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I would like to order some additional items.
This time I would like the goods to be sent directly to the cusotmer.

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Light bulbs 2pcs
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- For this item, AC adopter with PSE is not needed. Please send the original accessories.
- I would like a white box

I need to know if I can have them delivered by the end of this month, as the delivery time is critical.

I am looking for your earliest reply. Thank you.

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I would like to order some additional items.
This time I would like the goods to be sent directly to the customer.

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Light bulbs 2pcs
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- For this item, an AC adapter with PSE is not needed. Please send the original accessories.
- I would like a white box.

I need to know if I can have them delivered by the end of this month, as the delivery time is critical.

I am looking for your earliest reply. Thank you.

元の翻訳
We apologize for informing you this late. We have posted your product on our new homepage. Please check it out. Please feel free to contact us if you have experienced any trouble.

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We apologize for informing you of this so late. We have posted your product on our new homepage. Please check it out. Please feel free to contact us if you experienced any trouble.

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Hi!

Currently, the account is suspended.

I'm very sorry.

I will complete payment by 25th.

Can I restore the account after payment is complete?

I would appreciate your reply. Thank you.

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Hi!

Currently, my account is suspended.

I'm very sorry.

I will complete payment by the 25th.

Can I restore my account after the payment is complete?

I would appreciate your reply. Thank you.

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"Musen-mai" is pre-washed rice ready to be cooked without washing.

This is Akita Komachi brand rice, which is cultivated with an extremely reduced amount of agricultural chemicals.

Here I am showing you a recipe where anyone can easily cook delicious rice. You will enjoy the real Japanese taste, which is almost the same as you have in Japan.

1. Put this rice into a rice cooker with 500ml of cold mineral water.
2. Wait for 30 minutes.
3. Turn on the rice cooker.

The key points are: cold mineral water and waiting for 30 minutes.

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"Musen-mai" is pre-washed rice ready to be cooked without washing.

This is Akita Komachi brand rice, which is cultivated with an extremely reduced amount of agricultural chemicals.

Here I am showing you a recipe where anyone can easily cook delicious rice. You will enjoy the real Japanese taste, which is almost the same as you would have in Japan.

1. Put this rice into a rice cooker with 500ml of cold mineral water.
2. Wait for 30 minutes.
3. Turn on the rice cooker.

The key points are: cold mineral water and waiting for 30 minutes.

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Click on the slide you find in the 'slide list', and use the entry column shown at the bottom.

・How do I create a new slide?

When creating a new slide, Click on the top of the EE (FF)

・ I cant seem to modify properly

To learn how to use the modification process, read below.

・When you want to use the AA
ff provides suggestions/requests to improve the environment on our site.

Comments and Requests : Type here

Please use appropriate language.

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Click on the thread you find in the 'slide list', and use the entry column shown at the bottom.

・How do I create a new thread?

When creating a new thread, Click on the top of the EE (FF)

・ I can't seem to edit properly

To learn how to use the editting process, read below.

・When you want to use the AA
ff provides suggestions/requests to improve the environment on our site.

Comments and Requests : Type here

Please use appropriate language.

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You can alter pressing the BB button.

Cautions when writing an entry.
There are several points when you want to amend neatly.

Write carefully.

Please refrain from the followings acts:↵
・Broken sentences that underlie incorrections.
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Diligently separating sentences.
Long sentences can be odd when not broked down, please digently seperate the Period " .　" / Comma ”　, " / Maru " 。 "　/　Apostrophe " 、 "and New paragraphs or the "CC".

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You can edit by pressing the BB button.

Cautions when writing an entry.
Here are several points to keep in mind when editing.

Write complete sentences.

Please refrain from informal sentences as they will revert back to the way they were prior to being edited.
- Avoid words that are not normally used.
- There may be many times when there are words not used by most countries or technical jargon that cannot be edited so please refrain from using these.
- Be sure to punctuate your sentences.
- Long sentences can be odd when not broken down, please diligently separate them with a period " .　" / aomma ”　, " / maru " 。 "　/　ten " 、 " or with new paragraphs or "CC".

