JeongJoon Kim (jeongjoon) — 付けたレビュー

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How are you doing?
I understand you are not able to ship this item to Japan.
But to just trash the item seems really wasteful.
I'm thinking of sending back to the manufacture.
In the past, I have experience in sending items back to the manufacture.
Could you please explain why you are not able to send the item back to the seller?

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Hello?
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I understand you are not able to ship this item to Japan.
But to just trash the item seems really wasteful.
I want to send back the item to the manufacturer.
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Until now, I have experienced of returning items to the seller several times.
Could you please explain why the returning of the product to the seller is not possible?

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How do you do? I saw your display on the eBay list, and I did contact you. Since I'm looking for the XX, is it possible to get it? I'm waiting for your reply, thank you.

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How do you do? I saw you are selling "oo" on e-bay, so I am contacting you now. ↵
I'm looking for "xx." is it possible to get it? I will wait for your reply.

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The Kyoto JC culture Boy Scouts was founded in the year 1979, with the intention as follows, "We try to extend the circle of the children's culture, and to have the children watch our hometown, Kyoto,in their way of seeing through the fresh and sensitive mind, by which we would like to nourish their honest and stable love of the hometown in order to create and develop the sound children's culture based on the area, with the hope of their supporting this 21st century on their own.↵
I held the children culture classrooms five times, and had them cherish love of our home area, love of the neighborhood , and a sense of public morality last year.

In the term of last year, we got the applications from 106 students and nine outstanding young men were among them all. ↵
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The Kyoto JC culture Boy Scouts was founded in the year 1979, with the following purpose, "We try to extend the circle of the children's culture, and to have the children watch our hometown, Kyoto,in their way of seeing through the fresh and sensitive mind, by which we would like to nourish their honest and stable love of the hometown in order to create and develop the sound children's culture based on the area, with the hope of their supporting this 21st century on their own." Last year, we held the children culture classrooms five times and let them have cherish love for our home area and neighborhood, and public morality.

Also at last year, we got the applications from 106 students and nine outstanding youngsters came out from them.

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#habit
Send me the invoice of V steel
Can i make a payment on........in relation to the cutoff date of the credit
Thank you for telling me about product of head.

#International
The customer got the flag but because i do not know the whereabouts of the sign so i have proposed to send back again. There are many signs that do not match with the feature of the searched sign. I am sorry but I have suspected the authenticity. I think i will return all the goods if you delivery to us the same things next time

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#habit
Send me the invoice of V steel
Can i make a payment on [date] in relation to the cutoff date of my credit?
Thank you for telling me about the production of Head.

#International
The customer got the flag but because i do not know the whereabouts of the sign so i have been proposing to send it back again. There are many signs that do not match with the feature of the searched sign. I am sorry but I have suspected the authenticity. I think I will return all the goods if you delivery to us the same things next time

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The person who can understand Japanese.
(Please translate Japanese site and copy it. ↵
From the reason above, we are requesting the person who can understand Japanese.)

The person who has the knowledge of programming of website.
(We are requesting the person who has a experience to construct the website.)

If you have a interest, please contact us. At that time, we would like to conduct brief interview.
We will also explain the amount of reward at that time.
We will explain the information about the shop who try to be made copy.

#note#
Please abstain to apply if you do not have enough knowledge of website.↵
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Looking forward to your contact.↵
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The person who can understand Japanese.
(Please translate Japanese site and send us the copy. For the reason above, we want the person who can understand Japanese.)

The person who has the knowledge of programming of website.
(We want the person who has a experience of website making.)

If you are interested, please contact us. At that time, we want to conduct a brief interview.
We will also explain the amount of reward at that time.
We will explain the information about the internet shopping mall that we want to make a copy of.

#note#
Please do not apply if you do not have enough web knowledge.

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What is the minimum number of participants for the group programs?

Basically at least 29 (21 for a canoe program for elementary/Jr. high students). Please consult us if under 20.

Do we need to submit a participants list in advance?

Depending on the program, we will request it. We will send you a form upon reservation. Please fill out the information and send it back to us.

The program will be carried on unless there is a strong wind. If you don't wish to have the program in rain or if we decide to cancel outside activities due to an inclement weather, all the programs will be moved inside. We will charge 50% as a cancellation fee if you cancel due to rain.

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What is the minimum number of participants for the group programs?

Basically at least 29 (21 for a canoe program for elementary/Jr. high students). Please consult us if under 20.

Do we need to submit a participants list in advance?

Depending on the program, we will request it. We will send you a form upon reservation. Please fill out the information and send it back to us.

The program will be carried on unless there is a strong wind. If you don't wish to have the program in rain or if we decide to cancel outside activities due to an inclement weather, all the programs will be moved inside. The cancellation fee will be 50% when you cancel it due to rain.

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In case of inclement weather, could you transfer the students to other programs?

We can reassign them to other programs.

Could it be other than the program you originally signed up for which moved inside due to the weather?

Any program other than Hoto-making which requires preparation.
We will charge the fee for the program the student participates in.

In inclement weather, do you have a variety of choices to choose from?

One outdoor activity for one inside activity.

What shall we do with the bags?

We suggest that you leave all your belongings on the bus if not needed for the program.↵

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In case of inclement weather, could you transfer the students to other programs?

We can reassign them to other programs.

Could it be other than the program you originally signed up for which moved inside due to the weather?

Any program other than Hoto-making which requires preparation.
We will charge the fee for the program the student participates in.

In inclement weather, do you have a variety of choices?

Please choose one outdoor activity for one inside activity.

What shall we do with carrying baggage?

We suggest that you leave all your belongings on the bus except needed for the program.

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How would you respond to the injury?

The staff in charge will do a first aid treatment. If additional treatment is called for, we will contact hospitals. However, the participating group should provide the transportation to the hospital.

How many adults need to accompany the group?

We recommend more than one for the program consisting of high school students or under.
Participating in the program or only supervising is up to you.

How about the fees for the adults?

As for the group of kids, one adult per 29 kids is free of charge.
However, if you choose the fishing program, you would have to pay a fishing fee.

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How would you respond to the injury?

The staff in charge will do a first aid treatment. If additional treatment is called for, we will contact hospitals. However, the participating group should provide the transportation to the hospital.

How many adults need to accompany the group?

We recommend more than one for the program consisting of high school students or under.
Participating in the program or only supervising is up to you.

How about the fees for the adults?

As for the group of kids, one adult per twenty nine kids is free of charge.
However, if you choose the fishing program, you would have to pay a fishing fee.