Daryl Lim (gaieios) — 付けたレビュー

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I am considering if we will order an プリオーダーproduct.
I would like to order it first and decide how to settle the charge after I receive the product.
Would that be possible?
I would like to pay with credit card.

I am looking forward to your reply.

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We are considering a pre-order.
We'd like to place the order beforehand and settle payment after receiving the product.
Would this be possible?
We'd like to pay via credit card.

Looking forward to your reply.

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Sorry if my last correspondence was unclear.
What I wanted to write is as follows:
- I have one new and tagged product.
- I assume that this will be soon out of stock as it's some kind of hard-to-find product. You may consider to place an order as soon as possible, not to miss it.

Subject: about delivery status of FBA product.
Regarding the FBA product for Amazon from me, there is still a product that hasn't been received. It is the following. I would appreciate for your immediate investigation on its delivery status. Thank you.

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Sorry if my last correspondence was unclear.
What I wanted to communicate is as follows:
- I have one new and tagged product.
- As this is a hard-to-find product, stocks are expected to run out soon. Please consider placing an order as soon as possible.

Subject: Delivery status of FBA product
Regarding the FBA product for Amazon from me, there is still a product that hasn't been received. It is as follows. I would appreciate your immediate investigation into its delivery status. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hatsune Miku: The VOCALOID Pioneer!

What is Hatsune Miku?

Hatsune Miku is a desktop music (DTM) program, which utilizes speech synthesis for vocal tracks, and a character developed by Crypton Future Media. ... The vocal source that was introduced to the market for the first time on August 31, 2007, is the first software designed for the Japanese language using the "VOCALOID 2" engine. which allows to synthesize more natural vocal tracks compared to the previous VOCALOD lineups.

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Hatsune Miku: The VOCALOID Pioneer!

What is Hatsune Miku?

Hatsune Miku is both a desktop music (DTM) program, which utilizes speech synthesis for vocal tracks, and a character developed by Crypton Future Media. ... The vocal source that was introduced to the market for the first time on August 31, 2007, is the first software designed for the Japanese language using the "VOCALOID 2" engine. which allows for the synthesis of more natural vocal tracks compared to the previous VOCALOID lineups.

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ph35306

▼ What is haiku?
A haiku, there is a rule refers consist of 17 ”on” (17 hiraganas) in three phrases of 5, 7 and 5 "on" respectively. It is unique japanese poetry with a fixed form. It must contain a "kigo" to imply the season. The term "haiku" is abbreviated "Haikainoku". It was named "Haiku" for "Haikainoku".

▼Originally, it is a game called "Utakumi 575".

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ph35306

▼ What is haiku?
A haiku is a poem formed from 17 ”on” (17 hiragana syllables) in three phrases of 5, 7 and 5 "on" respectively. It is a form of fixed form poetry unique to Japan. It must contain a "kigo" - a word implying a particular season. Originally "haikainoku"; later shortened to "haiku".

▼Originally, it is a game called "Utakumi 575".

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Normal type

A normal rectangular type as given above, can be applied to the favored area, such as lower back or stomach.

Socks type

Your feet tend to be cold even when you wear socks, don't they? Maybe the pocket warmer manufacturers understand that feeling...socks type are also general.
It looks like this when applied.

Socks type (for greedy people)

There are types which covers wider area.
It looks like this when applied.

Toe type

These are what I wanted...! My toes are freezing!
Warm them pinpoint.

It looks like this when applied.

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Normal type

A normal rectangular type as given above, can be applied to the desired area, such as lower back or stomach.

Socks type

Your feet tend to be cold even when you wear socks, don't they? Maybe the pocket warmer manufacturers understand that feeling...socks type are also general.
It looks like this when applied.

Socks type (for greedy people)

There are types which cover a wider area.
It looks like this when applied.

Toe type

These are what I wanted...! My toes are freezing!
Warm them pinpoint.

It looks like this when applied.

元の翻訳
In Kyoto, green tea is of course drunken, but many also regularly enjoy maccha (powdered green tea), freely drink tea at home, and prepare tea when customers pay a visit.

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In Kyoto, green tea is of course drunk, but many also regularly enjoy maccha (powdered green tea), freely drink tea at home, and prepare tea when customers pay a visit.