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元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.

Probably, that product would not with the defective article.

Anyway, if you feel inconvenient when using it, please return.

We will refund all of the product price and postage to Japan.

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry.

Probably, that product would not with the defective article.

Anyway, if you feel inconvenient when using it, please return.

We will refund all of the product price and postage fees to Japan.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply and applying for Facebook.

WEB site we do does not work with Golater. (Evernote co)
Our services have the ability to create a wish list on its own to share.
We have not making app and mobile services yet, I'm just very interested in approaching Golater.

Also, let's talk about this, please.

修正後
Thank you for your reply and applying for Facebook.

WEB site we do does not work with Golater. (Evernote as well)
Our services have the ability to create a wish list on its own and has a sharing functionality.
We have not making app and mobile services yet, I'm just very interested in the Golater approach.

Let's also talk about various things.

元の翻訳
To Mom
Happy 60th birthday
We want to say the biggest thanks to you for giving birth and bringing us up.
Please take care of health.
Your children

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To Mom
Happy 60th birthday
We want to say the biggest thanks to you for giving birth and bringing us up.
Please take care of health and stay healthy.
Your children

元の翻訳
Thank you for your immediately reply.

There is hope as described below.

[Point I would like correction]
A: b → c
D: (blank) → e

[Point I, please confirm it]
When I had a license in another project previously, it seems to be a use fee of 150 pounds in five years.
(I will attach a document at the time)
I have an open and royalty of this time, such as conditions would have changed something?

Additional, after checking on Company F for original consignment, we will contact you again.
Thanking you in advance .

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Thank you for your immediate reply.

There are some favors as described below.

[Point where I would like your correction]
A: b → c
D: (blank) → e

[Point that I'd like you to confirm]
When I had a license in another project previously, it seems to be a use fee of 150 pounds in five years.
(I will attach a document at the time)
I have an open and royalty of this time, such as conditions would have changed something?

Additional, after checking on Company F for original consignment, we will contact you again.
Thanking you in advance .