Himeyoshiko (sakura1980z) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for your continued support.
We appreciate that you let us know the tracking number for shipping back.
On this occasion of customs clearance at U.S., we regret to inform you the results that we return them.
Anyway, we would like to take action to avoid same trouble.

Now, we considers the follwoing actions:
1. All items should be described HS Code on invoices.
2. All watches should be prepared special invoices.

To proceed the next customs clearance smoothly, could you please give us your additional advice?

Your cooperation would be deeply appreciated.

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Thank you for your continued support.
We appreciate that you let us know the tracking number for the return shipping.
We are truly disappointed to hear that the item was made to be returned when it came under U.S. customs clearance.
As such, we would like to take action to avoid the same problem from occurring.

The actions we are currently considering are as follows:
1. All items should have an HS Code written for them.
2. Prepare special invoices for watches.

If there is anything that can be done to have future customs clearances proceed more smoothly, could you please give us your advice?

Your cooperation would be deeply appreciated.

元の翻訳
混乱させて申し訳ございません。 当社はこの製品ラインのMake Offerボタンを
解除しておくことを忘れていました。定価でこの製品をご購入でしたら、その差額
を返金致します。割引後の価格でご注文する方法ですと、eBayでは、まず、インボイスをそちらに送ってもらえません。もし、ご注文をご希望でしたら、別に確認のメッセージをお送りいただき、貴方からの送金を当方が受領次第、ご注文と分割返金の様子がわかるように注意しておきます。
当方としてはややこしくて申し訳ないとは思いますが。。。

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混乱させて申し訳ございません。 当社はこの製品ラインのMake Offerボタンを
解除しておくことを忘れていました。定価でこの製品をご購入いただき、その差額
を返金致します。残念ながら、これが、お安くお求めいただく唯一の方法です。eBayでは、先にインボイスを送ることができません。もし、ご注文いただきましたら、別に確認のメッセージをお送りください。ご注文がわかるように注意し、貴方からの送金を当方が受領次第、一部返金の手続きを致します。
当方としてはややこしくて申し訳ないとは思いますが。。。

元の翻訳
We are afraid to inform you that Ford Explorer you purchased will be shipped on 4th of Dec. due to the delay of documents from previous owner. Originally, the schedule was 27th but changed to 25th, so it was not in time. Since we have already registered it,
the departure won't be delayed again. We will revert you accordingly.

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We regret to inform you that the Ford Explorer you purchased will be shipped on December 4 due to the delay of documents from the previous owner. Originally, it was scheduled to ship on the 27th, but was changed to the 25th, so it didn't make it on time. Since we have already registered it,
the departure won't be delayed again. We will revert you accordingly [?].

元の翻訳
Confiming the tracking number, we have found that we dispatched them on 25th of Oct. The forwarding company devliered them to the buyer on 30th of Octo. but seems still holding them because they were absent . Please take care of this matter.↵

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Checking the tracking number, we have found that we dispatched them on 25th of Oct. The forwarding company delivered them to the buyer on 30th of October. However, the forwarding company is holding on the the items as the buyer was absent during delivery. Please take note.

元の翻訳
I let you know when I go to Brazil,
Could you please contact me when you come again to Japan, Marcelo.
I practice to improve my English and Portuguese as much as possible.
Thank you for sending your e-mail.

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I let you know when I go to Brazil,
Could you please contact me when you come again to Japan, Marcelo.
I practice to improve my English and Portuguese as much as possible.
Thank you for sending me an e-mail.

元の翻訳
Antique Craftmanship Chisel, mostly unsued, dateless. a small lack of edge (refer to the image) . It's old but in good condition. Since the judgement of condition depends on persons, it's needed to check the image. It's enough to use still now.
Each width of edge is about 4cm1.8cm1.8cm1.8cm1.8cm1.4cm8mm8mm6mm6mm.

The battery-powered chisel was finished checking of operation.
They have coating deterioration and sealed off because children played as toys.

