Tearz (tearz) — 付けたレビュー

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It is written that the items are all original so they can't be chosen.
I sell them as it is written.

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It is written that the items are all made originally one by one, so they can't be chosen.
I sell them as per stated in the description.

元の翻訳
Prodaction is written that each one is made by orginal, and you can't choose.
It's sold in that condition.

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As for the merchandises, it is written that each one is made to be orginal, and customers can't choose.
The merchandises are sold as per stated in the description.

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As for the product, we state that they are original products produced one by one and customers can not select.
We sell our products following the way the policy states.

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As for the product, it is stated that our merchandises are original produced one by one and customers can not select.
We sell our merchandises as per stated in the description.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I understand it.
If you can refund me $ 200 to my PAYPAL account, I will give you 5 stars positive feedback.
Refund procedure please.

I got my refund.
Thank you all.
Please confirm my evaluation.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I understand it.
If you can refund $ 200 to my PAYPAL account, I will give you a good evaluation (positive feedback) with 5 stars.
Please proceed to the refund process.

I confirmed the refund.
Thank you.
Please confirm my evaluation.

元の翻訳
I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have an inventory of A, I cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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I want A that I ordered.
Please be sure not to ship B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have the inventory of A, I will cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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I would like the product A I ordered.
Please ensure you do not send product B instead of A by mistake.
If you are waiting for stock of product A at the moment, I will cancel my order.
I am hoping you will be able to send me product A.
Thank you.

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I would like the product A I ordered.
Please ensure you do not send product B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have the stock of product A at the moment, I will cancel my order.
I am hoping you will be able to send me product A.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
利用規約にあります通り、注文のキャンセルや変更は承りかねます。
本規約は私どものサイト内の「よくある質問」からご確認いただけます。
http://www.soludos.com/faq
ご不便をお掛けして恐縮ですが、何卒ご理解いただけますよう、よろしくお願い申し上げます。

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利用規約にあります通り、注文のキャンセルや変更は承りかねます。
本規約は私どものサイト内の「FAQ(よくある質問)」からご確認いただけます。
http://www.soludos.com/faq
ご不便をお掛けして恐縮ですが、何卒利用規約に対するご理解ご協力よろしくお願い申し上げます。

元の翻訳
発注指針では注文はキャンセルできないと明言されており、変更もできないことになっています。 www.soludos.com/faq.のFAQにて詳細が書かれていますのでご覧ください。ご不便をおかけしまして申し訳ありませんが、ご理解と発注指針へのご協力を感謝いたします。

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発注方針では注文はキャンセルできないと明言されており、変更もできないことになっています。 www.soludos.com/faq.のFAQにて詳細が書かれていますのでご覧ください。ご不便をおかけしまして申し訳ありませんが、発注方針へのご理解とご協力を感謝いたします。

元の翻訳
I'd like to ask aquestion about size of Espadrille.
I'm looking for size 24.5 in Japan, is it corresponding to US9?
If it's possible, could you send me the measurement table for Espadrille between US size and cm size?
Please answer me as soon as possible.

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I'd like to ask aquestion about size of the espadrille.
I'm looking for size 24.5 cm. Does this correspond to US9?
If it's possible, could you send me the size chart for your espadrille between US and cm?
Your prompt response is appreciated.

元の翻訳
Hello.

I stopped importing from U.S,
so I will cancel the contract.

Best regards

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Hello.

I finished importing from U.S,
so I am thinking about cancelling the contract.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
2014.06　LIVE & DANCE fes at Yomiuri Land, "Shuta Sueyoshi SPECIAL DANCE NUMBER"

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2014.06　LIVE & DANCE fest at Yomiuri Land, "Shuta Sueyoshi SPECIAL DANCE NUMBER"

元の翻訳
June 2014: Live and Dance festival in Yomiuri Land "Sueyoshi Shuta Special Dance Number"

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June 2014 LIVE & DANCE festival at Yomiuri Land "Shuta Sueyoshi SPECIAL DANCE NUMBER"

元の翻訳
Solo photo book, "You Know -UNONU-"

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Solo photo book "You Know -UNONU-"

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
Regarding to the product, we have shipped, however it exceeded the size which can be sent to France, and it got returned to me in the middle of delivery.

We are very sorry but this time we will cancel your order and repay.

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Thank you for your message.
Regarding the product, we have shipped it, however it exceeded the size which can be sent to France, and it got returned to me in the middle of delivery.

We are very sorry but this time we will cancel your order and issue you a refund.

元の翻訳
I want the stick which appeared in this photograph, so could you sell it on eBay?

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I would like to buy the stick in this photo, so could you sell it on eBay?

元の翻訳
This user got in trouble before because he posted the stolen script.
Of course the item got canceled.
Icons and fonts have copyright, you know.
Even kids know those stuffs.
You stole all kind of stuff besides icons and fonts as well.
You are a thief.
There are so many bugs when I look at the preview though.
It’s not few, I believe this author’s skill is not enough to fix the bug problem.

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This user got in trouble before because he posted another stolen script.
Of course the listed item got canceled.
Icons and fonts have copyright, you know.
Even kids know those stuff.
You stole other kinds of stuff besides icons and fonts as well.
You are a thief.
There are so many bugs when I look at the preview though.
It’s not just a few, I believe this author’s skill is not good enough to fix them.

元の翻訳
This user has also before stolen another script and it became a problem.
Of course the exhibit was canceled.

Icons or photos have copyrights. This is what even a child know.
Plus not only icons or photos, you are plagiarizing. You are a thief.

But before that, as long as seeing your preview, there a bunch of bugs.
They are not one or two bugs, and I think this author’s skill is not enough to fix those.

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This user has also stolen another script before and it became a problem.
Of course the exhibit was canceled.

Icons or photos have copyrights. Even a child knows better than this.
Plus not only icons or photos, you are plagiarizing other stuff. You are a thief.

But before that, as far as seeing your preview, there are a bunch of bugs.
They are not one or two bugs, and I think with this skillset this author cannot handle to fix those.

元の翻訳
預金の実行に次の理由で失敗しました：拒否：拒否

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預金の実行に次の理由で失敗しました：却下：却下

元の翻訳
I pray!
I hope I won't hurt myself...

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I pray!
Hope you won't hurt yourself...

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the smple.
I will use it myself.

Thank you as always.
Have a good weekend.

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Thank you for sending me the smple.
I will try it out myself for real.

Thank you as always.
Have a good weekend.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the samples.
I will use it by myself.

Thank you always.
Have a nice weekend!

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Thank you for sending me the sample.
I will try it out myself for real.

Thank you always.
Have a nice weekend!

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the sample.
I will try the sample by myself.

Thank you very much.
Have a nice weekend.

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Thank you for sending me the sample.
I will try out the sample myself.

Thank you very much as always.
Have a nice weekend.

元の翻訳
I have received the package a while ago, but there was a shortfall in the following item.

· XXXXXXX

I ordered five pieces, but there were only four pieces packed in.
Would you send me one more piece immediately?
I am sorry for disturbing you, but thank you for your cooperation.

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I have received the package earlier, but the following item was missing:

· XXXXXXX

I ordered five pieces, but there were only four in the package.
Would you send me one more piece immediately?
I am sorry for disturbing you, but thank you for your cooperation.