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I am "A". I am sending you a message from Japan.
First of all, I am a big fan of yours.
I just wanted to ask but do you have any spare kits of "Jack"?

I am so sad that I am looking everywhere for them but they are all sold out so it is hard to find them anywhere.

I am very keen to buy a "Jack kit” from you.
I am waiting for your positive answer.
Thank you for reading my sudden message to you.

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I am A. I am sending you a message from Japan.
First of all, I am a big fan of yours.
I just wanted to ask but do you have any spare kits of "Jack"?

I am so sad that I am looking everywhere for them but they are all sold out so it is hard to find them anywhere.

I am very keen to buy a "Jack kit” from you.
I am waiting for good news front you.
Thank you for reading my sudden message to you.

元の翻訳
Dear Adani,
Hi, my name is John.
I found your home page to be very nice and fashionable indeed.
It fascinates me.
May I ask you the following questions?
1 Do you have stock of 〇〇〇 by Prada?
2 What is the price?
3 Is shipping to Japan possible?
John.

*Could you send me a list?
*Could you send me photos?
*Please send by either DHL or post.

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Dear Adani,
Hi, my name is John.
I apologize to you for contacting you so suddenly.↵
I found your home page to be very nice and fashionable indeed.
It fascinates me.
May I ask you the following questions?
1 Do you have stock of 〇〇〇 by Prada?
2 What is the price?
3 Is shipping to Japan possible?
John.

*Could you send me a list?
*Could you send me photos?
*Please send by either DHL or post.

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Although there is something like white dirt on the left sleeve shown in the photo, is it possible to add more photos of this particular part?

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Although there is something like white dirt on the right sleeve shown in the photo, is it possible to add more photos of this particular part?

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Yes, I understand. Thank you for your reply despite being busy.
I am waiting for your reply around the 7th of August.
I appreciate your continued support for me.
Once again, thank you as always.

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Yes, I understand. Thank you for your reply despite your busy schedule.
I will be expecting to hear from you around the 7th of August (August 7).
I hope we will continue developing a good relationship between us.
Once again, thank you as always.

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Alright, I am listening to the audio file that I downloaded shortly. Thank you so much for giving me the precious audio source along with the CD that you have the last. I will cherish them. Also, I am looking forward to the arrival of the package.

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Alright, I downloaded the music file a while ago and I am listening to it now. Thank you for the precious audio source along with the CD you have owned. I will cherish them. Also, I am looking forward to the arrival of the package.

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Buying all 12 razors gets you a great offer. You can get a razor at $200 each.
I will explain to you how:
1 Ask for “$200” per piece from “Make Offer” on eBay.
2 We approve this offer for you.
3 We send you an invoice of $2400 for the total of 12 razors and pay the amount. We get you free shipping.
4 Our items will be delivered in 7 to 10 days normally. Also, we fill out “present” at “$24.00” totally of $2.00 per piece in order to pass the customs.

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Buying all 12 razors gets you a great offer – get each razor for only $200 each.
Let me explain how:
1 Ask for “$200” per piece from “Make Offer” on eBay.
2 We will approve your offer.
3 We will then send you an invoice for $2400 (total cost for 12 razors). Please pay the amount. Shipment is without charge.
4 Our items are normally delivered in 7 to 10 days. In order to pass customs quickly, we state the item is a ‘gift’ with a total value of ‘$24.00’ ($2.00 per piece).

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I am so sorry for the sudden email. I have something to apologise for.
On that day, despite having a promise to meet the two of us, I met you with other fans. She spoke to me as if she knew me. Though I was pleased, as I have a promise that I meet you, I tried to keep myself away from her but I couldn't make it. I am sorry if I made you an unpleasant feeling. That is a thing that I mind, so I dm you. I hope you could have wonderful shows until the end.↵

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I am so sorry for the sudden email. I have something to apologise (apologize) for.
On that day, I was supposed to meet the two of us, I met you with other fans. She spoke to me as if she knew me. Though I was pleased, I had an appointment with you, so I tried to be away from her but I couldn't make it. I am sorry if it made you unpleasant. That is a thing that I mind, so I dm you. I hope your remaining performances will be over safe and sound.