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This is the modified bulletin board site where people of various hobbies can exchange opinion's freely.With the latest correction device, your opinion will be sent to the future, and you will be able to see a future opinion replied back.
Anyone can anonymously write freely on the bulletin board. But any remarks that are particularly disadvantage to the article or slandering remarks to another person will be judged by the manager and may be deleted it without notice.
It can be more carefully revised than the usual error correction machine. The usage is here.

About the contribution for the article
The site is constantly recruiting information.
Findings of interesting articles or the latsest news.

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This is an editable bulletin board site where people of various hobbies can exchange opinions freely. With the latest machine corrections, your opinion will be sent to the future and you will be able to see a future opinion reply back.
Anyone can anonymously write freely on the bulletin board. But any articles that are judged by the mod as particularly disadvantage or slandering another person may be deleted it without notice.
It can revise more carefully than the usual machine corrections. Explanations on how to use it are here.

About the contribution for the article
The site is constantly recruiting information.
Findings of interesting articles or the latest news.

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This product would surely sell well in Japan.
Although we do currently engage in online business currently, it may be a waste if this product is only sold online.
For that purpose, we would like to promote the sale of this product in retail shops, instead of just through the online portal alone.

Would you be able to grant us the rights to sell this item as the sole import agent?
In Japan, it is definitely necessary to launch an appropriate promotion to ensure that the product can have continuous sales for a long period of time.

Should you have any interests in our campaign, we are able to send you a sales proposal.
Awaiting your kind reply.
Thank you.

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This product would surely sell well in Japan.
Although we do currently engage in online business, it may be a waste if this product is only sold online.
For that purpose, we would like to promote the sale of this product in retail shops instead of just through the online portal alone.

Would you be able to grant us the rights to sell this item as the sole import agent?
In Japan, it is definitely necessary to launch an appropriate promotion to ensure that the product can have continuous sales for a long period of time.

Should you have any interests in our campaign, we are able to send you a sales proposal.
Awaiting your kind reply.
Thank you.

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HI guys, it's been a long time! I'm Hanako, one of the members!
The summer has come without doubt, hasn't it!

I have watched quite a few first episodes of anime this summer, and I liked ◯◯ best as you can guess. It's a must-see!

●● was of course amusing, but ◯◯ was better than I had expected!

Though the characters are so good-looking, they are really muscular in their swimsuits! I haven't seen that realistic muscles in an anime in a long time...

I like Haruka, the main character and her junior, Nagisa especially!

I was fascinated with Haruka's cool nature and Nagisa's adorable actions...!

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HI guys, it's been a long time! I'm Hanako, one of the members!
The summer has come without a doubt, hasn't it!

I have watched quite a few first episodes of anime this summer, and I liked ◯◯ best as you can guess. It's a must-see!

●● was of course amusing, but ◯◯ was better than I had expected!

Not only are the characters so good-looking but they are also really muscular in their swimsuits! I haven't seen that realistic muscles in an anime in a long time...

I like Haruka, the main character, and her junior, Nagisa, especially!

I was fascinated with Haruka's cool nature and Nagisa's adorable actions...!

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Thanks for your advice on the bulletin board.
As far as the concern you have raised goes, while it would be a problem in English, it would not be much of an issue in Japanese.

I would appreciate it if you could take care of this. I apologize for my repeated requests.

The source has been partially modified to accommodate the Japanese language. Please see attached.
Please share with us the file where the English source has been modified in case you're having difficulties verifying the behavior.

I would appreciate your attention to this matter. I am very grateful, would like to give you a five-star feedback.

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Thanks for your advice on the bulletin board.
As far as the concern you have raised goes, while it would be a problem in English, it would not be much of an issue in Japanese.

I would appreciate it if you could take care of this. I apologize for my repeated requests.

The source has been partially modified to accommodate the Japanese language. Please see attached.
Please share with us the file where the English source has been modified in case you're having difficulties verifying the behavior.

