NAOKO.N (tani1973) — 付けたレビュー

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I understand. I will sell it to you for $210.
One question, do you have a PayPal account? I accept payments through PayPal only, because it is the safest way to do a transaction for both seller and buyer.
Please be assured that PayPal will protect you for whatever the trouble you may be involved.

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I understand. I will sell it to you for $210.
One question, do you have a PayPal account? I accept payments through PayPal only, because it is the safest way to do a transaction for both seller and buyer.
Please be assured that PayPal will protect you from whatever the trouble you may be involved.

元の翻訳
I understand you. I can give you $210.
I would like to ask you. Do you have a PayPal account? I only accept to make a PayPal payment. Because this is safe for a seller and a buyer.
You have nothing to worry about troubles because PayPal protect you.

Best regards,

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I understand you. I can give it to you at $210.
I would like to ask you. Do you have a PayPal account? I only accept a PayPal payment. Because this is safe for a seller and a buyer.
You have nothing to worry about troubles because PayPal will protect you.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for the late reply. If the goods go through the costoms without problems, it should be arrived in 3 to 5 days from the shipment.
Please take it into consideration.

Regards,

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I'm sorry for the late reply. If the goods go through the costoms without problems, it should arrive in 3 to 5 days from the shipment.
Please take it into consideration.

Regards,

元の翻訳
A. This sharp pen is equipped with lead. Moreover, you can use leads that are generally available in the market.
B. The vintage items of OO were uploaded in a lot of stores today. Although there are cuts on the boxes, there are a lot of items which contain contents in extremely good conditions so I am recommending it. The price is also very cheap.

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A. This mechanical pencil is equipped with lead. Moreover, you can use leads that are generally available in the market.
B. The vintage items of OO were uploaded in a lot of stores today. Although there are cuts on the boxes, there are a lot of items which contain contents in extremely good conditions so I am recommending it. The price is also very cheap.

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Did you read the mail that I sent on Tuesday? I would appreciate a reply because I am keeping a customer waiting.
I will repeat what I wrote in the previous mail.

Regarding Pillow Cover #9645
A customer who purchased the "Reading Pillow" would also like to purchase the Pillow Cover.
However, although I searched your website I could not find this product.
Might it be the case that production of this product has been suspended?
If you will receive inventory of this product in the future, could you please tell me when you expect it to be?
Also, if it's the case that production of this product has been suspended, could you please tell me a suitable substitute product?

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Did you read the mail that I sent on Tuesday? I would appreciate a reply because I am keeping a customer waiting.
I will repeat what I wrote in the previous mail.

Regarding Pillow Cover #9645
A customer who purchased the "Reading Pillow" would also like to purchase the Pillow Cover.
However, although I searched your website I could not find this product.
Might it be the case that production of this product has been discontinued?
If you have this product in stock in the future, could you please tell me when you expect it to be?
Also, in case the production of this product discontinues, could you please tell me what its equivalent product would be?

元の翻訳
Sorry for my late response.
As for the date of the training, please arrange that it will begin at 10:00(CET) on Nov. 13th(Thurs).
I want to confirm the begining time, is 18:00(JPT) right?
Would you tell me about the details of the training and the way to join it?
Thank you for your help.

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Sorry for my late response.
As for the date of the training, please arrange so that it will begin at 10:00(CET) on Nov. 13th(Thurs).
I want to confirm the begining time, is 18:00(JPT) right?
Would you tell me about the details of the training and the way to join it?
Thank you for your help.

元の翻訳
It's about a article at reference number xxx what i receaved.I checked the contents and there were just, some parts in a plastic bag and description, There were n't a power unit motor what i need. It's defect and i can't use it.

And there isn't other cup in a small plastic bag what it must be with in this oder. You don't expleined avout this product already opend what you say that is a new article. I have to ask you retourn of payment all of amount money or 100 $ like a compensation for this defect article.

Please send me your answer immediately about it.

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It's about an article with reference number xxx that I receaved.I checked the contents and there were just some parts in a plastic bag and a instruction manual. There wasn't a power unit motor that I really need. It's defective and I can't use it.

