changed.
It had been the best to use an application software called LTE Setting, however this software was erased by Google.
So please, look for the application software to fix the connection to 3G likewise.

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You can try to use with connection fixed to 3G, while normally it is automatically changed.
It had been the best to use an application software called LTE Setting, however this software was erased by Google.
So please look for the application software to fix the connection to 3G likewise.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

I don't like the product in color, so please let me cancel it.
Thank you very much.
And I would like to research the battery.

Thank you for your message.
Okay.Please return the product.
We will confirm it.
If there is any fault we will repair and ship it again.

Thanks for message.
The shipment has been fixed tomorrow, please kindly wait for another moments.

Sorry, the settlement of the product has been completed.
Please reprocess the credit card again.

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Thank you for your message.

If you are not happy about the item's color, so please cancel your order.
Thank you very much.
And we will investigate about the battery at our end.

Thank you for your message.
We have understood your situation.↵
Please return the product.
We will confirm it.
If there is any fault we will repair and ship it back to you again.

Thanks for message.
The shipment will be made tomorrow, please kindly wait for another moments.

We are sorry, but the payment for this item has not been settled yet.
Please retry the credit card payment process again.

元の翻訳
The 19th Tokyo Girls Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER

SOLIDEMO appearance at "The 19th Tokyo Girls Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER" has been announced!

SOLIDEMO will bring additional excitement to "The 19th Tokyo Girls Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER" as the official guest and also through the live performance of the opening act!

*TGC Official Site http://girlswalker.com/tgc/14aw/

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The 19th Tokyo Girls’ Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER

SOLIDEMO appearance at "The 19th Tokyo Girls’ Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER" has been announced!

SOLIDEMO will bring additional excitement to "The 19th Tokyo Girls Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER" as the official guest and also through the live performance of the opening act!

*TGC Official Site http://girlswalker.com/tgc/14aw/

元の翻訳
The 19th Tokyo Girl's Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER

SOLIDEMO will "The 19th Tokyo Girl's Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER".

We will boost "The 19th Tokyo Girl's Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER" as an official host and an opening act for live performance.

■TGC Official Site http://girlswalker.com/tgc/14aw/

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The 19th Tokyo Girls’ Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER

SOLIDEMO will "The 19th Tokyo Girl’s Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER".

We will boost "The 19th Tokyo Girl's Collection 2014 AUTUMN/WINTER" as an official host and an opening act for live performance.

■TGC Official Site http://girlswalker.com/tgc/14aw/

元の翻訳
I understood.

It is correct to use the address in America.
I am waiting for your contact as I will immediately settle the payment when you ready for the five items.

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I understood.

It is correct to use the address in America.
I am waiting for your contact as I will immediately settle the payment when you get those five pieces ready.

元の翻訳
No problem.

An American address is fine.
I will start processing the payment once 5 items are ready. I'm looking forward to letting me know the status.

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No problem.

The address in the US is fine.
I will start settle an immediate payment once 5 items are ready. I'm looking forward to hearing from you about the status.

元の翻訳
Hello,

Do you have this item in your stock?

I would like to ship it to Japan.

I look forward to your reply.

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Hello,

Do you have this item in your stock?

I would like you to ship it to Japan.

I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Good afternoon,↵

Do you have this item in stock?
Would you like to ship it to Japan?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Hello,
Do you have this item in stock?
Would you please ship it to Japan?
I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Good afternoon.

Do you have stock of this product?

I would like it shipped to Japan.

I await your reply

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Hello,

Do you have stock of this product?

I would like it shipped to Japan.

I await your reply.