Tearz (tearz) — もらったレビュー

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まだ商品を受け取っていません。そして追跡しようとすると「保留」という表示が出るだけです。セラーに何度も確認の連絡をいれ、何故まだその商品が受け取れないのか、もしくは配送業者に問題があるのかを問い合わせましたが、まだ何の回答もきていません。３週間既に経過し、まだ受け取れていないのです。

eBayにメッセージを送りました。そしてPayPalにもフォローアップを入れているところです。カメラに関わる問題としては異なるソニー製テープ2本をそのカメラに装着してみたのですが、テープにしわがよったりダメージができてしまっています。カメラを返品し14日間の返金ポリシーに従い返金を要求します。カメラは2014年7月15日頃に受け取っています。

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まだ商品を受け取っていません。そして追跡しようとすると「保留」という表示が出るだけです。販売者に何度も確認の連絡をいれ、何故まだその商品が受け取れないのか、もしくは配送業者に問題があるのかを問い合わせましたが、まだ何の回答もきていません。３週間既に経過し、まだ受け取れていないのです。

eBayにメッセージを送りました。そしてPayPalにもフォローアップを入れているところです。カメラに関わる問題としては異なるソニー製テープ2本をそのカメラに装着してみたのですが、テープにしわがよったりダメージができてしまっています。カメラを返品し14日間の返金ポリシーに従い返金を要求します。カメラは2014年7月15日頃に受け取っています。

元の翻訳
This item was delivered to the customer on 6/30 from sender unknown.
Its tracking number and url are follows:

Sorry to bother you, but would you please cancel the refund?

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This item was delivered to the customer on June 30 from sender unknown.
Its tracking number and url are follows:

Sorry to bother you, but would you please cancel the refund?

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Hello Gailey,
This is my first time ordering S4410x, so we have no previous record of the shipping history.
Also from our previous order history, 10 pieces were ordered. So it should be fine if you could ship 10 pieces to us.

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Hello Gailey,
This is my first time ordering S4410x, so we have no previous record of the shipping history.
Also, our previous order history indicates that 10 pieces were ordered. So it should be fine if you could ship 10 pieces to us.

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Greetings,

It's ○○.
Thank you very much for shopping with me.

I play football and foot sal.
I love football!
So I do the football matches very much!

Please do let me know if any other items would be of your interest.
Your referral to your friends about me would be appreciated.

p.s. If you are looking for any Japanese items other than football related, please feel free to contact me!
I will do my best to support you 100%!
Good Luck!

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Hello

This is ○○.
Thank you very much for purchasing my item.

I play football and futsal.
I love football!
I also like football matches very much!

Please do let me know if you would like to buy any other items.
And your recommendation to your friends about me would be appreciated.

p.s. If you are looking for any Japanese items other than football related, please feel free to contact me!
I will do my best to support you 100%!
Good Luck!

元の翻訳
I was able to log in after modified ABC with the option 2 in the following url (as my first attempt failed, I deleted the last two lines and it worked fine).
Thanks for upgrading the version. However an error message appears when I clicked the logo after setting the top page with DEF. No need to support, just fyi.

Sorry to bother you again, but I would appreciate if you could upload the GHI list page.

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I was able to log in after modified ABC with the option 2 in the following URL (as my first attempt failed, I deleted the last two lines and it worked fine).
Thanks for upgrading the version. However an error message appears when I clicked the logo after setting the top page with DEF. No need to support, just fyi.

Sorry to bother you again, but I would appreciate if you could upload the GHI list page.

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so I currently serve as a teacher at this unified educational offering elementary through junior high school educations.
As a mother of three, I feel truly blessed for being able to pursue my career.

Lisa, the birth giving experience will bring you a whole new world.
It might give you a different insight which would motivate you to challenge something new.

However, remain calm and enjoy your moments with your children. Before you know it, your wants will come to you.
Ten years ago when I gave birth to my oldest, Yuzua, I left my job and had gone through the anxiety, nevertheless I tried to enjoy juggling my web design career and parenting.

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I currently serve as a teacher at a unified educational institution offering elementary through junior high school education and attended by special-needs children.
As a mother of three, I feel truly blessed for being able to pursue my career.