I would appreciate your attention to this matter. I am very grateful and would like to give you a five-star feedback.

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I’m 名前. I’m posting the products at amazon marketplace.
Thank you for your order.

The item you ordered will be shipped from Japan by air using Japan Post Service.
It will take 8 – 16 days before they will reach you.
Please wait for a while.

I don’t have many reviews now, and am looking for buyers who leave their reviews.
If you reply to this mail just by writing YES on it, I will enclose some gift with your order.
In return, appreciate your review.

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I’m 名前. I sell products on the Amazon marketplace.
Thank you for your order.

The item you ordered will be shipped from Japan by air using the Japan Post Service.
It will take 8 – 16 days before it will reach you.
Please wait for a while.

I don’t have many reviews now and am looking for buyers who will leave their reviews.
If you reply to this mail just by writing YES on it, I will enclose some gift with your order.
In return, I would appreciate your review.

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Thank you for bidding for the item.

I have reviewed all your email.

But I have still been confused.

Where shall I ship the item you have knocked down?

I can ship to any address you want.

But the shipping address should be the PayPal registered address as mentioned in the cautionary statement.

Please be advised that it will not be covered by the buyer’s protection if you would like me to ship to the address not registered at PayPal, please

There will be no extra charge if it is shipped to America or France.

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Thank you for bidding for the item.

I have reviewed all your emails.

But I am still confused.

Where shall I ship the item you have won?

I can ship to any address you want.

But the shipping address should be the PayPal registered address as mentioned in my cautionary statement.

Please be advised that it will not be covered by the buyer’s protection if you would like me to ship to the address not registered at PayPal.

There will be no extra charge if it is shipped to America or France.

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I can't send you an invoice with revised rate.
The reason is, I can't change the price of the item due to the ebay's policy. Therefore, It makes me impossible to issue an invoice because of the following error.
What I think I can do for you, is I make payment of 16$ to your paypal account in advance.
After confirming my payment, would you pay the price on the invoice?
Let me know your e-mail address so that I can pay you.

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I can't send you an invoice with the revised rate.
The reason is because I can't change the price of the item due to eBay's policy. Therefore, It makes it impossible for me to issue an invoice because of the following error.
What I think I can do for you is I will make a payment of $16 to your paypal account in advance.
After confirming my payment, would you pay the price on the invoice?
Let me know your e-mail address so that I can pay you.

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Japanese sword, once said to be the spirit of Japan, is placed in a tough situation.

If it does not sell in Japan, we have to look overseas.

The main character of this piece, Shiro Kunimitsu with the nickname of “Modern Kotetsu” is a prestigious sword smith who has a history of nearly 300 years, and has a record of offering a sword to the Emperor of Japan.

The five sword smith in the family, which is very rare to have, has been coming out with amazing work.

This video is produced to help the sword smith to expand overseas.

If you have any friends overseas that are interested in Japanese swords, please share this!

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Japanese swords, once said to be the spirit of Japan, are in a tough situation.

If they do not sell in Japan, we have to look overseas.

The main character of this piece, Shiro Kunimitsu, with the nickname of “Modern Kotetsu,” is a prestigious sword smith who has a history of nearly 300 years, and had the honor of offering a sword to the Emperor of Japan.

They have five sword smiths, which is rare even in Japan, and have been producing amazing work with their family members.

This video is produced to help these sword smiths expand overseas.

If you have any friends overseas that are interested in Japanese swords, please share this!

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I am very happy to hear that you like Japanese kitchen knives and Japanese swords.

We do not have distributors in Europe.

We are currently looking for a partner that understands the quality and the value of our work.

We are more than happy to sell to anyone that appreciates the quality and the value of our work.

Direct transaction is possible, but because of the nature of the international transaction, payment is only available through PayPal.

We do not do wholesales because we do not wish to sell our products for cheap. However, if you wish to purchase on a regular basis, we can consider an exception.

If you were to make a purchase, how much are you thinking about?

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I am very happy to hear that you like Japanese kitchen knives and Japanese swords.