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PayPalにて返金分に対するご発注分をお支払い頂けませんでしょうか？全ての商品分の代金（598DKK及び1190DKK） ではなく、今回ご迷惑をお掛けしたことを考慮し、1600DKKに致しましょう。

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PayPalにて返金分に対するご発注分をお支払い頂けませんでしょうか？全ての商品分の代金（598DKK及び1190DKK） ではなく、今回ご迷惑をお掛けしたことを考慮し、1600DKKに致しましょう。
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返金分を差し引いたご発注分をPayPalでお支払いいただけないでしょうか？ 今回はご迷惑をおかけしたこともあり、全商品の代金をお支払いいただく必要はございません。 拝見した限り、598DKK と 1190DKK の商品でしたので、（今回のお支払額は）1600DKK ということに致しましょう。 ↵

元の翻訳
This is a healthy bed pad of radium ore, featuring effectiveness by radium hot spring. We pursue transparency of a touch of ore, and bodily sensation through a clinical study based on "The Transparency of Product", for the trust and peace of mind of our customers.↵
It has a hexagonal pattern to make a refreshing change to existing bedding items. It becomes a part of the interior of your room.↵

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Radium oar material is used for this health bed pad for its effect. ↵
The “body feeling visualization” and the “material visualization” were realized as its theme in the clinical trial with the relief sense and trust of the buyer to keep its original health trait. It has a hexagon pattern renewing the image of the conventional bedding for health used as a familiar piece of interior furniture, too.

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1 I am writing to you for the first time!
Thank you for listing the items that I am interested in.
As I will purchase 2 sets of 〇, so would you make it 1 pcs at 140＄, which is 280＄ altogether?
Would it be possible to ship altogether at 50＄ to Japan, please?
I appreciate your further consideration.
2 Thank you for your consideration.
If you change your mind, please let me know.
With regards.

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1 Nice to meet you!
Thank you for listing the items that I am interested in.
As I will purchase 2 sets of 〇, could you make 1 pcs at $140; $280 altogether?
Would it be possible to ship everything to Japan together for $50?
I appreciate your further consideration.↵

2 Thank you for your consideration.
If you change your mind, please let me know.
With regards.

元の翻訳
Your ur items are unable for the refund because of being in the middle of shipping now.
For a condition towards the refund, if the items return to Japan without your receiving or you claim a refund after you receive them. Same as you, I can't contact the courier company or I can't make the shipping faster or earlier.
Everything doesn't go as you think due to the customs office or courier company of your country.
I hope you could understand the situation.
With regards.

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Your items are being delivered now, so I cannot refund you.
For a condition towards the refund, if the items return to Japan without your receiving or you claim a refund after you receive them. Same as you, I can't contact the courier company or I can't make the shipping faster or earlier.
Everything doesn't go as you think due to the customs office or courier company of your country.
I hope you could understand the situation.
With regards.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。新年あけましておめでとうございます。お願いがあるのですが、もし復刻版のカセットテープがあれば購入したいと思います。私は日本にて郵便受け取りができます。よろしくお願いいたします。Sean

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こんにちは。良いお年を。お願いがあるのですが、もし復刻版のカセットテープがあれば購入したいと思います。私は日本にて郵便受け取りができます。よろしくお願いいたします。Sean

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
Although I would like to proceed with ordering, what do I have to do after this?
Once confirmed the order status, it says “Pending Fulfillment”, would it be a proper status for completing the order and waiting ready for shipping, right?
I am waiting for your reply again soon.

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Thank you for your reply.
I would like to proceed with ordering, what do I have to do now?
I looked up the order status, it says “Pending Fulfillment”. Should I assume this status usually refers to completing the order and awaiting shipment?
I’ll await your reply.

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We are sorry for contacting late.
Thanks for your reply.
Although the same name but different company is listed to the Tokyo Stock Exchange 2nd section, was are afraid that we are not listed it yet.
Here's our website (URL), but the other with same name is for (URL).
You had better make sure it as the submission of the financial statements would be required.
Could to tell us theURL, ID , and PASSWORD of your platform?