Murata Heihachi played by Chiaki Minoru 1/6 real figure

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Antique Craftmanship Chisel, seems mostly unused but the age is unknown. There is a small fragment on the blade (refer to the image) . It's old but in good condition. Since judgement of the condition varies from person to person, it's necessary to check the image. It's still useable.
The width of each edge is about 4cm1.8cm1.8cm1.8cm1.8cm1.4cm8mm8mm6mm6mm.

The functionality of the battery-powered chisel has been checked.
As children have played with it there are chips in the coating and tears in the sticker.

Murata Heihachi played by Chiaki Minoru 1/6 real figure

元の翻訳
Thank you so much for your reply.
And thanks for presentation for your price.
Actually, the same goods with othter negotiation was US$368.99.
If they are same price as yours, I want to purchase them from your shop.
For, I have purchased the goods from you about six months before and remember your polite attitude.
Could you please sell your goods at US$368.99?

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Thank you so much for your reply.
And thanks for presentation of your price.
Actually, the same goods with other negotiation was US$368.99.
If they are same price as yours, I want to purchase them from your shop.
For, I have purchased the goods from you about six months before and remember your polite attitude.
Could you please sell your goods at US$368.99?

元の翻訳
Please arrange a refund for shimatora345@gmail.com. If impossible, please arrange a refund by Send Money. Any credit card is not available.
You can keep this situation if you are not satisfied my terms of refund.
If so, I will return the goods and evaluate it. Please send your REQUEST then.
Please email me upon completion of refund and let me know your sending address again. I will charge you for returns.
I hope your prompt action for this problem.

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Please arrange a refund for shimatora345@gmail.com. If impossible, please arrange a refund by Send Money. Please don't make a refund by credit card.
You can keep this situation if you are not satisfied my terms of refund.
If so, I will return the goods and evaluate it again. Please send your request then.
Please email me upon completion of refund and let me know your return address again. I will charge you for return shipping fee.
I demand your prompt action for this problem.

元の翻訳
13. 提携
サプライヤーと販売代理店は胡麻とその販売工程を、製品と生産工程の管轄権を持つ公的政府機関に申請して登録しなければならない。
14．全体契約
両者はこれが全体契約であることとし、他の条文や条項、口頭並び他でもって↵
例外がないことに同意する。
15. 譲渡
いずれの当事者も相手方当事者の書面による事前の同意無しに本契約の全部か部分的に第三者に譲渡する権利を有しない。ただし、一方の当事者がこの同意無しに行うなら、所有企業体に対して本契約に基づき、その権利と義務を譲渡してもよい。

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13. 協力
サプライヤーおよび販売代理店は胡麻およびその販売工程を、製品または生産工程の管轄権を持ついずれかの政府機関に協力して登録しなければならない。
14．完全合意事項
両当事者はこの契約が完全合意事項であることとし、口頭またはその他による、他の事項または条件がないことに合意する。
15. 譲渡
いずれの当事者も一方の当事者の書面による事前の同意無しにこの契約の全部または一部を個人または企業体に譲渡する権利を有しない。ただし、いずれの当事者も、前記同意無しに、その所有しまたは管理する企業体に対しこの契約に基づくその権利および義務を譲渡してもよい。

元の翻訳
洪水、火災、天災、事故、遅延、車不足、交通網の不測の事態、サプライヤーの
管理下を越える様々な特徴の原因。　法律上、公的政府機関の行政執行による業務遂行が不可能な場合は本契約遂行の遅延もしくは免除をしなければならない。
11．保証責任
サプライヤーは保証する、
A.胡麻が第三者に合法的に無償で提供され、サプライヤーが胡麻に正式な肩書きをもたせ、その胡麻を販売する権利を持つと；

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洪水、火災、天災、事故、遅延、車不足、交通網の不測の事態、サプライヤーの
管理下を越える様々な特徴の原因。　法律上、公的政府機関の行政執行による業務遂行が不可能な場合は本契約遂行の遅延もしくは免除をしなければならない。
11．保証責任
サプライヤーは以下のことを保証する
A.胡麻が第三者に合法的に無償で提供され、サプライヤーが胡麻とその胡麻を販売する完全な権原を持つこと；