翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2015/02/07 00:38:43

日本語

ロンドンで一番の体験
良いと評判のミュージカルを、ロンドン観光中に鑑賞したいと思い予約をしましたが、3日間の中で一番の体験だったと思います
この「オペラ座の怪人」は特に演出が素晴らしい。舞台装置が長年ロングランを行っている劇場だけに素晴らしく整っていて、だからこそできるダイナミックな演出が本当に圧巻の一言です。またそれに相まって、色彩豊かで幻想的な演出はため息が出そうになるほど美しく、役者さんたちの演技も素晴らしく上手で、総合して本当に美しい一つの「作品」として出来上がっています

英語

The best experience in London
I took the ticket of a musical, which had good reputations, because I wanted to see it while I was in London.
I believe it was the best experience in the 3 days.
This 'Phantom of the Opera' was spectacular. The stage set was well-equipped since many long-run plays have been out in the theater.
That's why it can produce such dynamism and it was absolutely mind-blowing.
In addition to that, the colorful and fantastical direction were so beautiful that I couldn't help but sigh, and the actors were splendid.
Considering all together, it was a genuinely beautiful 'piece'.

レビュー ( 1 )

tani1973 50 I spare no effort to offer quality tr...
tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/09 10:36:06

元の翻訳
The best experience in London
I took the ticket of a musical, which had good reputations, because I wanted to see it while I was in London.
I believe it was the best experience in the 3 days.
This 'Phantom of the Opera' was spectacular. The stage set was well-equipped since many long-run plays have been out in the theater.
That's why it can produce such dynamism and it was absolutely mind-blowing.
In addition to that, the colorful and fantastical direction were so beautiful that I couldn't help but sigh, and the actors were splendid.
Considering all together, it was a genuinely beautiful 'piece'.

修正後
The best experience in London
I got a ticket for a musical, which had good reputations, because I wanted to see it while I was in London.
I believe it was the best experience in the 3 days.
This 'Phantom of the Opera' was spectacular. The stage set was well-equipped since many long-run plays have been out in the theater.
That's why it can produce such dynamism and it was absolutely mind-blowing.
In addition to that, the colorful and fantastical staging was so beautiful that I couldn't help but sigh, and the actors were splendid.
Considering all together, it was a genuinely beautiful 'piece'.

ここでの演出は演技の演出より舞台演出の意味があると思いますのでstagingにしました。全体的に良い翻訳だと思います。

camomile27 camomile27 2015/02/09 10:57:50

レビューありがとうございます。確かにこの文中での演出はstagingですね。

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