翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2013/10/30 19:06:50

rollingchopsticks
rollingchopsticks 52 翻訳量をこなし、且つスピードと正確性をつけて行きたいと思います。
日本語

団体プログラムの最小催行人数は何名からですか?

基本として29名以上(小/中学生のカヌーは21名)となります。20名未満の場合はご相談下さい

事前に参加者名簿は必要ですか?

プログラムによっては必要です。予約時に当社のフォーマットを
送りますので、必要事項をご記入の上、返信を御願い致します

強風時でなければ実施可能です。雨での実施を希望されない場合やできないと判断した場合は
全行程(室内)プログラムにお振替いただきます。
雨天時のキャンセルは、キャンセル料として50%ちょうだい致します。

英語

What is the minimum number of participants for the group programs?

Basically at least 29 (21 for a canoe program for elementary/Jr. high students). Please consult us if under 20.

Do we need to submit a participants list in advance?

Depending on the program, we will request it. We will send you a form upon reservation. Please fill out the information and send it back to us.

The program will be carried on unless there is a strong wind. If you don't wish to have the program in rain or if we decide to cancel outside activities due to an inclement weather, all the programs will be moved inside. We will charge 50% as a cancellation fee if you cancel due to rain.

レビュー ( 1 )

jeongjoon 52 안녕하세요 저는 김정준입니다. 생명과학을 전공했고, 웹디자인, 웹프...
jeongjoonはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/30 22:56:35

元の翻訳
What is the minimum number of participants for the group programs?

Basically at least 29 (21 for a canoe program for elementary/Jr. high students). Please consult us if under 20.

Do we need to submit a participants list in advance?

Depending on the program, we will request it. We will send you a form upon reservation. Please fill out the information and send it back to us.

The program will be carried on unless there is a strong wind. If you don't wish to have the program in rain or if we decide to cancel outside activities due to an inclement weather, all the programs will be moved inside. We will charge 50% as a cancellation fee if you cancel due to rain.

修正後
What is the minimum number of participants for the group programs?

Basically at least 29 (21 for a canoe program for elementary/Jr. high students). Please consult us if under 20.

Do we need to submit a participants list in advance?

Depending on the program, we will request it. We will send you a form upon reservation. Please fill out the information and send it back to us.

The program will be carried on unless there is a strong wind. If you don't wish to have the program in rain or if we decide to cancel outside activities due to an inclement weather, all the programs will be moved inside. The cancellation fee will be 50% when you cancel it due to rain.

Great!

rollingchopsticks rollingchopsticks 2013/10/31 10:23:21

Thank you for the review. Your last sentence sounds more natural. It was really helpful!

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