And there isn't another cap in a small plastic bag that it must be included in this order. You didn't explain about these missing parts although the description was saying that the package was opened but it is a new article. I have to ask you the return of full payment or a refund of $100 as a compensation for this defective article.

Please send me your answer immediately about it.

元の翻訳
The product (item no. xxx) I bought ealier, I found that only plastic bag put parts and an instruction. The power unit, the motoer and the most important item was not composed. This can't be used and is totaly defective. In addition, the small bag including cap was also should be composed but it was not. The instruction seems to be opened and says it is new, but no explanaton. I' d like to be refund all money by send you back, or pay back part of cost of $100 as compensation of defective product. I appreciate of your quick response.

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For the product (item no. xxx) I bought ealier, I received only a plastic bag including parts and an instruction manual. The power unit, a motor which is the most important item, was not included. This can't be used and is totally defective. In addition, a small bag including a cap also should be included but it is not. The description was saying it had a trace that the package was opened but the item is new, but there was no explanaton about those missing parts. I'd like to receive a full refund by sending it back to you, or a partial refund of $100 as compensation for the defective product. I appreciate your quick response.

元の翻訳
1. I could search it for you if you could let me know the image of the item you wouuld like or the web page address of the movie on YouTube. I have A, B, etc. if you are looking for those sold in 90s. Please let me know if you are interested.
2. What do you mean by "A"? Sorry that I am not familiar with English. It would be helpful if you could let me know what "A" is by sending me a photo.
3. If it is okay with you, would you please return the item via SAL with a tracking number? I will repay you via eBay after the item is delivered here. The return shipping fee you will be covering will be repaid to you from PayPal.

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1. I could search for it for you if you could let me know the image of the item you would like or the web page address of the movie on YouTube. I have A, B, etc. if you are looking for those sold in 90s. Please let me know if you are interested.
2. What do you mean by "A"? Sorry that I am not familiar with English. It would be helpful if you could let me know what "A" is by sending me a photo.
3. If it is okay with you, would you please return the item via SAL with a tracking number? I will repay you via eBay after the item is delivered here. The return shipping fee you will be covering will be repaid to you by PayPal.

元の翻訳
However, you misunderstand it. I have not hired a fake person and raised the bidding price. I wonder why you thought so? As you can understand if you see the history of the bidding, the bidding price of the 2nd and the 3rd are 29 dollars and 27 dollars respectively.

You had won the bidding of my sword before. At that time, you said hello to me in Japanese and I was very happy about it.
I am not good at English at all, and cannnot explain well in many cases(I usually use the translation at free of charge, but this sentence is translated by paying).
I have not taken an illegal act at all. I would like to prove it, but I don't know how to do it.

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However, you are misunderstanding. I have not hired a fake buyer and raised the bidding price. I wonder why you thought so. As you can understand from the history of the bidding, the bidding prices of the 2nd and the 3rd are 29 dollars and 27 dollars respectively.

You won the bidding of my sword before. At that time, you said hello to me in Japanese and I was very happy at it.
I am not good at English at all, and often cannnot explain well about the situation (I usually use a translation service for free of charge, but I paid for the translation for this sentence).
I have never cheated. I would like to prove it, but I don't know how to do it.

元の翻訳
ご連絡ありがとうございます。4か月間の休暇を経て、販売を再開したいということですね。

あなたのアカウントチェックしたところ、アカウントが休暇ステイタスになっていました。再度販売するには、リスティングステイタスを「アクティブ」にする必要があります。

休暇から戻った、あるいは販売を再開する準備が整った時に、リスティングステイタスのページにアクセスし、編集ボタンを押してから「アクティブ」ボタンを選択し、「更新」ボタンをクリックするだけです。1時間もかからずに、リスティングは再びBで販売できるようになります。

リスティングステイタスを編集できるのは、在庫管理を許可されているユーザーです。

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ご連絡ありがとうございます。4か月間の休暇を経て、販売を再開したいということですね。

