K Panzer (kpanzer) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for all your trouble.

Have you shipped out the merchandise ordered recently?

Sorry for the inconvenience, but this is an order from a very important customer so please send us the tracking number.

Yours sincerely.

修正後
Thank you for all your trouble.

Have you shipped out the merchandise I ordered recently?

Sorry for the inconvenience, but this is an order from a very important customer, so please send us the tracking number.

Yours sincerely,

元の翻訳
Thank you for all your trouble.

Have you shipped out the merchandise ordered recently?

Sorry for the inconvenience, but this is an order from a very important customer so please send us the tracking number.

Yours sincerely.

修正後
Thank you for your support.

Have you shipped (out) the merchandise ordered recently?

Sorry for taking your time, but this is the order from a very important customer, so please send us the tracking number.

Yours sincerely.(Thank you and regards)

元の翻訳
Excuse me, I have no knowledge of this merchandise.
Is it from an order that we put in previously?

About when was this merchandise ordered?

Also, why was it on hold for all this time?

Is this special price due to the biyearly deal on bulk orders?

Has the payment for this merchandise already been settled?

I apologize for all the questions.
We will attempt to confirm what is going on again over here as well.

Thanks in advance.

修正後
Excuse me, I have no knowledge of this merchandise.
Is it from an order that we put in previously?

About when was this merchandise ordered?

Also, why was it on hold for all this time?

Is this special price due to the biannual deal on bulk orders?

Has the payment for this merchandise already been settled?

I apologize for all the questions.
We will attempt to confirm what is going on again over here as well.

Thanks in advance.

元の翻訳
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