翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

この度はＡとＢをご注文頂きありがとう御座います。
ご注文に関しまして2点ご確認したい事があります
１．あなたが今回注文したＡＡはＢＢの替え刃ではありませんがお間違いなかったですか？
２．今回2点ご注文頂きましたので同梱での発送で良いですか？その場合2.5ドルの割引が可能ですので発送後に返金させて頂きます

またご連絡をお待ちしております

英語

Thank you for ordering A and B this time.
There are 2 things I would like to ask for your confirmation:
1. AA that you ordered is the replacement blade for BB, is this okay with you?
2. Since you ordered 2 items, may I pack them together for shipment? In this case, we could give you $2.5 discount, so we will refund it after shipment.

レビュー ( 1 )

fujisawa_2014はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/10/09 19:53:56

元の翻訳
Thank you for ordering A and B this time.
There are 2 things I would like to ask for your confirmation:
1. AA that you ordered is the replacement blade for BB, is this okay with you?
2. Since you ordered 2 items, may I pack them together for shipment? In this case, we could give you $2.5 discount, so we will refund it after shipment.

修正後
Thank you for ordering A and B this time.
There are 2 things I would like to ask for your confirmation:
1. AA that you ordered is not the replacement blade for BB, is this okay with you?
2. Since you ordered 2 items, may I pack them together for shipment? In this case, we could give you $2.5 discount, so we will refund it after shipment.↵
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I shall be waiting for your message.

It is NOT a replacement is a very important fact.

[tearz]

レビューありがとうございました。「替え刃」＝spare razor blade でお願いします。