あなたのアカウントチェックしたところ、アカウントが休暇ステイタスになっていました。再度販売するには、リスティング（出品）ステイタスを「アクティブ（有効）」にする必要があります。

休暇から戻った、あるいは販売を再開する準備が整った時に、リスティング（出品）ステイタスのページにアクセスし、編集ボタンを押してから「アクティブ（有効）」ボタンを選択し、「更新」ボタンをクリックするだけです。1時間もかからずに、あなたの出品商品は再びBで販売できるようになります。

リスティング（出品）ステイタスを編集できるのは、在庫管理を許可されているユーザーです。

元の翻訳
I have received 1 battery out of 7 that I had ordered. However, there are visible scratches on it and it cannot be 'brand new' condition.
If the remaining 6 would be in the same condition, I would open the case for refund.

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I have received 1 battery out of 7 that I ordered. However, there are visible scratches on it and it cannot be 'brand new' condition.
If the remaining 6 were in the same condition, I would open a case for refund.

元の翻訳
リコーの「gr1」はしかｋり動いてますか？LEDライトは点滅していていますか？
とても興味があります。とても安いのも魅力的ですが、オーストラリアに住んでいて、カメラの送料は高くなりますよね？

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リコーの「gr1」はしっかり動いてますか？LEDライトは見えてますか？機能していますか？
とても興味があります。これは一番安い価格ですか？オーストラリアに住んでいて、カメラの送料は高くなるのはわかりますがカメラの価格はどうですか？

元の翻訳
I received the product I ordered other day. But there are quite a few discrepancies comparing to an original product I already have.
Is your product really an original?
Also, did you check the product before shipping? Nothing is displayed when I connect it to the main unit.
Since it looks like it's a defective unit, send me a replacement or refund me.
Of course, I will return the product I received.
So, please send me the return address.

As I uploaded a movie to show that the product is defective, please check the URL below.

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I received the product I ordered the other day. But there are quite a few discrepancies compared to an original product I already have.
Is your product really original?
Also, did you check the product before shipping? Nothing is displayed when I connect it to the main unit.
Since it seems to be a defective unit, send me a replacement or refund me.
Of course, I will return the product I received.
So, please send me your return address.

As I uploaded a movie to show that the product is defective, please check the URL below.

元の翻訳
Xiaomiのeコマースプラットフォームを北京のデータセンターからカリフォルニアとシンガポールにあるAmazonのAWSデータセンターに移行する作業はすでに始まっており、今月末までに完了する予定である。

Mi Account、Cloud Messaging、Mi Cloud servicesを含めたMIUIサービスの北京からオレゴンとシンガポールのAWSサーバーへの移行は2014年末までに完了する見込みである。

Xiaomiはブラジルやインド市場のようなAmazon AWSサービスが利用できない地域においては、2015年初頭にローカルサーバーをより拡大していく予定である。

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Xiaomiのeコマースプラットフォームを北京のデータセンターからカリフォルニアとシンガポールにあるAmazonのAWSデータセンターに移行する作業はすでに始まっており、今月末までに完了する予定である。

Mi Account、Cloud Messaging、Mi Cloud servicesを含めたMIUIサービスの北京からオレゴンとシンガポールのAWSサーバーへの移行は2014年末までに完了する見込みである。

Xiaomiはブラジルやインド市場のようなAmazon AWSサービスが利用できない地域においては、2015年にローカルサーバーが開始し、より拡大していく予定である。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。リールはすぐ受け取れました、ありがとう。
リールを調べて、状態が良いのを確認しましたが、ハンドル組立体の下に金属の削りくずがあるのを見つけました。（添付の写真を見てください。）
これはそこにあるべきものではなく、何か欠陥があることを示すのでは。
またthe # 12 スペーサー が欠品しています（添付のリールダイアグラムの写真を見てください）し、ハンドルがそのせいでぐらついて安定してません。
私の古いリールのスペーサーで直しているところです。
もし直せなければ返品して返金を請求する必要があります。よろしく。

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こんにちは。リールはすぐ受け取れました、ありがとう。
状態が良いことを確認するためにリールを調べましたが、ハンドル組立体の下に金属の削りくずがあるのを見つけました。（添付の写真を見てください。）
これはそこにあるべきものではなく、何か欠陥があることを示すのでは。
またthe # 12 スペーサー が欠品しています（添付のリールダイアグラムの写真を見てください）し、ハンドルがそのせいでぐらついて安定してません。
私の古いリールのスペーサーで直しているところです。
もし直せなければ返品して返金を請求する必要があります。よろしく。

元の翻訳
I will bit. Is it Hemmed up? I'm looking forward to your reply.

