スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Please do not worry about it.
The item exchanged is a base of neck-thru, soild body, two sets p-bass pick-ups in the picture, and it is a correct one.
We will send a correct white base as the item exchanged.
The tracking number is going to be xxx.

Of course, we will refund the shipping charge to Japan that you pay and xx dollars the charge that you are going to pay when you receive it.
We promise that we arrange the system where you do not have to pay for this matter.

We apologize that you had to spend the time for this matter.

修正後
Please do not worry about it.
The replacement item is a base of neck-thru, soild body, two sets p-bass pick-ups as in the picture, and it is a correct one.
We will send a correct white base as a replacement.
The tracking number is going to be xxx.

Of course, we will refund the shipping charge to Japan that you pay and xx dollars for the charge that you are going to pay when you receive it.
We promise that we arrange the system where you do not have to pay for this matter.

We apologize that you had to spend the time for this matter.

元の翻訳
貴方の口座に発生した９９ドルの請求について了解しました。以下のように処理します。

貴方の口座を調査、問題の９９ドルがアマゾンプライムメンバーシップの更新により２０１４年１１月１３日に処理済みであることが判明しました。

本プライムのメリットについては、弊ヘルプのページをご参照ください。
http://www.amazon.com/help/prime

にもかかわらず、貴方は、メンバーシップをキャンセル、９９ドルを返金して欲しいそうですね。

そこでご希望に沿うように、本メンバーシップをキャンセルしました。

メンバーシップの費用として９９ドルの返金をお受け取りください。
本返金の処理には、普通、２，３営業日を要し、貴方の明細にクレジットとして表記されます。

修正後
貴方の口座に発生した９９ドルの請求について了解しました。以下のように処理します。

貴方のAmazonアカウントを確認したところ、問題の９９ドルがアマゾンプライムメンバーシップの更新により２０１４年１１月１３日に処理済みであることが判明しました。

アマゾンプライムのメリットについては、弊社ヘルプページをご参照ください。
http://www.amazon.com/help/prime

しかし、貴方は、メンバーシップをキャンセル、９９ドルを返金して欲しいと認識しています。

そこでご希望に沿うように、本メンバーシップをキャンセルしました。

メンバーシップの費用として９９ドルの返金をお受け取りください。
本返金の処理には、普通、２，３営業日を要し、貴方の明細にクレジットとして表記されます。

元の翻訳
We apologize to have caused an inconvenience to you this time.
We are sure tha it is a mistake made by a person in charge of sending in our company.

We exchange it with the correct base.

Of course, we will pay for the shipping charge for returning the base you have to Japan. When you find the amount of it, please let us know the amount listed in the receipt. We will pay it into your account of Paypal immediately.

修正後
We apologize to have caused an inconvenience to you this time.
We are sure tha it is a mistake made by a person in charge of sending in our company.

We will exchange it with the correct base.

Of course, we will pay the shipping charge for returning the base to Japan. When you have the shipping cost, please let us know the cost on the receipt. We will pay it into your Paypal account immediately.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
We are sorry that you did not like the item.
We had not found a problem when we checked it.
If you request the refunding and returning the item, we will accept them.
We hate to ask, but could you please return the item to the following address?
Then we will refund it via Paypal after we receive the item.
We are looking forward to your decision whether you select refunding or not.

修正後
Thank you for contacting us.
We are sorry that you did not like the item.
We had not found a problem when we checked it.
We would accept it If you would like to return the item and request the refund.
Could you please return the item to the following address?
Then we will issue the refund via Paypal after we receive the item.
Please let us know if you prefer returning the item. ↵
We are looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
顧客からのレンズ回収を終えたところです。早急なご送付及び適宜なご連絡ありがとうございました。。しかし、レンズの状態は、ご説明通りではありませんでした。本レンズをフォーカスすると、フォーカスリングがプレイし、不快な音をたてます。
オークションには、この事実は記載されていませんでした。
率直に述べると、かなり期待はずれです。その理由は、私が持っている他のフォクトレンダー製の商品のように電池をスムーズにフォーカスできると思っていたからです。
返品、返金の要請、サービスへの送付のどれを選択して良いか決めかねています。
どうすれば良いでしょうか。

