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元の翻訳
Thank you very much for contacting us.
Yes, we should have confirmed as soon as it was delivered.
And the product was made 40 years ago so we understand that the quality was not guaranteed, either.
But there is no doubt about the issue of the volume so we will fix it.

We understand your request.
Only $100 is acceptable so please return it by PAYPAL.
Once we received the money, we will not put the negative feedback.

We will use the money for fixing it.
Thank you very much in advance.

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Thank you very much for contacting us.
Yes, we should have confirmed as soon as it was delivered.
And the product was made 40 years ago so we understand that the quality is not guaranteed, either.
But there is no doubt about the issue of the volume so we will have it fixed.

We understand your request.
Only $100 is acceptable so please return it by PAYPAL.
Once we received the money, we will not put a negative feedback.

We will use the money as a part of repair cost.
Thank you very much in advance.

元の翻訳
It may be noy my business but I think it would be well sold if you set the change log that not only buyers but also the viewers.

And the Adsense of the demo website is not shown.
Can you tell me if the website was banned only, or the account was banned?

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It may not be my business but I think it would sell well if you set the change log to be viewable to non-buyers as well as buyers.

And the Adsense of the demo website is not shown.
Can you tell me if only the website was banned, or the account was banned?

元の翻訳
It might be too much to say , but you can sell it better if you set the change log in the way that those other than the purchasers can see.↵

The Adsense at the demonstration website is not shown.
Could you tell me if only the website was banned or the account was banned?

修正後
It might be too much to say , but you can sell it better if you set the change log to be viewable to non-purchasers as well as purchasers.
The Adsense at the demonstration website is not shown.
Could you tell me if only the website was banned or the account was banned?

元の翻訳
当社の会計部によるとその請求書は支払い済みとのことです。下のスクリーンショットをご覧下さい。

あなたの銀行に連絡を取り、記録を再確認して何が起きたか調べてみていただけませんでしょうか?

この謎がほどなく解けることを願っております。

修正後
当社の会計部によるとその請求書は支払い済みとのことです。以下のスクリーンショットをご覧下さい。

御社の銀行に連絡を取り、記録を再確認して何が起きたか調べてみていただけませんでしょうか?

この謎がほどなく解けることを願っております。

元の翻訳
弊社の会計部は、請求書が支払い済みであると言っております。以下のスクリーンショットをご参照ください。

銀行へ連絡し、記録を再チェック、状況を調べてください。

本件が迅速に解決しますように。

修正後
弊社の会計部は、請求書が支払い済みであると言っております。以下のスクリーンショットをご参照ください。

御社の銀行へ連絡し、記録を再チェックし、状況を調べてください。

本件が迅速に解決しますように。

元の翻訳
That' my teacher.
Thank you for understanding my weakness. You are such a wonderful support for me. I want to express my gratitude to you. It's been only three months since I came to Singapore and I've been in new surroundings . There is nobody who can speak Japanese at work and it also makes me feel difficulty here.
Thank you for giving me a chance that I can think of things besides work. You look very happy these days and I like your smile. That also makes me happy and I appreciate your unexpected support.

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Your advice is to the point as I expected.
Thank you for understanding my weakness. You are such a wonderful support for me. I want to express my gratitude to you. It's been only three months since I came to Singapore and I've been in new surroundings . There is no one who can speak Japanese at work and it also makes me feel difficulty here.
Thank you for giving me a chance that I can think of things besides work. You look very happy these days and I like your smile. That also makes me happy and I appreciate your unexpected support.

元の翻訳
The best experience in London
I took the ticket of a musical, which had good reputations, because I wanted to see it while I was in London.
I believe it was the best experience in the 3 days.
This 'Phantom of the Opera' was spectacular. The stage set was well-equipped since many long-run plays have been out in the theater.
That's why it can produce such dynamism and it was absolutely mind-blowing.
In addition to that, the colorful and fantastical direction were so beautiful that I couldn't help but sigh, and the actors were splendid.
Considering all together, it was a genuinely beautiful 'piece'.

