A. de Guzman (kamitoki) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
We sorry for the lack of manual,

The manual is normally attached to the item, but it is possible for the maker to miss enclosing it.

We are sorry, but please follow the link below as we exchange the item.

修正後
We apologize that we have run out of stock of our manuals.

The manual is normally attached to the item, but it is possible for the manufacturer to neglect enclosing it.

Please allow us to exchange the item. We apologize for the inconvenience but please follow the below steps.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I live in Japan.
I got your boots through American transfer company today.
I checked the item and two boots are both left side.
I'll send you a picture and please check it.
Please accept return or pay me back($98.15) because I can't use it.
Please make sure that you reply me, otherwise I'll talk to paypal directly.

I'll send you the item back and let me know your address.

修正後
Hello.
I live in Japan.
I got your boots through an American forwarding company today.
I checked and found both boots were for the left foot.
I am sending you a picture so please check it.
I can't use these so please either replace them or pay me back($98.15).
Please make sure that you give me a reply, or otherwise I'll talk to paypal directly.

I am sending the boots back so let me know your address.

元の翻訳
Does that mean you have not been able to receive money because recipient name under the account does not match?

Sorry about that.
I will go to the bank tomorrow and talk to the person in charge.
Then I will let you know the result again.

修正後
Does that mean you have not been able to receive the money because the recipient name under the account does not match with yours?

We apologize for that.
I will go to the bank tomorrow and talk to the person in charge.
Then I will let you know the result of our conversation again.

元の翻訳
I will visit your factory, but I told you that I am going to visit in the stage when you start manufacturing.
As for sending material to us this time, we need the material right away to develop and produce the additive in a haste. So, please send the material via air, if possible.

修正後
I will visit your factory, but I told you that I am going to visit at the stage when you start manufacturing.
As for sending material to us this time, we need it right away to develop and produce the additive in a haste. So, please send the material via Air, if possible.