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税関からレンズを受け取ったところです。早急なご送付及び適宜なご連絡ありがとうございました。。しかし、レンズの状態は、ご説明通りではありませんでした。本レンズをフォーカスすると、フォーカスリングに遊び（ガタ）があり、不快な音をたてます。
オークションには、この事実は記載されていませんでした。
率直に述べると、かなり期待はずれです。その理由は、私が持っている他のフォクトレンダー製の商品のように、するりと（バターのように）スムーズにフォーカスできると思っていたからです。
返品、返金の要請、サービスへの送付のどれを選択して良いか決めかねています。
どうすれば良いでしょうか。

元の翻訳
ご存知かもしれませんが、私に返金されました。

ターンテーブルを出荷しない理由をお知らせ願えないでしょうか。
私が周知している理由ですか。
これは、心の平安のために知りたいのであり、他意はありません。

誰かが私のお金で遊興したなんて最悪の事態です。代わりに、別の人から購入できたのに。

お手数おかけしました。貴方のご幸運をご祈念します。

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もうご存知かもしれませんが、代金は返金されてきました。

ターンテーブルを出荷しない理由をお知らせ願えないでしょうか。
何か私が心当たりのあるような理由ですか。
これは、安心したいために知りたいのであり、他意はありません。

一か月間も私のお金が弄ばれていたようで大変悪い経験になってしまいました。代わりに、別の人から購入できたのに。

お手数おかけしました。貴方のご幸運をご祈念します。

元の翻訳
We are planning the followings to solve the above problems.

Reviewing of the price control system
The program that has a problem has been detected, and we are fixing it.
The registration of the new items is stopped by 100 percent until the above error is solved and the price of the current inventory is reviewed.

We routinize checking the errors whether there is a mistake between the uploaded data and the price of the items.

We are going to employ a person who is devoted to managing the data comprehensively and making it more efficient.

修正後
We are planning the followings to solve the above problems.

Reviewing of the price control system
The program that has a problem has been detected, and we are fixing it.
The registration of the new items will be all suspended until the above error is solved and the price of the current inventory is reviewed.

We routinize checking the errors whether there is a mistake between the uploaded data and the price of the items.

We are going to employ a person who is devoted to managing the data comprehensively and making it more efficient.

元の翻訳
As a reason that there are a number of cancellations this time, there are a number of items that have been uploaded at much lower than the price they requested since an error has occurred in the function of adjusting the fee at the system when uploading the items at CSV.

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As a reason that there are [tense confusion] a number of cancellations this time, there are [second time you use the "there are" construction] a number of items that have been uploaded at much lower than the price they [who are they?] requested since an error has occurred in the function of adjusting the fee at the system when uploading [dangling modifier] the items at CSV.

元の翻訳
２０ユニットの値段は同一ですが、これ以上の数量を注文したい場合、パーセンテージを増幅します。時計は、既に、割引料金により販売されているので、１５％以下は無理です。どちらの値段をご検討されますか。

申し訳ございませんが、1商品につき５０ユニットまで５％値上がりし、その後、卸売価格へ変更されます。

修正後
20本注文の場合、値段はかわりませんが、これ以上の数量を注文されるのであれば、割引率を増やせます。この時計は、既に、割引料金により販売されているので、15%以上の割引は無理です。(割引前の) 定価として参照されているのは、どの値段でしょうか。

申し訳ございませんが、50ユニットの注文までは5%の割引です。それより多数の場合、卸売価格まで値引きされます。

元の翻訳
I purchased the item at a shop on Internet.
When the item is delivered, the delivery person is going to tell me the schedule of the delivery by telephone. To which number, do I have to call?
↵
Please let me know the telephone number that I can contact the delivery man.
I would like to know how he is going to deliver it to me if they cannot tell me the telephone number.
I appreciate your understanding.