We do not have distributors in Europe.

We are currently looking for a partner that understands the quality and the value of our work.

We are more than happy to sell to anyone who appreciates the quality and the value of our work.

Direct transaction is possible but because of the nature of international transactions, payment is only available through PayPal.

We do not do wholesales because we do not wish to sell our products for cheap. However, if you wish to purchase on a regular basis, we can consider an exception.

If you were to make a purchase, how much would you be thinking about?

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Are you sure this is not a fake one?
If not, wewould like to purchase.

However we want some discount.
Could you ship it to Florida for $180 each?

If you say you can, we will purchase 20 of them.

And we are thinking of purchasing the items below as well.

Please sell them at wholesale price.

If we can get a good deal, we would increase our purchase.

Are you getting each item from maker or agent?

Then can you get other items from the same maker?

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Are you sure this is not a fake one?
If not, we would like to purchase.

However we want some discount.
Could you ship it to Florida for $180 each?

If you say you can, we will purchase 20 of them.

And we are thinking of purchasing the items below as well.

Please sell them at a wholesale price.

If we can get a good deal, we will increase our purchase.

Are you getting each item from the maker or an agent?

And can you get other items from the same maker?

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I am sorry for the late reply. My name is Tanaka from the head office.

Thank you very much for accepting me for the training. I hope to learn much from the experience and will work hard so that I could be of help to you.

Below is the schedule of stay.
[Schedule]

First, concerning the hotel, it would be great if you could make a reservation at the Hilton.
Also, because I am planning on driving to get around, I was wondering if you have any suggestions for a rental car service. I would greatly appreciate the suggestion.

Thank you for your help.

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I am sorry for the late reply. My name is Tanaka from the head office.

Thank you very much for accepting me for the training. I hope to learn much from this experience and will work hard so that I can be of help to you.

Below is the schedule of my stay.
[Schedule]

First, concerning the hotel, it would be great if you could make a reservation at the Hilton for me.
Also, because I am planning on driving to get around, I was wondering if you have any suggestions for a rental car service? I would greatly appreciate any suggestion.

Thank you for your help.

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I'm trying to buy now.
Currently, I'm on payment screen.
Can I change to 20 products of XXX?

Thank you for arranging with FEDEX.

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I'm trying to buy now.
Currently, I'm on the payment screen.
Can I change it to 20 of XXX?

Thank you for making the arrangements with FEDEX.

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I bought the shoes last year at a fifty percent discount to the retail price. I actually was planning to purchase 50 or more pairs of shoes for this opportunity, but the factory was out of stock, so the shipment quantity has decreased. I will make additional orders, so could you give us a discount to the shoes I purchased this time.
Also, thank you for sending me the latest catalogue for shirts. Could you give us the prices listed on the catalogue? For, other companies have already obtained the price list for the same catalogue.

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I bought the shoes last year at a fifty percent discount to the retail price. I actually was planning on purchasing 50 or more pairs of shoes during this opportunity but the factory was out of stock so I lowered the shipment quantity. I will make additional orders so could you give me a discount on the shoes I purchased this time?
Also, thank you for sending me the latest catalog for shirts. Could you give me the prices listed on the catalog? Because I've already obtained price lists from other companies for the same catalog.

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The other day the AC adapter arrived.
There doesn't appear to be any problem with it.

So that I can choose between A and B could you please tell me the following?
* The price of each
Because the performance is the same, I'd like to go with the cheaper one.

* The time it would take to get each
I'd like to avoid a situation where I am waiting for the AC adapter.
I'm hoping that it can be shipped promptly after the order.

I look forward to your reply.

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The AC adapter arrived the other day.
There doesn't appear to be any problem with it.

Could you please tell me the following so that I can choose between A and B?
* The price of each
If their performance is the same then I'd like to go with the cheaper one.

* The time it would take to get each
I'd like to avoid a situation where I am waiting for the AC adapter.
I'm hoping that it can be shipped promptly after the order.

I look forward to your reply.