翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: ◇は人形の付属品、☆は映画のタイトル

日本語

ペイパルより$１０を返金させて頂きましたのでご確認下さい。
壊れた◇は未開封のビニール袋に人形と一緒に入ってますので、他の物と一緒に送ります。
明日中に発送させて頂きますので少々お待ち下さいませ。
また、お詫びとしてEMSで発送させて頂きます。

映画館には男のお客さんも１人いたと思う。でも私の周囲には女の子しかいなかったね。小さい映画館だけと凄く混んでたから☆の人気は凄いよ。

私はそのバンドを知りませんでしたが、ユーチューブで観たらとても格好良かったです。でも今は休止中なんだね、残念。

英語

PayPal refunded 10 dollars, and please check it.
The broken ○○ is in unopened vinyl bag with a doll, and I will send it with other item.
I will send it tomorrow, and please wait for a little while.
In addition, I will send it by EMS as apology.

There must have been 1 male cusotmer in the movie theater, but there were only girls around me.
It was a small movie theater, but it was very crowded. and it means that ○○ is very popular.

I had not known the band. When I saw it on YOUTUBE, it was so cool, but I am afraid that it is being stopped.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/03/25 16:04:23

元の翻訳
PayPal refunded 10 dollars, and please check it.
The broken ○○ is in unopened vinyl bag with a doll, and I will send it with other item.
I will send it tomorrow, and please wait for a little while.
In addition, I will send it by EMS as apology.

There must have been 1 male cusotmer in the movie theater, but there were only girls around me.
It was a small movie theater, but it was very crowded. and it means that ○○ is very popular.

I had not known the band. When I saw it on YOUTUBE, it was so cool, but I am afraid that it is being stopped.

修正後
PayPal [why is PayPal the subject?] refunded 10 dollars, and please check it [check what?].
The broken ○○ is in [article missing] unopened vinyl bag with a doll, and I will send it with other items.
I will send it tomorrow, and please wait for a little while.
In addition, I will send it by EMS as apology.

There must have been 1 male cusotmer [spelling] in the movie theater, but there were only girls around me.
It was a small movie theater, but it was very crowded and it means that ○○ is very popular.

I had not known [tense confusion] the band. When I saw it on YouTube, it was so cool, but I am afraid that it is being stopped [what does this mean?].