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元の翻訳
[Fees] General ticket JPY1,000 (incl. tax)

[General Ticket Sales] Starts at 10:00 am on 10/4 (Sat).
Ticket PIA http://md-ticket.pia.jp/pia/ticketInformation.do?eventCd=1444462&rlsCd=001

[Contact Information] Toyo Gakuen University TEL 04-7150-3001
Hire Hire Festival: HP http://www.tyg.jp/campuslife/school_festival.html

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[Fees] General ticket JPY1,000 (incl. tax)

[General Ticket Sales] Starts at 10:00 AM on Oct. 4 (Sat).
Ticket PIA http://md-ticket.pia.jp/pia/ticketInformation.do?eventCd=1444462&rlsCd=001

[Contact Information] Toyo Gakuen University TEL 04-7150-3001
Hire Hire Festival HP： http://www.tyg.jp/campuslife/school_festival.html

元の翻訳
Hello,
Thank you for the contact.
This item of course is authentic manufacturer's.
I would not say females cannot use the merchandise, but fundamentally it is for men.
This is because some may find it irritant depnding on his/her skin type.
I would not recommend this to customers with sensitive skin.
Also, as for its effects, I am not supposed to make any statements due to the Pharmaceutical Affairs Law.
I apologize the inconvenience.
Nevertheless, Yanagiya's producs are popular in Japan, too.
Personally, in the past, I used to use its hairdressing.
The feature of this hair tonic are its fresh usability and its freglance.
Please be careful that this is a hair tonic, but not a hair growing formula.

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Hello,
Thank you for the contact.
This item, of course is authentic manufacturer's.
[This item, is of course, from the original manufacturer]↵
I would not say females cannot use the merchandise, but fundamentally it is for men.
This is because some may find it irritant depending (spelling ) on his/her skin type.
I do not recommend this for customers with sensitive skin.
Also, as to its effects, I am not allowed to make any statements due to the Pharmaceutical Affairs Law.
I apologize the inconvenience.
Nevertheless, Yanagiya's products (spelling) are popular in Japan, too.
Personally, in the past, I used to use its hairdressing.
[I have used it personally in the past for hairdressing]↵
The feature of this hair tonic is (not plural) its fresh usability and its fragrance. (spelling)
Please note that this is a hair tonic, not a hair growth formula.

元の翻訳
小包の返品にかかる配送コストはどのようにしますか？
もしそちらでご負担いただけることであればImport-Recount-Numberという輸入顧客番号が必要です。この番号は9桁で最初の2桁は95か96からはじまります。
もしくはこちらで配送料を負担しなければならない、あるいは料金を折半し商品の通常金額に加えもう一方の配送コストをお支払頂けるということで、事前に配送コストを追跡します。

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小包の返品にかかる配送コストはどのようにしますか？
もしそちらでご負担いただけることであればImport-Recount-Numberという輸入顧客番号が必要です。この番号は9桁で最初の2桁は95か96からはじまります。
もしくはこちらで配送料を負担しなければならない、あるいは料金を折半し商品の通常金額に加え配送コストの半分をお支払いください。↵
事前に配送コストを調べておきます。

元の翻訳
Dear ○○,

Hello.

I understood, thank you and best regards.

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Dear ○○,

Hello.

I understand, thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
Thank you for ordering A and B this time.
There are 2 things I would like to ask for your confirmation:
1. AA that you ordered is the replacement blade for BB, is this okay with you?
2. Since you ordered 2 items, may I pack them together for shipment? In this case, we could give you $2.5 discount, so we will refund it after shipment.

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Thank you for ordering A and B this time.
There are 2 things I would like to ask for your confirmation:
1. AA that you ordered is not the replacement blade for BB, is this okay with you?
2. Since you ordered 2 items, may I pack them together for shipment? In this case, we could give you $2.5 discount, so we will refund it after shipment.↵
↵
I shall be waiting for your message.

元の翻訳
(1) I believe he got the bruise on his chin when the microphone hit him. I don't know (how he got) the scar on his lip. Do you know how he ended up getting the bruise on his chin?
(2) We are at the Disney Land today. It's in the middle of the Halloween season.
(3) It is exactly what was on my mind, too.
(4) He entertains us by posting fun videos.
(5) You always cut accross, right?
(6) I am too busy at work that I may not be able to go to the concert. If I could go there even for a day would make me glad though...
(7) I had so much fun!

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(1) I believe he got the bruise on his chin when the microphone hit him. I don't know (how he got) the scar on his lip. Do you know how he ended up getting the bruise on his chin?
(2) We are at Disneyland today. It's in the middle of the Halloween season.
(3) It is exactly what was on my mind as well.
(4) He entertains us by posting funny videos.
(5) You always cut accross, right?
(6) I am so busy at work that I may not be able to go to the concert. If I could go there even for a day would make me glad though...
(7) I had so much fun!

元の翻訳
● I purchased the item for the purpose of resale.
In the country where I sell the item, the BOX is considered as a part of the product, and they are very nervous about its condition, too. Please be sure to pack and ship it thoroughly to avoid a spot, a scratch, or a dent on it.
Also, it would be happy to get the item shipped as soon as possible.
Sorry to bother you but your cooperation is appreciated.

● THank you for your contact.
Your cooperation is appreciated.

● Are you sure the box has not been opened?
Are you sure there are not any spots, scratches, or dents on the box?
Because I am planning to buy the item for resale, please let me know.

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● I purchased the item for the purpose of resale.
In the country where I sell the item, the BOX is considered as a part of the product, and they are very fastidious about its condition, too. Please be sure to pack and ship it thoroughly to avoid a spot, a scratch, or a dent on it.
Also, it would be happy to get the item shipped as soon as possible.
Sorry to bother you but your cooperation is appreciated.

● Thank you for your contact.
Your cooperation is appreciated.

● Are you sure the box has not been opened?
Are you sure there are not any spots, scratches, or dents on the box?
Please let me know because I am planning to buy the item for resale.

元の翻訳
Appreciate your reply.

I understood your situation.
As you mentioned, I admit there was a lack of communication that you could use the residence only for the month of August and September.
Regarding your proposal of paying for the same amount of rent as an employee, that is fine.
As you wish to stay in the residency till the end of the term, could you please let me know when does the school term end?
We will take you request into consideration, but please understand that it would be difficult because the subsequent comer's schedule.

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Thank you for your reply.

I understand your situation.
As you mentioned, I admit there was a lack of communication that you could use the residence only for the months of August and September.
It is okay for you to pay the same rent as an employee would in line with your proposal.
As you wish to stay in the dorm until the end of the term, could you please let me know when the school term ends?
We will take you request into consideration, but please understand that it would be difficult because of the next tenant's schedule.

元の翻訳
この商品に関しまして出品価格のお値引きはこれ以上できないのですが、もしよろしければ、商品は速達配送追加料金なしのままで消費税50%割引をご提案することが可能です。

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この商品に関しまして出品価格のお値引きはこれ以上できないのですが、もしよろしければ、商品は速達配送追加料金なしのままで売上税50%割引をご提案することが可能です。