翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → ネイティブ 英語 )

評価: 44 / 1 Review / 2013/09/13 13:17:27

日本語

お母さんへ
60才おめでとう
私たちを産み、育ててくれた事に最大の感謝を
健康には気をつけて元気でいて下さい
子供たちより

英語

To Mom
Happy 60th birthday
We want to say the biggest thanks to you for giving birth and bringing us up.
Please take care of health.
Your children

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[削除済みユーザ] 45
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/09/13 13:31:40

元の翻訳
To Mom
Happy 60th birthday
We want to say the biggest thanks to you for giving birth and bringing us up.
Please take care of health.
Your children

修正後
To Mom
Happy 60th birthday
We want to say the biggest thanks to you for giving birth and bringing us up.
Please take care of health and stay healthy.
Your children

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