Nana (naaaaaaana) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing our item this time.
Do you like it?↵
I'm so pleased if you like it!
I hope you purchase our item again.
Thank you for choosing our item from many items. Thank you again.

修正後
Thank you for purchasing our item.
Are you happy with the item you received?↵
Your satisfaction is our pleasure!
I hope you purchase our item again.
Thank you for choosing our shop out of the many options that is available. Thank you again.

元の翻訳
USPSに既に小包が届いているはずなので、電話をしてそれを届けるよう伝えてもらうことは出来ますか？

修正後
USPSに電話して小包を配達するよう連絡いただけないでしょうか？小包はすでにUSPS施設内にあるので、配達するよう電話していただく必要があります。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message!
I make effort to deliver this merchandise for you early.

However this haven't be selled in Japan.
So I will ask the maker when I can receive it.

I think I can receive it at the beginning of February.

I will put it at my store after confirm.
I will let you know first.

Please wait just a little.

Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for your message!
I make effort to deliver this merchandise for you soon.

However this haven't been sold in Japan.
So I will ask the maker when I can receive it.

I think I can receive it at the beginning of February.

I will put it at my store after confirming.
I will let you know first.

Please wait just a little.

Thank you.