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The best experience in London
I got a ticket for a musical, which had good reputations, because I wanted to see it while I was in London.
I believe it was the best experience in the 3 days.
This 'Phantom of the Opera' was spectacular. The stage set was well-equipped since many long-run plays have been out in the theater.
That's why it can produce such dynamism and it was absolutely mind-blowing.
In addition to that, the colorful and fantastical staging was so beautiful that I couldn't help but sigh, and the actors were splendid.
Considering all together, it was a genuinely beautiful 'piece'.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for sending us the information on the meeting in detail.

Unfortunately, Mr/Ms. A has an another meeting from 11:30,
would you please change the meeting schedule so that it will be from 11:00 until 11:30?

I have included Mr/Ms. Murakami and XX in this email as CC.
Please coordinate further with them on this meeting.

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Thank you very much for sending us the detailed information about the meeting.

Unfortunately, Mr/Ms. A has another meeting from 11:30,
would you please reschedule the meeting to from 11:00 until 11:30?

I have included Mr/Ms. Murakami and XX in this email as CC.
In the future, please contact them to reschedule this meeting.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending the detailed information regarding the meeting.

As A has another appointment at 11:00,
could you change the meeting to between 11:00 and 11:30?

We added Murakami and xx at the CC.
From now, would you adjust about the meeting with them?

修正後
Thank you for sending the detailed information regarding the meeting.

As A has another appointment at 11:30,
could you reschedule the meeting to between 11:00 and 11:30?

We added Murakami and xx as CC.
From now on, would you contact them to reschedule the meeting?

元の翻訳
Product a and Product B is a set. It is one product to put together Product A and Product B.
As you can see with product page, Product A is a body part and Product B is the base.
So please decide the price in total $300 with Product A and Product B.
Product A is $300 and Product B is $300 so far.
If it is under the present circumstances, the price is twice as high as the actual price.
Please change the price to $300 with Product A and Product B putting together.

修正後
Product a and Product B are supposed to be sold as a set. It should be one product consisting of Product A and Product B.
As you can see on the product page, Product A is a body part and Product B is the base.
So please change the price to be $300 for a set of Product A and Product B.
Product A is $300 and Product B is $300 so far.
If the prices are not changed, the total amount is twice as high as the actual price.
Please change the price to $300 for a set of Product A and Product B.

元の翻訳
This product is consist of the product A and B.
Two of them (the product A and B) makes one product.
The product A is the body part and B is the base for A as you can see on the product page.
I would like to ask you to change the price to $300 in total of product A and B.
The current price is $300 for the product A and $300 for the product B.
This makes the total price double the actual purchasing price.
I am sincerely asking to change the total purchasing price to $300 which should be including the product A and B.

修正後
This product consists of the product A and B.
Two of them (the product A and B) make one product.
The product A is the body part and B is the base for A as you can see on the product page.
I would like to ask you to change the price to $300 in total of product A and B.
The current price is $300 for the product A and $300 for the product B.
This makes the total price double the actual purchasing price.
I am sincerely asking to change the total purchasing price to $300 which should be including the product A and B.

元の翻訳
I received a negative rating from my buyer. For me it seems a one-sided claim which says this person has not received the order yet even if scheduled delivery date is from February 20 to March 13.
Is it possible to delete this rating? The package has already arrived in the US.
Thank you for your understanding.

修正後
I received a negative rating from my buyer. For me it seems a one-sided complaint which says this person has not received the order yet even if scheduled delivery date is from February 20 to March 13.
Is it possible to delete this rating? The package has already arrived in the US.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
I received negative feedback from you. Allegedly the reason is because it has not been delivered yet although delivery date is scheduled between February 20 and March 13. Is it possible to delete it? Your item has already arrived in US. Thank you in advance.

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I received negative feedback from a customer. Allegedly the reason is because it has not been delivered yet although delivery date is scheduled between February 20 and March 13. Is it possible to delete it? The customer's item has already arrived in US. Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I received a negative feedback from a customer. Despite the fact the delivery schedule was stated as sometime between Feb 20 and Mar 31, he posted a claim for having not received it yet.
Is it possible to have the feedback deleted? The customer's item has already arrived in the US. Thank you.

修正後
I received a negative feedback from a customer. Despite the fact the delivery schedule was stated as sometime between Feb 20 and Mar 31, he posted a complaint for having not received it yet.
Is it possible to have the feedback deleted? The customer's item has already arrived in the US. Thank you.

