スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
I told about the text that you requested to be translated to a person in charge of translation.
However, the person in charge is going to take a vacation for 1.5 months, and you
might have to wait for a little while. We apologize that you have to wait.

If you find further questions, please do not hesitate to ask us.
We will be waiting that you visit us.

修正後
Thank you for contacting us.
I have notified of our translator tegarding the text that you requested to be translated.
However, the translator is going to take a vacation for 1.5 months, and you
might have to wait for a little while. We apologize that you have to wait.

If you find further questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.
We will be waiting for your visit.

元の翻訳
当方の銀行の残高について不快な報告をいただき、注文を元に戻すことができるかを尋ねました。注文をそのままにしておくことは可能ですか。もし不可能な場合、来月、同一商品を新たに注文します。
↵
本注文の支払いにおいて問題があるのではないかと憂慮しておりました。
当方の本注文に対する期待を察知いただけると思います。信頼される顧客になりたいので。
↵
ご理解後、注文を完了、そして完了方法が見つかればと思います。↵
もし見つからない場合でも、傷心を感じないと良いのですが。

修正後
当方の銀行の残高が不足していることがわかり、可能であれば現在の発注の状態を保ったまま、再注文したいとお伝えしました。↵
もし不可能な場合、来月、同一商品を新たに注文します。
本注文の支払いにおいて問題があるのではないかと憂慮しておりました。
当方の本注文に対する期待、また信頼される顧客になりたいという思いをお分かりいただければと思います。
ご理解を賜り、注文を完了して頂ければと存じます。↵
注文を完了する方法があればと思いますが、無理な場合でも、ご気分を害されないことを祈っております。

元の翻訳
The guitar has already sent from the company, which sends items abroad,
to Japan Post.
↵
The amount we have listed in the invoice is Yen(USD).
This is the minimum compensation required when an accident occurs during its transportation.
If it is listed lower, you cannot be compensated sufficiently.
Also it is against our and eBay's shop policy to list it at extremely low.
We hope that you understand us.

修正後
The guitar has already been sent to Japan Post from the company which sends items abroad,

The amount we have listed in the invoice is Yen(USD).
This is the minimum price required to be compensated when an accident occurs during its transportation.
If it is listed lower, you cannot be compensated sufficiently.
Also it is against eBay's shop policy and ours to list it at extremely low price.
We hope that you understand.

元の翻訳
方法は分かりませんが、カナダ及び米国への輸入は可能なはずです。なぜなら、これらの時計は全て、こちらでも入手できるからです。

今後の進め方についてご連絡お待ちします。全額返金後再注文するかまたは貴方の負担によりカナダへ送るかの何れかです。↵
いつものように連絡を取り続けてください。本件のような問題が発生した場合、心配になるので。

修正後
方法は分からないのですが、これらの時計は全て、こちらでも入手可能ですので、カナダ及び米国へ輸入可能なことに間違いございません。

今後の進め方に関して（全額返金した上で手続きを再開するか、貴方の負担によりカナダへ発送するのか）ご連絡お待ちしております。↵
↵
本件のような問題で手違いが生じますことをとても懸念しておりますので、定期的に連絡してくださるようお願いします。

元の翻訳
方法は分かりませんが、カナダ及び米国への輸入は可能なはずです。なぜなら、これらの時計は全て、こちらでも入手できるからです。

今後の進め方についてご連絡お待ちします。全額返金後再注文するかまたは貴方の負担によりカナダへ送るかの何れかです。
いつものように連絡を取り続けてください。本件のような問題が発生した場合、心配になるので。

修正後
方法は分かりませんが、カナダ及び米国への輸入は可能なはずです。なぜなら、これらの時計は全て、こちらでも入手できるからです。

今後の進め方についてご連絡お待ちします。全額返金後再注文するかまたは貴方の負担によりカナダへ送るかの何れかです。
いつものように連絡を取り続けてください。本件のような高額商品の配送に問題が発生した場合、心配になるので。

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。カナダの郵便局へ連絡を取り、本郵便局が当方の住所を正しく入力しなかったことが判明しました。同郵便局は当方へ連絡しようとしたのですが、間違った住所へ送られてしまいました。

荷物の宛名が記されていなかったので、↵
返送、もうすぐそちらへ到着するでしょう。

もう一度、こちらへ送っていただけませんか。
このメッセージが届いたか否かをお知らせください。このレンズを長い間待っていたので。
ハハハ！！！

修正後
こんにちわ。カナダの郵便局へ連絡を取ったところ、郵便局が当方の住所を正しく入力していなかったことが判明しました。郵便局は当方へ連絡しようとしたのですが、間違った住所へ送られてしまいました。