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I will bid. Is it hemmed up? I'm looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
It has been about 2 weeks since the shipping notification, I cannot track it yet.
Is there some mistake with the tracking number? Please send me the correct tracking number.

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It has been about 2 weeks since the shipping notification, I cannot track it yet.
Isn't there something wrong with the tracking number? Please send me the correct tracking number.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for the late reply.
Originally, the item is not intended for the English speaking countries.
Therefore, we do not have replacement.

If you are would not be satisfied with the item, please return it.
We will issue a refund after receiving the return as stipulated in the Amazon's return policy.

We are truly sorry for the inconvenience we have caused.

If you have anything you would like us to do, please let us know.

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I am sorry for the late reply.
Originally, the item is not intended for the English speaking countries.
Therefore, we do not have replacement.

If you would not be satisfied with the item, please return it.
We will issue a refund after receiving the return as stipulated in the Amazon's return policy.

We are truly sorry for the inconvenience we have caused.

If you have anything you would like us to do, please let us know.

元の翻訳
Good work at Internship.

We thank you for your work.

The transportation expense(4,30 yen ) will be transferred to your bank account with your May's saraly at 30th May.
You must return PC and security card that we lend you.
Can you bring them to our office whenever you can?
If you could, please tell us when you come to our office.

In addiction to this, we want to know the schedule that you out your dormitory.
Please let us know your schedule.

Thank you.

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Good work at Internship.

We thank you for your work.

The transportation expense(4,30 yen ) will be transferred to your bank account with your May's salary on 30th May.
You must return the PC and the security card that we lend you.
Can you bring them to our office whenever you can?
If you could, please tell us when you come to our office.

In addiction to this, we want to know the schedule when you leave the dormitory.
Please let us know your schedule.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
"She is Kurara, isn't she? Recently I saw her on TV often. She is a medium, isn't she?"
"Yeah. Don't you like supernatural things, Michiru?"
"Yes. Why are women strict with other women? I think she is a fine woman."
"Ah, I understand. You dislike that woman."
*
If you have a complaint, bite onions by yourself.
*
Child as I was, that revenge terrified me.
*
This is not thetime to read it.

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"She is Kurara, isn't she? Recently I have seen her on TV often. She is a medium, isn't she?"
"Yeah. Don't you like supernatural things, Michiru?"
"Yes. Why are women strict with other women? I think she is a fine woman."
"Ah, I understand. You dislike that woman."
*
If you have a complaint, bite onions by yourself.
*
Child as I was, that revenge terrified me.
*
This is not the time to read it.

元の翻訳
I bought some goods from you before.
I want to make a successful bit for your goods. But it is said that to deliver to japan is impossible.
If it is possible to bit in japan, please allow me to do.
I hope to make a tender of your goods.
But before this trade, I want to confarm some points.
I understand the risk while goods delivering. So please use the cheepest air mail to deliver them.
In case of the size of goods that you exhibit, I should pay ＄13.45for FLAT BOX.
Please confarm whether it is posdible to use it.

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I bought some goods from you before.
I want to make a successful bid for your goods. But it is said that to deliver to Japan is impossible.
If it is possible to bid in Japan, please allow me to do.
I hope to make a tender for your goods.
But before this trade, I want to confirm some points.
I understand the risk while goods being delivered. So please use the cheepest air mail to deliver them.
In the case of the size of goods that you list, I should pay ＄13.45 for FLAT RATE BOX.
Please confirm whether it is possible to use it.