ST-1988 (suschen27) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
■forget your ID number?
https://fc.avex.jp/mayj/reminder/number/input.html

■forget your password?
https://fc.avex.jp/mayj/reminder/password/input.html


☆Yahoo!　We'd like to take your preorder at a premium with plesure! !☆
the deadline is 26th, May,on Monday at 23:59.
see the detail from here→http://a-nation.net/

修正後
■forget your ID number?
https://fc.avex.jp/mayj/reminder/number/input.html

■forget your password?
https://fc.avex.jp/mayj/reminder/password/input.html


☆Yahoo!　We'd like to take your preorder at a premium with pleasure! !☆
the deadline is 26th, May,on Monday at 23:59.
see the detail from here→http://a-nation.net/

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email.

We apologize for your inconvenience.
The package might have been lost or have not been arrived due to an error during delivery.
We refund it immediately.
Please let us know when you have the package arrived.

Thank you for your message.
We apologize for your inconvenience. We confirmed that there might be an error during delivery.
We will send the package within three business days.
Thank you for your understanding.

修正後
Thank you for your email.

We apologize for your inconvenience.
The package might have been lost or have not been arrived due to an error during delivery.
We refund it immediately.
Please let us know when the package has arrived.

Thank you for your message.
We apologize for your inconvenience. We confirmed that there might be an error during delivery.
We will send the package within three business days.
Thank you for your understanding.