荷物の宛名が記されていなかったため返送されたので、もうすぐそちらへ到着するでしょう。

もう一度、こちらへ送っていただけませんか。
このメッセージが届いたか否かをお知らせください。このレンズを長い間待っていたので。
ハハハ！！！

元の翻訳
鈴木さん

メールありがとうございました。ご連絡うれしかったです。ビジネスにおいて良好な関係を構築できればと思います。

さて、貴方のご要望であるリサイクル用のグラスについてですが、無地のグラスの写真を送って欲しいのですか。
それとも、模様がついたグラスが欲しいのですか。

また、ご興味があるのはキャンドルホルダー、壷、花瓶及びグラスドームですか。それとも、タンブラー及びボウルのみに
興味があるのですか。

ご連絡お待ちします。

敬具

リン

修正後
鈴木様

メールありがとうございます。ご連絡いただきうれしいです。ビジネスにおいて良好な関係を構築できればと思います。

さて、貴方のご要望にありますリサイクル用のグラスについてですが、無地のグラスの写真を送って欲しいのでしょうか。
それとも、織り模様がついたグラスが欲しいのでしょうか。

また、ご興味があるのはキャンドルホルダー、壷、花瓶及びグラスドームですか。それとも、タンブラー及びボウルのみに
ご興味があるのですか。

ご連絡お待ちしております。

宜しくお願いいたします。

リン

元の翻訳
鈴木さん

メールありがとうございました。ご連絡うれしかったです。ビジネスにおいて良好な関係を構築できればと思います。

さて、貴方のご要望であるリサイクル用のグラスについてですが、無地のグラスの写真を送って欲しいのですか。
それとも、模様がついたグラスが欲しいのですか。

また、ご興味があるのはキャンドルホルダー、壷、花瓶及びグラスドームですか。それとも、タンブラー及びボウルのみに↵
興味があるのですか。

ご連絡お待ちします。

敬具

リン

修正後
鈴木さん

Eメールを頂きましてありがとうございました。ご連絡を頂き嬉しいです。↵
（ビジネスにおいて）良好な取引関係を築ければと思います。

さて、貴方のご要望にありますリサイクルグラスについてですが、無地のグラスの写真か、
織り模様付きのグラスの写真のどちらをご送付するのがよろしいかのご希望をお知らせ下さい。

ご興味があるのはろうそく立て、瓶、花瓶、及びガラスドームでしょうか。↵
または、タンブラーとボウルのみでしょうか。

貴方からのご連絡をお待ちしております。

ありがとうございました。

リン

元の翻訳
We want to receive these items as soon as possible, and please send them by air.
We don't have our forwarder office in Europe, and please send them to Osaka Airport(Kansai Airport)↵
by using your forwarder.

As for remittance dated March 26th, we should have remitted by dollar but we sent by Euro.
We overpaid 3000 dollars to you. We will settle it when we pay next time.
We appreciate that you check it.

修正後
We want to receive these items as soon as possible, so, please send them by air.
As our forwarder does not have their office in Europe, please send them to Osaka Airport(Kansai Airport) by using your forwarder.

As for remittance dated March 26th, we should have remitted in USD but we sent in Euro.
We overpaid 3000 dollars to you. We will settle it when we pay next time.
We appreciate that you check it.

元の翻訳
例えば、重さ６ポンド、縦２２インチ、横１８インチ、高さインチの荷物は約６０ドルですが、材料の送付に別途１０ドルかかります。
この大きさだと、絵画を４、５個送付できます。

この情報がお役に立ちましたか。ご質問があれば、お尋ねください。

修正後
例えば、重さ６ポンド、縦２２インチ、横１８インチ、高さインチの荷物は約６０ドルですが、送付の梱包材料に別途１０ドルかかります。
この大きさだと、絵画を４、５個送付できます。

この情報がお役に立ちましたか。ご質問があれば、お尋ねください。

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for indicating the product that hazardous material is included this time.

We have been paying attention to the product that DEA regulates all the time, but
we have not understood lip cream well.

We are glad if you throw it away as you indicated.

We cannot prepare MSDS that you requested, but do you need something else?

We appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
Thank you very much for indicating [a] the product that [has] hazardous material is included this time.

We [always pay attention ] have been paying attention to the product[s] that [the] DEA regulates all the time, but
we [did] have not understood [fully understand about the ] lip cream [well].

We are glad if you throw it away as you indicated.

We cannot prepare MSDS that you requested, but do you need something else?

