Brett Poling (firefox_003) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
This mail is about the matter of my account being suspended.

I have already submitted my plans for improvement. If there is anything I'm missing please let me know, any advice would be much appreciated.

I have removed all of the products that I was displaying.

From now on, I will carefully check each item and then put them up one at a time.

This way I will be sure to not display prohibit items and have cancelled orders, or delays in shipping.

I will also make sure of whether I can ship items quickly or not beforehand.

I hope you will forgive me for the mistake I made this time and lift the suspension on my account.

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This mail is about the matter of my account being suspended.

I have already submitted my plans for improvement. If there is anything I'm missing please let me know. Any advice would be much appreciated.

I have removed all of the products that I was putting up for sale.

From now on, I will carefully check each item and then put them up for sale.

This way I will be sure to not display prohibited items, have cancelled orders, or delays in shipping.

I will also make sure of whether I can ship the items quickly or not beforehand.

I hope you will forgive me for the mistakes I made this time and lift the suspension on my account.

元の翻訳
As you can confirm in the photo there is a split on the surface of the right side of the box
Please check the photo properly. We desire only bidders that truly understand that the quality of the product has deteriorated over the years.
In relation to conditions we cannot accept returned goods.

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As you can see (confirm) from the photo, there is a crack on the surface of the right side of the box
Please check the photo thoroughly, as we only welcome the bids from those who understand the deterioration caused by the aging.
We will not accept the request for the returns on the grounds of item condition,

元の翻訳
As you can confirm in the photo there is a split on the surface of the right side of the box
Please check the photo properly. We desire only bidders that truly understand that the quality of the product has deteriorated over the years.
In relation to conditions we cannot accept returned goods.

修正後
As you can confirm in the photo, there is a crack on the surface of the right side of the box
Please check the photo carefully. We ask bidders to understand that the product has deteriorated over the years before placing a bid.
We cannot accept returns for the condition of the item .

元の翻訳
Good afternoon.

Thank you for the free delivery charge. Payment is complete.
The product delivery address is as follows.

I am very thankful for the wonderful correspondence we have had.

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Hello,

Thank you for providing me a free delivery. I already completed the payment.
I am pleased if you could send the item to the following address.

Thank you for your wonderful handling this time.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending the late product and the replacement for the defective product.

However, the Serenity pillow cases, that previous had a different item mistakenly sent, were not included.
The number of pillow cases are 2. Please send them urgently.

Also, in regards to the cost of returning the defective.
There will be reimbursement for the shipping, correct?

In that case, can I have the reimbursement taken out of this month's orders?

Contact me if there is a shipping company that you would prefer me to use.

Best regards

修正後
Thank you for sending the late product and the replacement for the defective product.

However, the Serenity pillow cases that was mistaken with a different item, were not included.
The number of pillow cases are 2. Please send them as soon as possible.

Also, with regards to the cost of returning the defective product,
you will be shouldering for the return cost, correct?

In that case, can I have it taken off from this month's order price?

Please contact me if there is a shipping company that you would prefer me to use.

Best regards