Maki (luvmaki1101) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
お詫びじやなく、注文したギターが求めっています。あなたたちから本当のことまったく聞いていない。それゆえにマネージャーと話してくれないとフィードバックを書かない。もし本当の注文満たさないことを言ってても私も支払いしましたので他のお客様に売ることではない。

修正後
お詫びではなく、注文したギターを入手したかったのです。御社から明確な内容も、真実も聞いておりません。たとえ、もしあなたが仰ることが正しいとしても、支払いが完了しているギターを他の人に売る理由がないと思うので、御社のマネージャーとお話させて頂くまで、フィードバックを書くのを待っております。

元の翻訳
貴方が今言ったことは全部うそです。御社の従業員の不真面目は信じられません。まともなビジネスではありません。因果応報の憂き目に会いますよ。もし単に私から購入するだけだったのであれば、どうして写真や説明を削除するためにわざわざ時間を取ったのですか？もっと時間をかけて「buy it now　（今すぐ購入する）」商品として再出品すればよかったのではないでしょうか？とるべき行動をあなたたちは1人として行いませんでした。Aから私が受け取った最後のメールを是非見て欲しいのですが、貴方のマネージャーに見せましたか？いずれにせよ、今回の一連の出来事については非常に残念ですし、通常何千何百と言うギターを購入販売してきましたが貴方のような仕事のやり方は絶対にしません。

修正後
貴方が今言ったことは全部うそです。御社の従業員の不誠実さは信じられません。まともなビジネスではありません。因果応報の憂き目に会いますよ。もし単に私のためだけに「Buy It Now（今すぐ購入する）」を設定したのであれば、どうして写真や説明を削除するためにわざわざ時間を取ったのですか？「Buy It Now　（今すぐ購入する）」商品として再出品するよりも時間を費やしていますよね。あなたたちは取るべき行動を誰1人として行いませんでした。Aから私が受け取った最後のメールを是非見て欲しいのですが、貴方のマネージャーに見せましたか？いずれにせよ、今回の一連の出来事については非常に残念ですし、通常、何十万ドルのギターを購入販売していますが、貴方のような仕事のやり方は絶対にしません。

元の翻訳
That reason was due to the under value offer on your invoice. The rule of our company is that whenever there's an under value offer coming from the client and despite that the full amount payment has been made for a product, it would be put on hold and reported to the manager. Undervalued product shipping has an exposure in Japanese law so it has to wait for the handling of the manager. During that time, it was decided to be sold in a store within Japan. We ask for your kind understanding. Again, we apologize.

修正後
The reason was due to the undervalued offer on your invoice. The rule of our company is that whenever there's an undervalued offer coming from the client and despite that the full amount payment has been made for a product, it would be put on hold and reported to the manager. Undervalued product shipping has an exposure to Japanese law so it was pending on the manager's direction. During that time, it was decided to be sold in a store within Japan. We ask for your kind understanding. Again, we apologize.

元の翻訳
欠陥商品
・商品がわれわれの技術者によって欠陥があると決定された場合、われわれは貴殿の口座に返金するか、商品を修理するか、交換するための手配をします。
・商品到着後１５日以内に商品の欠陥をご報告いただければ、返品のための送料はこちらで負担します。しかし、１５日を過ぎた場合はあなたが送料すべてを負担しなければなりません。

その他の制限事項
・われわれはいかなる者に対しても販売を制限する、または禁止する権利を留保します。
・われわれは受けた注文を却下する権利を留保し、そして／またはいかなる注文にせよその数量を制限する権利を留保します。
・貴殿の注文が却下された場合、その旨はe-mailまたは電話でお知らせすることになります。

その他の合意事項
・上記条項はわれわれが商品を貴殿に供給するすべての取引について適用されます。

修正後
欠陥商品/初期不良
・弊社の担当者によって欠陥商品だと認められた場合、返金、または、修理・交換の手配を致します。
・商品到着後１５日以内に商品の欠陥をご報告いただければ、返品のための送料はこちらで負担します。しかし、１５日を過ぎた場合は、お客様に送料を負担して頂きます。

その他の制限事項
・弊社はいかなる方に対しても販売を制限、または禁止する権利を留保します。
・弊社は受けた注文を却下、そして・または、注文数を制限する権利を留保します。
・注文が却下された際は、e-mailまたは電話でご連絡を差し上げます。

その他の合意事項
・上記条項は、弊社の商品を供給するすべての取引について適用されます。

元の翻訳
I have shipped it today.

Please find the below cost I paid.
I will charge you via PayPal in JPY.
Please let me know the e-mail address of the billing destination.

(1) The item with the tracking number XX costed tariff--> JPY ○
Please confirm with DHL for the fee.
(2) Shipping fee from the customer to me (returned item)
(3) Shipping fee from Japan to China (for 2 units)
(4) My customer has settled the payment with a credit card for the purchase.
Then the handling fee was charged and its amount is already fixed.
You are responsible to pay for this because the inconvenience was caused at your end.
I have settled a full refund to the customer.
Therefore I charge you to pay me the total JPY ○.

I have lost one customer.

修正後
I have shipped it today.