元の翻訳
この方たち全員にメールを送信してください。ファックス番号および電話番号を記載して、「２ページ目」成田の猫がいる場所、と印字されたファックスの写しを送ってください。彼らは２ページ目を作成しなかったのです。なくなったのではありません。彼らが作成しなかったのです。
下記全てのメールアドレスへ送信してください!!!!!!!!!!!!!
そして空港オフィス用の電話番号及びファックス番号と一緒に、私へ送り返してください!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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この方たち全員にメールを送信してください。ファックス番号および電話番号を記載して、「２ページ目」猫がいる成田、と印字されたファックスの写しを送ってください。彼らは２ページ目を作成しなかったのです。なくなったのではありません。彼らが作成しなかったのです。
下記全てのメールアドレスへ送信してください!!!!!!!!!!!!!
そして空港オフィスの電話番号及びファックス番号と一緒に、私へ送り返してください!!!!!!!!!!!!!

元の翻訳
I have sent you the January's invoice some days ago.
Have you checked it already?
Also, what about the October's amount which is not yet paid as I told you earlier?
Since January was our settlement period, we can not proceed our expense calculation process and it is bothering us.
I know you must be busy but I would like to ask you to respond as soon as possible.

I have completed this translation but I can not complete the task since error messages are coming up.
Could you please do the completing process instead of me?

Regards,

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I sent you the January's invoice some days ago.
Have you checked it already?
Also, what about the unpaid October's amount I told you about earlier?
Since January was our settlement period, we cannot proceed with our expense calculation process and are at a loss.
I know you must be busy but I would like to ask you to respond as soon as possible.

I have completed my translation but I cannot complete the task since error messages are coming up.
Could you please do the completing process instead of me?

Regards,

元の翻訳
I sent you the January invoice the other day. Did you have a chance to look at it?
Also, how are things coming along regarding the unpaid amount from October which I told you about the other day?
January is our accounting period, and we are troubled by not being able to proceed with the processing of these expenses.
I am sorry to bother you while you are busy, but would appreciate it if you could deal with this as soon as possible.

I finished this translation work, but I got an error message and could not complete it. Is it OK if I leave it for you to complete?

Thank you.

修正後
I sent you the January invoice the other day. Did you have a chance to look at it?
Also, how are things coming along regarding the unpaid amount from October which I told you about the other day?
January is our accounting period, and we are troubled by not being able to proceed with the processing of these expenses.
I am sorry to bother you while you are busy, but would appreciate it if you could deal with this as soon as possible.

I have finished my translation work, but I get an error message and cannot complete it. Is it OK if I leave it for you to complete?

Thank you.

元の翻訳
I apologize for the delay in shipment.
The package from Japan to Germany may be stopped by the customs, so I will check it out.
I'll process a full refund if your order will not arrive by 10th of this month.
Thank you and best regards.

修正後
I apologize for the delay in shipment.
The packages from Japan to Germany may be stopped by the customs, so I will check it out.
I'll process a full refund if your order will not arrive by the 10th of this month.
Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
We are very sorry for the delay of the product.

We would like to research because the load from Japan to Germany may be stopped by custom.

We will refund you all the money if the product is not going to you by 10th this month.

Thank you for your understanding.

修正後
We are very sorry for the delay of the product.

We will check the possibility that the shipments from Japan to Germany are stopped by the customs.

We will give you a full refund if the product doesn't reach you by the 10th of this month.

Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
こんにちは、Fujirock66さん。質問があります。プロボクサーの高山勝成さんが使用しているサウナスーツ（サウナスーツ・アクティブ７）のスポーツウェアモデルを購入していただいてよろしいですか？サイズはスモールでおねがいします。もしその品目をご購入していただいて、さらにお値段をお知らせくださるとありがたいです。

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こんにちは、Fujirock66さん。質問があります。プロボクサーの高山勝成さんが使用しているサウナスーツ（サウナスーツ・アクティブ７）のスポーツウェアモデルを購入していただいてよろしいですか？サイズはスモールでおねがいします。もしその品目をご購入していただくことが可能なら、お値段をお知らせくださるとありがたいです。

元の翻訳
I am aware of the situation that this flight could be very tough. We believe you for flying safely.

