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Arrival Scheduled date is from January 2nd.

The product was sent on November 28th.
The Economy Shipping that you choose takes around 3 to 5 weeks to arrive.
Especially on Christmas and New Year, since the distribution of goods is very confusing all over the world, it might be late.
Please re-check since there is 2 points described in product explanation.

That's why the arrival schedule date is becoming February 2nd.

Since the arrival goods will be separated, I think I will tell you about it.

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The estimated delivered date is after January 2nd.

The product was sent on November 28th.
The Economy Shipping that you chose takes around 3 to 5 weeks to arrive.
Especially on Christmas and New Year, since the distribution [word choice] of goods is very confusing [word choice] all over the world, it might be late [unnatural].
Please re-check since there is [s-v agreement] 2 points described [awkward] in the product description.

That's why the arrival schedule date [awkward] is becoming February 2nd [mistranslation].

Since the arrival goods will be separated [unclear], I think I will tell you about it [unclear].

元の翻訳
We want to purchase this item around 20 to 30 pieces every month from you.↵
Could you give us any discount?
For 20 pieces : $200/item
For 30 pieces : $190/item

Can you ensure the stock?
We want to purchase directly from you, instead of through eBay.

We want to do business with you.
Could you please consider about it?

Please inform us your paypal e-mail address.
We are waiting for your good response.

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We want [would like] to purchase from you about 20 to 30 of this item every month.↵
[Would it be possible for you to give us a discount?] Could you give us a discount?
For 20 pieces: $200/piece
For 30 pieces : $190/piece

Can you guarantee that you will have sufficient stock available?
We [would like] want to purchase directly from you instead of through eBay.

We very much want to do business with you.
Could you please give it your consideration?

Please [provide us with] inform us of your PayPal e-mail address.
We are looking forward to receiving an affirmative response from you.

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It's very impressive picture.
The keeper knees all the way together, the captain of opponent lost awareness originally run over to respiratory tract faster then anyone, Jaba Kankava saving his team is very amazing play.
Not as an sport player, please take a look at Jaba Kankava takes wonderful decision and action as a person.
It's a fair play of the legend Di Canio.
In that year, he was winning the FIFA Fair Play Award for this fair play.
In spite of absolute chance, he sympathize with the opponent player, please take a look at his wonderful play.

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It's a very impressive video.
The keeper knees all the way together [?], the captain of opponent lost awareness [?] originally run over to respiratory tract faster then anyone, Jaba Kankava saving his team is very amazing play.
Not as an sport player, please take a look at Jaba Kankava takes wonderful decision and action as a person.
It's a fair play of the legend Di Canio.
In that year, he was winning the FIFA Fair Play Award for this fair play.
In spite of absolute chance, he sympathize with the opponent player, please take a look at his wonderful play.

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I'm here in 5 years, we have stock of Germany razor from all over Japan.
But, in the next few years there will be difficult to sell the old razor, it will be scarcity value.

All razors that we sell is original. Iwasaki's razor and also various type of razor.
If you worried about the product, I recommend you to cancel.
We will display the product in the near future, it's better for you to wait.

Because there's no rust murks on the razor edge, I think there will be no problem when you use it.
Because I send the image, please make it as reference.

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I'm here in 5 years, we have stock of Germany razor from all over Japan.
But, in the next few years there will be difficult to buy the old razor, it will be scarcity value.

All razors that we sell are original. Iwasaki's razor and also various type of razor.
If you worried about the product, I recommend you to cancel.
We will display the product in the near future, it's better for you to wait.

Because there's no rust marks on the razor edge, I think there will be no problem when you use it.
Because I send the image, please make it as reference.

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I'm interested with the brand but I can't order the larger size. I ordered last time but this time order is waiting for verification.
Because the exchange and the purchase price is raised, I want to discuss about the price list condition.
The reason is some stores sales in bargain priced, because we can't sell with lower price this become brand with low profit.
This brand was much sold this year, I want to order again this time. The other distributor sells this product in cheap price, I consider to purchase with the same price.

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I'm interested in the brand, but I can't order a larger size. I ordered it last time, but this time order [wrong subject] is waiting for verification [unclear].
Because of the exchange rate the purchase price has gone up, and I want to discuss the price list condition [unclear].
The reason is some stores sell for bargain prices, because we can't sell with lower price [mistranslation] this becomes a brand with low profit [awkward].
This brand was sold well this year, so I want to order it again next time. Another distributor sells this product for a cheap price, so I consider purchasing it if it's the same price.

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1. In the Geisha world, the Super Robot Geisha sticker was appeared! It's an ordinary playful drama that practice two good friends with dancing, playing samisen and song/
2. It's a drawing sticker about a daily life cat and naughty cat that always commanded. The truth is they are two cute cats which get along well.
3. Is there anybody like Dojikko-chan around you, who falling down a lot, eating a lot and a little loose?
This sticker makes you laugh spontaneously .
4. The slapstick tomboy 3 little girls sticker is also appeared! Today also resound with the noisy voice!