Please find the below cost I paid.
I will charge you via PayPal in JPY.
Please let me know the e-mail address for the invoice.

(1) The item with the tracking number XX costed tariff--> JPY ○
Please confirm with DHL for the fee.
(2) Shipping fee from the customer to me (returned item)
(3) Shipping fee from Japan to China (for 2 units)
(4) My customer has settled the payment with a credit card for the purchase.
Then the handling fee was charged and its amount has already been fixed.
You are responsible to pay for this because the inconvenience was caused at your end.
I have settled a full refund to the customer.
Therefore I charge you the total JPY ○.

I have lost one customer.

元の翻訳
I wrote it because I wanted to work on a story that goes "○○ must be somewhere in here!!"
If I directed the story pointing the finger at "someone", it could possibly ruin the unity and turn the story into a sad one. We named "Yamada-san must be in here!!" to make the story sounds fun.

"It appears risky in anybodys eyes from 1160 degrees, can't you see that?"
"I sure do, it's more than enough."
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Man: "I suck at singing. Plus... my eyes are hurting."
Child: "Are you in pain? Where? Let Chiko stroke where it hurts."
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How dare you think that you could possibly be familiar with people without going through the pain and unpleasant experiences?

修正後
I wrote it because I wanted to work on a story that goes "○○ must be somewhere in here!!"
If I directed the story pointing the finger at "someone", it could possibly ruin the unity and turn the story into a sad one. We named "Yamada-san must be in here!!" to make the story sound fun.

"It appears risky in anybodys eyes from 1160 degrees, can't you see that?"
"I sure do, it's more than enough."
-
Man: "I suck at singing. Plus... my eyes are hurting."
Child: "Are you in pain? Where? Let Chiko stroke where it hurts."
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How dare you think that you could possibly be familiar with people without going through the pain and unpleasant experiences?

元の翻訳
WE are sorry to bother you with the DM out of the blue. I have come to know this Script through my friend's referral.
I have one question for you.
Would you be able to customize the following video website in order to enable video posts?
If it could be customized, I would like to order ABC Script.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Just in case, allow me to provide the below information. Sorry if it is not needed.

修正後
We are sorry about unannounced DM. I happened to know about this Script through my friend.
I have one question for you.
Would you be able to customize to enable video posting in the following video website?
If possible, I would like to consider purchasing ABC Script.

I look forward to hearing from you.

I added the following information just in case. Please disregard if not needed.

元の翻訳
彼らは製品の品質を保証していますが、いずれにせよ、私が電話して注文をキャンセルする事ができます。なので、できるだけ早く返事がほしいです。そして、何が希望か教えて下さい。
もちろん、できるある選択は、全部で８個の注文に対する２６０の２倍の全部で５２０の全額返金を求める事です。↵
もう一つのできる選択は、何日かぐらい待つ事です。
または、もし再度整えられたものでよければ、あなたに一個につき６５ドルの代わりに６０ドルで売る事ができます。そしてもちろん、もし何かどういう事であろうとその中古品に不備があれば、私が彼らに電話して、いかなる質問の余地なく、あなたに別のものを送らせる事ができます。
これが、あなたからの返事のメッセージをもらうまでに、私ができる事です。そして、もう一度、この不都合について大変申し訳ありませんと言わせて下さい。

修正後
該当商品には、保証がついていますが、いずれにせよ、私が電話して、注文をキャンセルをします。お客様のご希望を、迅速にご連絡ください。
選択肢としまして、全額返金です。一回のオーダーが、2個で260ドル。2回のオーダーの合計は520ドルです。↵
または、↵
数日、お待ち頂く。
または、リファービッシュド（修正済み）商品でも、宜しければ単価65ドルではなく、60ドルで販売できます。↵
もし、リファービッシュド商品に不備・不具合があれば、どういう状況であれ、代替品をお送りするように対応いたします。
お客様の返信を待っている現時点で、対応出来る事は上記になります。このたびは、ご不便をおかけしまして、大変申し訳ありませんでした。

元の翻訳
あなたのアカウントとあなたから提供された情報を精査した結果、あなたの販売権を回復しないことを決定いたしました。

マイナス評価、発送遅延、出荷前キャンセル、返金及びクレームは販売者の総合的実績を反映します。これらの項目の１つ以上に割合の高いものがあるということは、ほとんどの場合購入者が取引に満足できない可能性が見込まれることを意味します。

修正後
あなたのアカウントと提供された情報を精査した結果、販売権を回復しないことを決定いたしました。

マイナス評価、発送遅延、出荷前キャンセル、返金及びクレームは販売者の総合的実績を反映します。これらの項目の１つ以上に割合の高いものがあるということは、ほとんどの場合購入者が取引に満足できない可能性が見込まれることを意味します。

元の翻訳
はい、私たちは割引価格で提供します。新しいパージョンの商品といくつかの目玉商品がうまく働かないため、EAを更新しています。

修正後
はい、私たちは割引価格で提供します。新ビルドバージョン（＝プログラム用語）で、いくつかの機能が動かないので、EAを更新しています。

元の翻訳
Although I don't have any questions,
I will explain present situation and outlook of our company for reference.