U.S. Origin Health Certificate has pointed out that there was one page (for Japan only) missing on the prior confirmation document I have submitted to Narita Airport Quarantine. I have checked the documents we have used earlier, and it was three pages long, not two. Since you have attached the document with two pages, I requested to give us the missing one page which is for Japan. Please see the attached example.

Thank you for air transportation under the severe deep freeze.

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I am aware of the situation that this flight could be very tough. We believe you for flying safely.

U.S. Origin Health Certificate pointed out that there was one page (for Japan only) missing on the prior confirmation document I submitted to Narita Airport Quarantine. I have checked the documents we used earlier, and they consisted of three pages in a set, not two pages. Since you attached the document of two pages, I requested you to give us the missing one page which is for Japan. Please see the attached example.

Thank you for air transportation under the severe deep freeze.

元の翻訳
I understand the extreme severity of the flight this time. All I can do is to trust you.
With regards to the matter on the document that was attached in the Narita quarantine station which I confirmed beforehand, I was told that the number of pages of the U.S. Origin Health Certificate (for Japan) is 1 page lesser than before. I also confirmed the previous documents. It was definitely 3 pages in 1 set.
The document that you've attached were 2 pages so what I wanted to ask was the 1-page document for Japan (I have attached a sample on the email).
This is an air transport during a big chill period so I ask for your support.

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I understand the extreme severity of the flight this time. All I can do is to trust you.
With regards to the matter on the document that was attached in the Narita quarantine station which I confirmed beforehand, I was told that the number of pages of the U.S. Origin Health Certificate (for Japan) is 1 page less than before. I also confirmed the previous documents. They definitely consisted of 3 pages in 1 set.
The document that you attached consisted of 2 pages so what I wanted to ask about was the 1-page for Japan (I have attached a sample on the email).
This is an air transport during a big chill period so I ask for your support.

元の翻訳
ご不便をおかけしたことを心からお詫びいたします。
この間、驚くほど我慢強くいてくださったことに感謝しております。
また、我々にご連絡くださりありがとうございます。
お支払いを確認してすぐに中国から航空便にて商品をお送りいたしました。
ステータス画面では、日本税関にちょうど到着したところのようで、本日中に通関し、3~5営業日内に届くと思われます。
もし上記期間内に商品をお受け取りいただけなかった場合は、ご連絡ください。
予期せぬ状況になった場合は喜んでお手伝いさせていただきますので、ご安心ください。
お客様のご要望で商品を再送することも返金させていただくことも可能です。
ありがとうございました。

修正後
ご不便をおかけしたことを心からお詫びいたします。
この間、驚くほど我慢強くいてくださったことに感謝しております。
また、我々にご連絡くださりありがとうございます。
お支払いを確認してすぐに中国から書留航空便にて商品をお送りいたしました。
ステータス画面では、日本税関にちょうど到着したところのようで、本日中に通関し、3~5営業日内に届くと思われます。
もし上記期間内に商品をお受け取りいただけなかった場合は、ご連絡ください。
予期せぬ状況になった場合は喜んでお手伝いさせていただきますので、ご安心ください。
お客様のご要望で商品を再送することも返金させていただくことも可能です。
ありがとうございました。

元の翻訳
You can book a private bathroom by filling in our room number on the time table sheet. Other guests were also just doing that without any hesitation. That kind of casual way was very good for us and made us feel comfortable.

The location was also great. It was located just a 10-minute walk away from Togendai Station, which is the final stop of the ropeway. And from Togendai, you can easily access to "Kaizokusen (Pirate Ship)" that cruises Ashinoko (Lake). It was a wonderful time on our check-in day when we were going up to Togendai, looking at the sunset from the ropeway.

Thank you very much to all the staff members for the great time!

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You can book a private bathroom just by filling in your room number on the time table sheet. Other guests were also just doing that without any hesitation. That kind of casual way was very good for us and made us feel comfortable.

The location was also great. It was located just a 10-minute walk away from Togendai Station, which is the final stop of the ropeway. And from Togendai, you can easily access to "Kaizokusen (Pirate Ship)" that cruises Ashinoko (Lake). It was a wonderful time on our check-in day when we were going up to Togendai, looking at the sunset from the ropeway.

Thank you very much to all the staff members for the great time!