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1. In the geisha world, the Super Robot Geisha sticker was appeared [why passive?]! It's an ordinary playful drama [?] that practice [s-v agreement] two good friends with dancing, playing samisen and song/
2. It's a drawing sticker about a daily life cat and naughty cat that always commanded [?]. The truth is they are two cute cats which get along well [different from the original].
3. Is there anybody who likes Dojikko-chan [?] around you, who [verb missing] falling down a lot, eating a lot and a little loose [usage]?
This sticker makes you laugh spontaneously .
4. The slapstick three tomboys sticker is also appeared [passive?]! Today [wrong subject] also resound with the noisy voice [?]!

元の翻訳
I have 2 questions.
1. Can we change the dafault setting?
For example, if we create a new table, the condition of XWZ item is checked by the initial status.
2. Is there any relation between the content of EXEL file inport with the display speed of page?

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I have 2 questions.
1. Can we change the default setting?
For example, if we create a new table, leave the condition of XWZ items checked at the initial status.
2. Is there any relation between the content of EXEL file imported with the display speed of the page?

元の翻訳
I'm sorry to make you worry.
The officer who speak English is not here, first we send e-mail.
Is the product image of pick the different bass that you sent?

Our head office is in different place with the warehouse.
It might be mistake to pack the goods.

I'm sorry for troubling you, but could you please send me the picture of bass that you delivere?
Because I want to check the picture of pick up and neck parts.

We are deeply sorry for troubling you. Thank you very much for your cooperation.

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I'm sorry for worrying you.
The officer [usage] who speak [s-v agreement] English is not here, [comma splice] first we send e-mail.
Is the product image of pick the different bass that you sent [?]?

Our head office is in different place with the warehouse [?].
It might be [article] mistake to pack the godos [awkward].

I'm sorry for troubling you, but could you please send me the picture of bass that you delivere [spelling]?
Because I want to check the picture of pick up [usage] and neck parts.

We are deeply sorry for troubling you. Thank you very much for your cooperation.

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Thank you for using my shop and make a payment immediately.
Unfortunately the product was sold to other shop, and we are sorry for that.
In order not to troubling you, we have repaid the money from paypal just now.
Because we apply the request to cancel this transaction, it will be helpful to receive approval notification from eBay.
We are really sorry for cannot help you, when you already using my shop.
If you looking for another goods, please tell us.
Thank you very much

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Thank you for using my shop and making a payment immediately.
Unfortunately the product was sold at another shop, and we are sorry for that.
In order not to trouble you, we have refunded the money from PayPal just now.
Because we apply [wrong verb] the request to cancel this transaction, it will be helpful to receive approval notification from eBay [mistranslation].
We are really sorry for [for + gerund] cannot help you, when you already using [tense confusion] my shop [mistranslation].
If you [verb missing] looking for another [singular] goods [plural], please tell us.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
20 December (Wednesday) Our president and Mtg case.
We are really sorry but can we reschedule the time?
If it's possible it's very helpful if it can be set on 10:30 - 11:00
The place information will follow.

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This is regarding the meeting with our president on 20 December (Thursday).
We are really sorry but can we reschedule the time?
It would be very helpful if the meeting could be set on 10:30 - 11:00 if possible.
The place is as follows, ↵
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元の翻訳
承認の返信がありがとうございます。
郵便番号がそれを必要とする場合には、日本の住所を送信することができますか？

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返品の承認していただきありがとうございます。
地元の郵便局が必要とするかもしれないので、日本の住所も送っていただけますか？

元の翻訳
承認の返信がありがとうございます。
郵便番号がそれを必要とする場合には、日本の住所を送信することができますか？

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返品の証人がありがとうございます。
郵便局が必要とする場合には、日本の住所を送信していただけますか？

元の翻訳
I bought a product in netshop. When they would send the product, it seems that the delivery officer called me to tell the delivery schedule.
Which telephone number that I can contact?
Please tell me the telephone number of the delivery officer.
If you don't give me the telephone number, please tell me how can I get my product sent.
Thank you very much

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I bought a product in [wrong participle] [article missing] netshop [usage]. When they [wrong subject] would [tense confusion] send the product, it seems that the delivery officer called [tense confusion] me to tell the delivery schedule.
Which telephone number I can contact?
Please tell me the telephone number of the delivery officer [usage].
If you don't give me the telephone number, please tell me how can I get my product delivered.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
The dress is chiffon material so soft, and finished up by the elegant pearl and lace. The empire dress characteristic with a big ribbon on the back, full of elegance princess! And also from "Sailormoon", a little soft make up and competed with the sparkling new moon on the forehead, very beautiful.
Of course it also packed with the unique element of "Pullip"! The pupils is moved left and right, wink and make various facial expression, bring the body move to the wide stage, it's possible to reproduce the pose during various play.

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The dress is made from soft chiffon and decorated with elegant pearls and lace. The big ribbon on the back is characteristic for empire dresses - doesn't she look like an elegant princess? Makeup (slightly softer from the Sailormoon version) and a sparkling crescent moon for the forehead make it a really lovely set.
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Of course, all elements characteristic for the Pullip dolls are here! The doll's pupils can be moved left and right, she can wink and make various facial expressions. Thanks to her fully poseable body, you can recreate many scenes with famous poses!

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Until the invoice compensation of delivery trouble is described, you cannot entry the amount of money too cheap.
Stated as a gift, it is USD 90, and sent. Are you fine with this?

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Until the invoice compensation of delivery trouble is described, you cannot entry the amount of money too cheap.
Stated as a gift, it is USD 90, and sent. Are you fine with this?