The market places and goods that our company has account now.
Amazon(general consumer goods)→one to hundreds
Antiques→one

The market places that will be set up
Shopify(almost antiques only)

About goods sold on Amazon
It is not original goods made from our company, some sellers are selling big brand goods.

修正後
Although I don't have any questions,
I will explain the present situation and outlook of our company for reference.

The market places and goods that our company has account now.
Amazon (general consumer goods) => (Inventory) one to hundreds items
eBay (Antiques) => (Inventory) one-off items

The market places that will be set up
Shopify (Mostly antiques only)

About goods sold on Amazon
It is not original goods made from our company, but some sellers are selling big brand goods.

元の翻訳
[SPECIAL BAND]
Sahashi Yoshiyuki (G) / Dr.KyOn (Key) / SPAM (Per) / Hideki Matsubara (B) / Kawamura "Kasuke" Tomoyasu (Dr)
Yoshito Tanaka (G) / Miyazato Yota (Sax) / Kumi Sasaki (Cho · Org) / Otaki Yuko (Cho) and others

Fees : 7500 yen for Arena stand seats (All seats reserved / tax included)
* Preschoolers are not allowed to enter the venue
Release : Ticket sales scheduled on April 26 (Sat) at 10:00

修正後
[SPECIAL BAND]
Yoshiyuki Sahashi (G) / Dr.KyOn (Key) / SPAM (Per) / Hideki Matsubara (B) / Noriyasu "Kasuke" Kawamura (Dr)
Yoshito Tanaka (G) / Yota Miyazato (Sax) / Kumi Sasaki (Cho · Org) / Yuko Ohtaki (Cho) and more!

Price: 7500 yen. Reserved Arena and Stand seats (All seats reserved / Tax included)
* Preschool-child is not allowed to enter the venue
Goes on Sale : 10am on April 26 (Sat)

元の翻訳
5/31(Sat) FM802 25th ANNIVERSARY 802 GO! SPECIAL LIVE RADIO MAGIC will be make an appearance.

修正後
Will be performing on the stage at FM802 25th ANNIVERSARY 802 GO! SPECIAL LIVE RADIO MAGIC, on May. 31 (Sat).

元の翻訳
I thought DHL could have lost the brackets, so I've already asked them to conduct a search, so some prats of your message don't make sense. I'm afraid that I still have a feeling that you guys lost the brackets before handing the bumper (a.k.a fender) out to DHL.

修正後
I thought DHL could have lost the brackets, so I've already asked them to conduct a search. But some parts of your message don't make sense. I'm afraid that I still have a feeling that you guys lost the brackets before handing the bumper (a.k.a fender) out to DHL.

元の翻訳
This guitar a limited edition Gibson only made for Japan.
The color is the popular TV Yellow. It is a very rare Les Paul Special, unavailable in the United States.

Selling prices from various net shops.
Fender　A　　US$**⇒US$**
Fender　B　　US$**⇒US$**

To change all the black parts to aged white would be $60, including part cost and workmanship.
With new 57st & a 1985 pickup, I think you will get a better sound from 85's.

修正後
This guitar is a limited edition Gibson only made for Japan.
The color is the popular TV Yellow. It is a very rare Les Paul Special which is unavailable in the United States.

Discount prices from our internet shops as follows:
Fender　A　　US$**⇒US$**
Fender　B　　US$**⇒US$**

To change all of the black parts to the aged white would be $60, including part and labor fee.
Comparing with new 57st & a 1985 pickup, I think you will get a better sound from 85's.

元の翻訳
When I made direct inquiry, I received the following reply

XXXX

In eventuality perhaps the brackets were thrown out by MYUS staff.
Or
While it was in transit to Japan it was lost, either is possible I think.
Why I say this is that when I received the first package, only the bumper was in there, the packaging was damaged quite badly.
There were no brackets in either the first or second package.

修正後
When I made a direct inquiry, I received the following reply

XXXX

The brackets might have been thrown away by MYUS staff.
Or
During the delivery to Japan, it might've fallen off.
Why I say this is because when I received the first package, only the bumper was in the package, but the packaging was damaged quite badly.
There were no brackets in either the first or second package.

元の翻訳
Before return your stuff, please check and read well an email which I will send with how to return the stuff.

☆We cannot accept it if...
it passed 7 days after you got it.↵
you used it.
you damaged or broke it.
you damaged, broke, lost, or throw the tag or the package.
you damaged it when you tried it on.
you fixed or cleansed it after you got it.
it was sold as a sale stuff, or other special event's stuff.
it was with the notification "impossible to return", like a pair of pierced earring or leggings.

修正後
Please read carefully the email informing "how to return the product" before your attempt of return.

* We cannot accept return or exchange if:
- Return attempt more than 7 days after delivery↵
- Product already used
- Product damaged or Broken
- The tag and/or package damaged, broken, lost, or discarded
- Product soiled upon try-on
- Product repaired and/or cleaned after delivery
- Sales product and/or Special Product
- Product specified "NO RETURN" on the page, such as Pierced earring, and Leggings, etc