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We are sorry for contacting late.
Thanks for your reply.
Although the same name but different company is listed to the Tokyo Stock Exchange 2nd section, was are afraid that we are not listed it yet.
Here's our website (URL), but the other with same name is for (URL).
You had better make sure it as the submission of the financial statements would be required.
Could to tell us theURL, ID , and PASSWORD of your platform?
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Thanks for your reply. Sorry for the delay in contacting you. Although there is another company with the listed in the 2nd section of the Tokyo Stock Exchange, we are not listed it yet.↵
Here's our website (URL), but the other company sharing our name the URL is (URL).↵
Confirmation of your submission of the financial statements would be required, please ensure to check this↵
Could to tell us the URL, ID , and PASSWORD of your platform?

元の翻訳
私はそれらをスタートさせなくてはなりません。購入分を今支払いたいですか？そしてそれを私が送る。それとも他の物を得るのかが分かるまで待ってみましょうか？

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私はそれらを継続させなくてはなりません。すでに購入された分を今支払って、そしてそれを私が送ることがご希望ですか。それとも他の物を落札されるかが分かるまで待ってみましょうか？

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申し訳ありませんが、燻蒸並びに植物検疫証明書が必要かどうか確認して頂けませんでしょうか？
それが税関サイドで必要なのなのかを知りたいので早い段階で教えてください。
到着は4月9日です。4月6日にサンプルと一緒にコンテナに搭載します。ありがとうございます。フィードバックをよろしくお願いします。

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恐れ入りますが、燻蒸消毒並びに植物検疫証明書が必要かどうか確認して頂けませんでしょうか？
それが税関サイドで必要なのかを知りたいので、早急にご確認ください。
ETD（出港予定日）は4月9日です。4月6日にサンプルと一緒にコンテナに搭載します。↵
フィードバックをお待ちしております。

元の翻訳
How have you been ?
I have heard that the coronavirus has been spreading over Turkey as well on the TV news.
It has been greater spreading rapidly worldwide since the last email for you about a week time.
In Tokyo, it may likely lockdown situation soon.
I have been staying home for working for a couple of weeks.
Are you and your family and also for staffs at your hospital staying safe?
If you are experiencing the shortage of surgical masks, please let me know.
I will be able to send some of them even in same shortage situation in Japan for masks now.
Be safe !
When the situation will be better I do hope to work with you again soon.

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How have you been ?
I heard on the TV news that the coronavirus has been spreading over Turkey as well.
It has been spreading even more rapidly worldwide since the last email for you about a week time.
In Tokyo, it may likely be lockdown situation soon.
I have working from home for a couple of weeks.
Are you, your family and also staff at your hospital staying safe?
If you have a shortage of surgical masks, please let me know.
I will be able to send some of them even though we alre also in shortage in Japan now.
Stay safe !
When the situation is better I do hope to work with you again soon.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your support.
How is the things going on?
I would like to hold an meeting to discuss notices for ordering at this time over the Skype.
Would you be available on 19th of March? As our Vietnamese staff is also attending so that conduction in Vietnamese will be possible
Could you please tell me your available schedule?
With regards.

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Thanks for your support.
How are things going?
I would like to hold a meeting to discuss things to take note for the order this time over the Skype.
Would you be available on 19th of March? As our Vietnamese staff is also attending, we can conduct this in Vietnamese.
Could you please tell me your available schedule?
With regards.

元の翻訳
I was majored in an accoustic and recording engineering when I was a student in university. I am very much curious about A even though I haven't been working for the music industry. I believe this product must be having possibility to users who aren't familiarised in music for theirs daily life. As you know Japan is facing ageing society these days. Treatment of Alzheimer's disease can be obtained along with support of health care programmes of Japan. We have a various kind of ideas at facility other than creative activity using ORBA.
Of course, we are also specialised in approaching the route except for musical instruments or other appliances.
Wouldn't you be considering you to deal with our products?

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I majored in accoustic and recording engineering when I was a college student. I am very much curious about AI even though I haven't been working for the music industry. I believe this product must be beneficial to users who do not listen to music regularly in their daily life. Japan faces ageing society these days. Treatment of Alzheimer's disease can be obtained along with support of health care programmes of Japan. We have a various kind of ideas at facility other than creative activity using ORBA.
Of course, we also specialise in approaching the route except for musical instruments or other appliances.
Would you be have a contract with us regarding our items?