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I purchased the item at an online shop.
When the item is delivered, the delivery person is going to tell me the schedule of the delivery by telephone. To which number, do I have to call?
Please let me know the telephone number that I can contact the delivery man.
I would like to know how he is going to deliver it to me if they [who are they?] cannot tell me the telephone number.
I appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
拝啓　山田様

ご連絡いただきありがとうございます。貴方及びご家族もお元気のことと思います。

事業に最善を尽くしたいのですが、送金に先立ち、当方による以下の了解が肝要です。

１．購入においてどのライセンスにご興味がありますか。
２．本ライセンスの対象となる商品及び国はどこですか。
３．本ライセンスのコスト及び条件をお知らせください。
４．本投資のリターンから何を期待しますか。

貴方の尽力に深謝します。

敬具

修正後
拝啓　山田様

ご連絡いただきありがとうございます。貴方及びご家族もお元気のことと思います。

事業に最善を尽くしたいのですが、送金に先立ち、当方にとって以下を理解していることが肝要です。
（＝私は以下を理解しておきたいです。）
↵
１．購入においてどのライセンスにご興味がありますか。
２．本ライセンスの対象となる商品及び国はどこですか。
３．本ライセンスのコスト及び条件をお知らせください。
４．本投資のリターンとして何を期待しますか。

貴方の尽力に深謝します。

敬具

元の翻訳
Good day!
We apprecite your inquiry.

As you said, we had already sent the item on November 8th.
However, we sent it by SAL to reduce the price of the item to you this time.
You will receive it from November 22nd to December 6th if it arrives on schedule.
We sent it to the address registered on BBB subject to the regulation of AAA.
The address to which we sent is as follows.
We appreciate your patience until you receive it.
In such a case, if you ask your nearest post office in advance, you might be able to solve smoothly.
If you like it, please consider it.
If you have other questions, please let us know.
We appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
Good day!
We appreciate your inquiry.

As you said, we had already sent the item on November 8th.
However, we sent it by SAL to reduce the price of the item to you this time.
You will receive it from November 22nd to December 6th if it arrives on schedule.
We sent it to the address registered on BBB subject to the regulation of AAA.
The address to which we sent is as follows.
We appreciate your patience until you receive it.
In a case like this, if you ask your nearest post office in advance, you might be able to solve it smoothly.
Please consider it.
If you have other questions, please let us know.
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Pluggy Lock is an extremely attractive item.
I am confident that I can sell a large volume of this items in Japan.
I would like to be an official agency in Japan.
Please let me know your conditions.

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Pluggy Lock is an extremely attractive item.
I am confident that I can sell a large volume of this item in Japan.
I would like to be an official distributor in Japan.
Please let me know your conditions.

元の翻訳
Pluggy Lock is an extremely attractive item.
I am confident that I can sell a large volume of this items in Japan.
I would like to be an official agency in Japan.
Please let me know your conditions.

修正後
Pluggy Lock is an extremely attractive item.
I am confident that I can sell a large volume of this item in Japan.
I would like to be an official agency in Japan.
Please let me know regarding your conditions.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
We checked a list of inventory.

We have a question. How much percentage is discounted from the price listed here?
We feel that all the items are more expensive tham the ones sold at Amazon.
If the items sold at the Amazon is less expensive, we will pruchase at Amazon.
If so, as your company has to pay for the fee of the Amazon, neither your company nor our company has any merit.

We purchase 89260B by 50 pieces per case at 70 dollars from the company we have business with.
We would like to do business with you at the price lower than that.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
We checked a list of inventory.

We have a question. How much percentage is discounted from the price listed here?
We feel that all the items are more expensive than the ones sold at Amazon.
If the items sold at the Amazon is less expensive, we will pruchase at Amazon.
If so, as your company has to pay for the fee of the Amazon, neither your company nor our company has any merit.

We purchase 89260B by 50 pieces per case at 70 dollars from the company we have business with.
We would like to do business with you at the price lower than that.

元の翻訳
For details, please check the homepage of the Charming Kiss
http://chiaki.koji-honpo.co.jp/

As a variety of information is sent by Twitter and application, please check here.

Application
（ ios:https://itunes.apple.com/jp/app/id668504622?mt=8)
(Android: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=li.yapp.appB09E7B30&hl=ja)

修正後
For details, please check the homepage of the Charming Kiss
http://chiaki.koji-honpo.co.jp/

As a variety of information is released by Twitter and the app, please check here.

App.
（ ios:https://itunes.apple.com/jp/app/id668504622?mt=8)
(Android: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=li.yapp.appB09E7B30&hl=ja)

元の翻訳
Please pay attention to it.

