Daryl Lim (gaieios) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
- Documents 1, 2, 3 and 9: I've prepared drafts of these for notarisation. Could you check these for any errors?
- In order to obtain A's signature beforehand, I've removed them.
- Document 4: This document is available on Company B's website. As such, does it still require notarisation?
- Documents 5 and 7: I was unable to locate the originals for these documents on our end.
As discussed, we're unable to get Lawyer C's signature as he's away from work. Would it be possible to pass this work on to another lawyer?

修正後
・For the documents 1, 2, 3, and 9 among those you requested, I have provided the preliminary drafts to be notarized, and so would you review them for any errors?
・I am going to delete it for obtaining the signature of A san in advance.
・The document 4 is posted in the website of B company. Does it also require to be notarized?
・For the documents 5 and 7, I searched in the head office, but I have not been able to find out the original of those documents.
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As I previously informed to you, I cannot get the signature of the attorney C since he has been on leave, but may I request another lawyer to create them?↵

元の翻訳
ph35308

▼Was also used as a pet name by gold medallist Ryoko Tani.
Quote: "Just call me Yawara-chan." (when asked by a reporter if it was alright not to address her by her real name)

Bamboo Blade [Subject: Kendo]

修正後
ph35308

▼Was also used as a nickname by gold medallist Ryoko Tani.
Quote: "Just call me Yawara-chan." (when asked by a reporter if it was alright not being addressed by her real name)

Bamboo Blade [Subject: Kendo]