松井 幸子 (rurun) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I haven't recieved a invoce of the Order0923 yet.
Could you ship it today?
I have checked the Order No.1165 and 1188.Though the Order No.1195 was ordered on Sep 19th might have not shipped yet.Why it hasn't shipped?
If it's because of some of those items are out of stock so they haven't shipped,please ship those items stocked first.

修正後
I haven't recieved the invoce for Order0923 yet.
Could you send it by the end of the day?
I have confirmed the shipment for Order No.1165 and 1188. ↵
However the Order No.1195 ordered on September 19th does not seem to have been shipped yet. ↵
Why hasn't it been shipped?
If the shipment is put on hold because some of those items are out of stock, please ship available items first.

元の翻訳
それで、何と言うのでしょうか？
時間内に全てを翻訳することはできますか？

追加要項2点
・明日中に英語の文章を用意できなければ、10月6日の原本に戻らなくてはなりません。
・50ユーロの週末手当をつけます。

時間内にできるかどうか連絡ください。

修正後
それで、あなたの意見はどうですか？
時間内に全てを翻訳することはできますか？

追加要項2点
・明日中に英語の文章を用意できなければ、当初発表予定だった10月6日に戻さなくてはなりません。
・50ユーロの週末業務特別手当をつけます。

時間内にできるかどうか連絡ください。

元の翻訳
I'm really sorry for late report.
And thank you so much for choosing to parcase the kitchen knife at our shop among another many shops.
We certainly had sent the item you parcased at 18th Sep.
It will be delivered to Germany tommorrow.
If in the case that it won't be delivered until 25th Sep,please tell us.
We will research the reason neatly.
I'm sorry again that you are looking forward to getting our knife but make you worried.
If you have any questions please don't hesitate asking.

修正後
I'm really sorry for [article] late report.
And thank you so much for choosing to parcase [spelling] the kitchen knife at our shop among another [grammar] many shops.
We certainly had sent the item you parcased [spelling] at [wrong proposition] September 18.
It will be delivered to Germany tommorrow [spelling].
If it won't be delivered until September 25, please tell us.
We will research the reason neatly [word choice].
I'm sorry again that you are looking forward to getting our knife but make you worried.
If you have any questions please don't hesitate asking.