We settled about sending by small packet.
However, we can send by the small packet only when we have an extra space in air mail, so priority is put on the express mail.

We heard that it takes longer that the items go through customs in the States and Canada due to the increase of the items at Christmas and the year end & beginning of the year.
When we sent the item by small packat at this time of last year, it took 2 months at the longest until it was delivered (around the end of January).

We hope that you understand that it takes long time to be delivered.
We appreciate your understanding.

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Please pay attention to it.
ATTENTION!↵

We settled about sending by small packet.
Regarding the.....↵
However, we can send by the small packet only when we have an extra space in air mail, so priority is put on the express mail.

We heard that it takes longer when the items goes through customs in the States and Canada due to the increase of the items at Christmas and the year end & beginning of the year.
When we sent the item by small (packat <- spelling) at this time of last year, it took 2 months at the longest until it was delivered (around the end of January).

We hope that you understand that it takes long time to be delivered.
We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
Ticket Pier Telephone number:0570-02-9999 P code:245-273
LAWSON TICKET Telephone number: 0570-084-003　L code：76914
　　e+ [ http://eplus.jp ]

(Production) Moushiwake Limited Company
(Management) Hot Staff Promotion [ http://www.red-hot.ne.jp ]
(Cooperation) Warner Music Japan One Peace Inc. Yoshimoto Creative Agency

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Ticket Pia Telephone number:0570-02-9999 P code:245-273
LAWSON TICKET Telephone number: 0570-084-003　L code：76914
　　e+ [ http://eplus.jp ]

(Production) Moushiwake Limited Company
(Management) Hot Staff Promotion [ http://www.red-hot.ne.jp ]
(Cooperation) Warner Music Japan, One Peace Inc. Yoshimoto Creative Agency

元の翻訳
(Inquiry for details) Daikanyama Unit Telephone number: 03-3464-1012/Hot Staff Promotion 03-5720-9999 from 12:00 to 18:00 on weekdays

You must enter the hall by the order of the serial number.
We ask you not to bring the equipment for recording and taking a picture.

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(Contact) Daikanyama Unit Telephone number: 03-3464-1012/Hot Staff Promotion 03-5720-9999 from 12:00 to 18:00 on weekdays

-Entry by the order of the serial number.
-Please do not bring the recording and photo devices.

元の翻訳
(Hall)Daikanyama Unit [ http://www.unit-tokyo.com ]
(Address) Za House Building Basement 2 1-34-17 Ebisu Nishi, Shibuya-Ku Telephone number: 03-3464-1012
(Time) Open and start at 18:00
(Ticket) 3,000 Yen at presale and 3,500 Yen on the day of the event (you must pay for 1 drink additionally)
(Play guide) Days of sales: 10 o'clock on October 4th (Saturday)

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(Venue)Daikanyama Unit [ http://www.unit-tokyo.com ]
(Address) Za House Building Basement 2 1-34-17 Ebisu Nishi, Shibuya-Ku Telephone number: 03-3464-1012
(Time) Open and start at 18:00
(Ticket) 3,000 Yen for presale and 3,500 Yen on the day of the event (not included 1DRINK)
(Play guide) Release date: 10 am on 4th October (Saturday)

元の翻訳
I heard that the item was sent just now.
I requested the cancellation of the order for ○and ○ twice.
Please check them.
Would you please stop sending the items to Japan for this order?
If I eceive it in Japan, I have to pay for the high shupping charge to return it to you.

If it comes to me in Japan, I will reject to receive it by "Return to sender".
The tracking number is ○　and ○.

Under this situation, I request that you process it not to be delivered to Japan.
I ask you to work on it by paying attention to it.

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I heard that the item was sent just now.
I requested the cancellation of the order for ○and ○ twice.
Please check them.
Would you please stop sending the items to Japan for this order?
If I ｒeceive it in Japan, I have to pay for the high shipping charge to return it to you.

If it comes to me in Japan, I will reject to receive it by "Return to sender".
The tracking number is ○　and ○.

Under this situation, I request that you process it not to be delivered to Japan.
I ask you to work on it by paying attention to it.