We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
PayPal refunded 10 dollars, and please check it.
The broken ○○ is in unopened vinyl bag with a doll, and I will send it with other item.
I will send it tomorrow, and please wait for a little while.
In addition, I will send it by EMS as apology.

There must have been 1 male cusotmer in the movie theater, but there were only girls around me.
It was a small movie theater, but it was very crowded. and it means that ○○ is very popular.

I had not known the band. When I saw it on YOUTUBE, it was so cool, but I am afraid that it is being stopped.

修正後
PayPal [why is PayPal the subject?] refunded 10 dollars, and please check it [check what?].
The broken ○○ is in [article missing] unopened vinyl bag with a doll, and I will send it with other items.
I will send it tomorrow, and please wait for a little while.
In addition, I will send it by EMS as apology.

There must have been 1 male cusotmer [spelling] in the movie theater, but there were only girls around me.
It was a small movie theater, but it was very crowded and it means that ○○ is very popular.

I had not known [tense confusion] the band. When I saw it on YouTube, it was so cool, but I am afraid that it is being stopped [what does this mean?].

元の翻訳
I created an invoice of PayPal and sent it to you.
Could you try if I can pay by PayPal again?

It might be much work for you, but I appreciate↵
your cooperation.

修正後
I created a PayPal invoice and sent it to you.
Could you try to pay by PayPal again?

It might be much work for you [too literal], but I appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
I created an invoice of PayPal and sent it to you.
Could you try if I can pay by PayPal again?

It might be much work for you, but I appreciate↵
your cooperation.

修正後
I created an invoice of PayPal and sent it to you.
Could you try if you can pay by PayPal again?

Thank you for your cooperation and I apology for this nuisance.

元の翻訳
You need a sticker to use parking lot for bicycle.
Please fill out application form and submit it to office.
Upon payment at convenience store is confirmed, we will give you new sticker where↵
limit of use is listed.

The area where you can park your bicycle is next to roofless place where garbage is put.
Period when you can use

If you stop using the parking lot for bicycle, we don't refund you.
We start to remove bicycles without sticker from April 1, and please apply as soon as possible.
Please take a preventive measure by yourself to avoid that your bicycle is stolen .
We are not responsible for management and stealing,etc. of bicycles at all.

修正後
You need the sticker to use the parking lot for bicycles.
Please fill out the application form and submit it to our office.
After payment at a convenience store is confirmed, we will give you a new sticker where its expiry date is listed.

The area where you can park your bicycle is next to the roofless garbage collection site.
Valid term

Even if you stop using the parking lot for bicycles, we don't refund you.
We start to remove bicycles without stickers from April 1, and please apply for it as soon as possible.
Please take a preventive measure by yourself to avoid your bicycle being stolen.
We don't take any responsiblities for problems with storage of bicycles including theft.

元の翻訳
Nippon Interior Fabrics Association and Japan Management Association are going to hold "33rd JAPANTEX 2014" in Tokyo Big Site for 3 days from November 12nd to 14th. They started to accept application of those who exhibit and announced overview of it a few days ago.

It is the largest international interior exhibition in Japan where newest trend such as new product is announced as well as life style and interior style are proposed by focusing on interior fabrics.

A number of those who are engaged in interior, housing and construction are gathered, and it is used for PR of product and expansion of business.

修正後
Nippon Interior Fabrics Association and Japan Management Association are going to hold "33rd JAPANTEX 2014" in Tokyo Big Site for 3 days from November 12nd to 14th. They started to accept application of those who exhibit and announced overview of it a few days ago.

It is the largest international interior exhibition in Japan where the newest trend such as new product is introduced as well as life style and interior style are proposed by focusing on interior fabrics.

A number of those who are engaged in interior, housing and construction businesses are gathered, and it is used for PR of product and expansion of business.

元の翻訳
Since 2012, it has been developing as "home and building &interior week" with "Japan Home & Building Show", and it has been appealing strongly to a number of industries including housing and construction.

This time it specifies "interior that decorates window and life" as a theme, and various plans planned by sponsor, which increase effect of exhibition and meaning of visiting the exhibition such as "exhibitiion at booth by theme", "interior talk session & seminar", "business partnership" and "presentation by exhibitor".

修正後
Since 2012, it has been developing as "Home and Building & Interior Week" with "Japan Home & Building Show", and it has been appealing strongly to a number of industries including housing and construction.

This time it specifies "interior that decorates window and life" as a theme, and various plans planned by sponsor, which increase effect of exhibition and meaning of visiting the exhibition such as "exhibition at booth by theme", "interior talk session & seminar", "business partnership" and "presentation by exhibitor".