Lisa, the experience of giving birth will open up a whole new world for you.
It might give you a different perspective that will motivate you to try something new.

However, remain calm and enjoy your moments with your children. Before you know it, what you want will come to you.
Ten years ago when I gave birth to my oldest, Yuzua, I left my job and went through some anxiety; nevertheless, I tried to enjoy juggling my web design career and parenting.

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It'll never be late to challenge new things.
I have obtained a teaching license at the age of 22.
Only if you know what I am saying, until I got motivated to support the handicapped education at 39, I had never thought this would have done any good. (*^_^*)

Lisa,
I am proud of your for being so cool and smart, willing to challenge new things, without loosing se for no matter what. Chances can be found anywhere if you think outside the box. With all that being said, I learn a lot from you.

So let's do it!! I am with you right here. Come and join in the world of motherhood leaving your worries behind!

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It'll never be late to challenge new things.
I have obtained a teaching license at the age of 22.
Only if you know what I am saying, until I got motivated to support the handicapped education at 39, I had never thought this would have done any good. (*^_^*)

Lisa,
I am proud of your for being so cool and smart, willing to challenge new things, without losing (se) for no matter what. Chances can be found anywhere if you think outside the box. With all that being said, I learn a lot from you.

So let's do it!!! I am with you right here. Come and join in the world of motherhood leaving your worries behind!

元の翻訳
Kindly find the attached purchase order in PDF format.

I understood your point.
So you are going to ship my previous order, correct?
Among those listed for the order this time, please take out whatever available and ship them together with my last order.
If possible, please include Tripods and DOLLY to the upcoming shipment.

Because I want my last order to be shipped today for sure, you could just focus on what you can ship today while leaving the remaining items behind for now.

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Kindly find the attached purchase order in PDF format.

I understood your point.
So you are going to ship my previous order, correct?
Among those listed for the order this time, please take out whatever available and ship them together with my last order.
If possible, please include Tripods and DOLLY in the upcoming shipment.

Because I want my last order to be shipped today for sure, please just focus on what you can ship today while leaving the remaining items behind for now.

元の翻訳
#ill
The item I purchased is the following:

It says New on eBay, but the correct description should be MINT?
Or would it be another head?

If it were for another head, would the specification be the same?
(I mean, TOUR ISSUE SLDR SILVER 10.5 (Toe Screw)?)

Awaiting your reply.

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#ill
The item I purchased is the following:

It says New on eBay, but should the correct description be MINT?
Or would it be another head?

If it were another head, would the specification be the same?
(I mean, TOUR ISSUE SLDR SILVER 10.5 (Toe Screw)?)

Awaiting your reply.

元の翻訳
Only 1 inventory is available for this version. I would apply 5% discount, how does this sound to you? If you'd like to, you may use this coupon here.
Another customer has been inquiring about B, so it might be sold out. Please excuse us in such case.
Would you please place an order by adding the item in the eBay shopping cart? If there is any discrepancy with the shipping fee, we will let you know in reply to this message.

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We have only one item in stock for this version. How about a 5% discount? If you'd like to, you may use this coupon here.
Another customer has been inquiring about B, so it might be sold out. Please excuse us in such case.
Would you please place an order by adding the item to your eBay shopping cart? If there is any discrepancy with the shipping fee, we will let you know in reply to this message.

元の翻訳
Next week, either on Thursday and Friday, Tanaka, Yamada, and Sato are tied up with respective errands. So they are unable to attend the meeting. I on the other hand will be available all next week except for Friday. If my sole attendance is okay with you, please let me know.

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On both Thursday and Friday next week, Tanaka, Yamada, and Sato are tied up with respective errands. So they are unable to attend the meeting. I on the other hand will be available only Friday as far as next week. If you don't mind their absence, please let me know.

元の翻訳
Next week, either on Thursday and Friday, Tanaka, Yamada, and Sato are tied up with respective errands. So they are unable to attend the meeting. I on the other hand will be available all next week except for Friday. If my sole attendance is okay with you, please let me know.

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Next week, either on Thursday and Friday, Tanaka, Yamada, and Sato are tied up with respective errands. So they are unable to attend the meeting. I on the other hand will be available all next week [except for Friday]. If my sole attendance is okay with you, please let me know.