Nate (cuavsfan) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I am very interested in this item.↵
Can I ask a question?↵
It is about the knob on the part by the tip of the pen.↵
Is the backslide of this tip flat?↵
Or, does it have two vertical lines carved into it?↵
I look forward to your response.↵
Thank you very much.

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I am very interested in this item. I would like to ask you about the knob on the part by the tip of the pen. Is the backside of this tip flat or does it have two vertical lines carved into it? I look forward to your response. Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I am very interested in this item.
Can I ask a question?
It is about the knob on the part by the tip of the pen.
Is the backslide of this tip flat?
Or, does it have two vertical lines carved into it?
I look forward to your response.
Thank you very much.

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I am very interested in this item.
Can I ask a question?
It is about the knob on the part by the tip of the pen.
Is the backslide of this tip flat?
Or does it have two vertical lines carved into it?
I look forward to your response.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Once the item arrives here I will resend it to you. If you would like to cancel the order I will refund your money.

The item you purchased is very rare even in Japan, so I really hope we are able to get it to you so you can add it to your collection.

Please let me know which option you prefer.

Since you have such a positive record as a buyer, I'm sure you understand the situation. I greatly appreciate your understanding.

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Once the item arrives here I will resend it to you. If you would like to cancel the order I will refund your money.

The item you purchased is very rare even in Japan, so I really hope we are able to get it to you so you can add it to your collection.

Please let me know which option you prefer.

Since you have such a positive record as buyer, I'm sure you understand the situation. I greatly appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
I have some very unfortunate news to give you.
The product you purchased on July 24th arrived at your local post office on August 1st, but it reached the time limit for being held and on August 7th it was sent back to me. Please reference the site below.

In order to reship this item to you the shipping costs will need to be paid again.
Payment can be made via PayPal, so I will send you an invoice. The shipping fee is $25.

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I have some very unfortunate news to give you.
The product you purchased on July 24th arrived at your local post office on August 1st, but it reached the time limit for being held and on August 7th it was sent back to me. Please refer to the site mentioned below.

In order to reship this item to you, the shipping costs will need to be paid again.
Payment can be made via PayPal, so I will send you an invoice. The shipping fee is $25.

元の翻訳
Thank you always for all you do.
I really like the items I've gotten from you.

My customers also really like them.
I am very appreciative.

I am looking into making more large orders from you in the future.


I also have one question. If you see me as a valued customer, is there any way you could offer me some discount coupons?

I have ordered a lot from you so far, and I plan to do so again.
I appreciate your consideration.

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Thank you always for all you do.
I really like the items I've gotten from you.

My customers also really like them.
I am very appreciative.

I am looking into making larger orders from you in the future.


I also have one question. If you see me as a valued customer, is there any way you could offer me some discount coupons?

I have ordered a lot from you so far, and I plan to do so again.
I appreciate your consideration.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
Can a Kate Spade shopping bag be included?
Thank you.

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Thank you for contacting me.
Could you include the Kate Spade shopping bag?
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Shipment for items that are {{{fulfilled by Amazon.co.jp}}} are completely handled by {{{Amazon.co.jp}}}. Therefore, regarding your question, we are unable to provide an answer about international shipping. We are sorry for the inconvenience, but please direct your question directly to {{{Amazon.co.jp}}}.

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Shipment for items fulfilled by Amazon.co.jp are completely handled by Amazon.co.jp. Therefore, regarding your question, we are unable to provide an answer about international shipping. We are sorry for the inconvenience, but please address your question directly to Amazon.co.jp.

元の翻訳
Furthermore, while it is just my own opinion, I think that if this time we accept the introduction of A Company from the main office and accept their suggestions, through future meetings the desires of us users would be met sincerely, and this could lead to positive evaluations.
On the other hand, B Company does not have the same aggressive that A Company does, and that could lead to negative evaluations. I think that frankly stating that that this decision is not based on product evaluations but rather on evaluations of attitude is another possible path.

I would very much like to hear your thoughts on the ideas presented above.

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Furthermore, while it is just my own opinion, I think that if this time we accept the introduction of A Company from the main office and accept their suggestions, through future meetings the desires of us users would be met sincerely, and this could lead to positive evaluations.
On the other hand, B Company does not have the same aggressiveness that A Company does, and that could lead to negative evaluations. I think that frankly stating that this decision is not based on product evaluations but rather on evaluations of attitude is another possible path.

I would very much like to hear your thoughts on the ideas presented above.

元の翻訳
I am okay with things like email or chat, but I don't have confidence in my speaking ability, and a long time ago I received a call with some questions and was stuck as I couldn't respond.
Because of that, in regard to this question I would like to handle it over email, and while I am grateful that I have been treated kindly, the fact remains that the issue of payment is still not resolved.
I have tried contacting the other party numerous times, but I am still unable to get a hold of them.
Therefore, my response is that the problem is still unsolved.

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I am okay with things like email or chat, but I don't have confidence in my speaking ability, and a long time ago I received a call with some questions and was stuck as I couldn't respond.
Because of that, in regard to this question I would like to handle it over email, and while I am grateful that I have been treated kindly, the fact remains that the issue of payment is still not resolved.
I have tried contacting the other party numerous times, but I am still unable to get hold of them.
Therefore, my response is that the problem is still unsolved.

元の翻訳
The other day the AC adapter arrived.
There doesn't appear to be any problem with it.

So that I can choose between A and B could you please tell me the following?
* The price of each
Because the performance is the same, I'd like to go with the cheaper one.

* The time it would take to get each
I'd like to avoid a situation where I am waiting for the AC adapter.
I'm hoping that it can be shipped promptly after the order.

I look forward to your reply.

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The AC adapter arrived the other day.
There doesn't appear to be any problem with it.

Could you please tell me the following so that I can choose between A and B?
* The price of each
If their performance is the same then I'd like to go with the cheaper one.

* The time it would take to get each
I'd like to avoid a situation where I am waiting for the AC adapter.
I'm hoping that it can be shipped promptly after the order.

I look forward to your reply.