元の翻訳
I have information about CD that you want to knwo.
I asked manufacturer, and found that they stopped manufacturing it and thereby↵
they don't have new products in their stock any more.

The only way is that you purchase used one that I told you last time or new CD whose price went up.

What are you going to do? Do I search more? It might be listed in auction in Japan.
Or do I send the one for trading this time? I will wait for your reply.

修正後
I have information on the CD that you were interested.
I asked manufacturer, and found out that they discontinued manufacturing of the CD and thereby they don't have new products in their stock any more.

The only way is that you purchase used one that I told you last time or new CD whose price went up.

What are you going to do? Would you like me to search more? It might be listed in auction in Japan in the near future.
Or would you like me to ship the items for the current transaction? I will wait for your reply.

元の翻訳
Have you checked condition of sending about invoice number ****?
If you cannot send it immediately, please refund.

If you cannot refund, I will make a law suit.
But I don't want to take this kind of action, and please refund it.

Could you send sauna heater and sauna door to Japan?
If you can, how much is the shipping charge for them approximately?
The voltage we use in Japan is 100 or 200 voltage.
Can I use product A here without changing voltage?

修正後
Have you checked the shipping status for invoice number ****?
If you cannot send it immediately, please refund.

If you cannot refund, I will make a law suit.
But I don't want to take this kind of action, and please refund it.

Could you send sauna heater and sauna door to Japan?
If you can, how much would the approximate shipping charge for both of them?
The voltage we use in Japan is 100 or 200 voltage.
Can I use product A here without changing voltage?

元の翻訳
When I boost up software (version 3.2), "A vital file is missing. please re-insutall.
You can download the latest version from the website xxxxx" appears.

If I click "OK" button, the software exists.

1. What is a cause that above message appears?

2. If I reinstall Version 3.2, can I use information that is set now without deleting it?

Consumption tax is increased to 8 percent from April.

修正後
When I boot up software (version 3.2), "A vital file is missing. please re-install.
You can download the latest version from the website xxxxx" message appears on the screen.

If I click "OK" button, the software exits.

1. What is causing the software to display the message as mentioned above?

2. If I re-install Version 3.2, can I still use the software without deleting the information I have already input in the setup process?

Consumption tax will be increased to 8 percent from April.

元の翻訳
This store handles only items for women.
Small in USA is equivalent to medium in Japan.

As for the store which handles only items for women, may I order small and medium?
If condition of ordering of the size is good, more companies can order, and↵
could you consider it?

修正後
This store handles only items for women.
Small size in USA is equivalent to medium size in Japan.

As for the store which handles only items for women, may I order small and medium sizes?
If the ordering condition concerning those sizes are good, I would like you to consider doing business with us as it will result in more suppliers for us to place our orders.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your comment. I still have a lot to do.↵
↵
I am not going to move soon, but I am looking forward to the new life.

修正後
Thank you for your comment. I am not going to move any time soon, as I still have a lot to do. However, I am looking forward for the new life.

元の翻訳
当方に判明したのは、貴方が出荷において十分な送料を払わなかったか、または、顧客であるBへ送料の追加を求めなかったかであり、これは、加入契約の違反です。

送料が決定している旨をご注意ください。取引終了後、販売者は、送料の追加または他の費用を請求しないかもしれません。↵
出荷の際、過不足ない送料を支払うことは販売者の責任です。

修正後
当方に判明したのは、貴方が出荷において十分な送料を払わなかった、もしくは、B顧客への送料の追加を求めたかのいずれかであり、これは、加入契約における違反です。

送料が決定している旨をご注意ください。取引終了後、販売者は、送料の追加または他の費用を請求してはいけません。出荷の際、過不足ない送料を支払うことは販売者の責任です。

元の翻訳
当方に判明したのは、貴方が出荷において十分な送料を払わなかったか、または、顧客であるBへ送料の追加を求めなかったかであり、これは、加入契約の違反です。

送料が決定している旨をご注意ください。取引終了後、販売者は、送料の追加または他の費用を請求しないかもしれません。
出荷の際、過不足ない送料を支払うことは販売者の責任です。

修正後
当方に判明したのは、貴方が出荷において十分な送料を払わなかったか、または、顧客であるBへ送料の追加を求めなかったかであり、これは、加入契約の違反です。

送料が決定している旨をご注意ください。取引終了後、販売者は、送料の追加または他の費用を請求してはいけません。
出荷の際、不足のない送料を用意しておくことは販売者の責任です。