Haru Thomson (cielo_translation) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I can't go to Singapore owing to my illness.
I leave it to you the procedures to deleate me from the list of ABC LTD's Director.

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I can't go to Singapore due to illness.
I leave it to you the procedure to delete me from the list of ABC LTD's Director.

元の翻訳
I would like to sell this item from the range of JPY3500 to JPY4000.

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I would like to sell this item at the price range from JPY 3500 to JPY 4000.

元の翻訳
ありがとうございます。米国中央標準時の午前中におしらせします。

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ありがとうございます。米国中部標準時の午前中におしらせします。

元の翻訳
Please select a way for shipping from below.
EMS: 3,250 JPY (takes 3days)
International e packet:2,255JPY (takes 7 days)
SAL: 1,590JPY (takes about 2 weeks)

I will tell you the shipping date after you told me your decision .
Thank you very much.

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Please select a shipping method from below.
EMS: 3,250 JPY (takes 3 days)
International e packet:2,255 JPY (takes 7 days)
SAL: 1,590 JPY (takes about 2 weeks)

I will tell you the shipping date after you inform me your decision .
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
As for the shipping, please choose one from below.

- EMS : ¥3,250 (3 days to be delivered)
- Internationl e-packet : ¥2,255 (7 days to be delivered)
- SAL : ¥1,590 (approximately 2 weeks to be delivered)

After I hear your choice I will write again with the estimated delivery date.

Sincerely,

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As for the shipping, please choose one from below.

- EMS : ¥3,250 (3 days to be delivered)
- Internationl e-packet : ¥2,255 (7 days to be delivered)
- SAL : ¥1,590 (approximately 2 weeks to be delivered)

After you inform me your choice, I will let you know the estimated delivery date.

Sincerely,

元の翻訳
"Winter diary～A7 Classical～" Art Work
.
We show Winter Album "Winter diary～A7 Classical～" that is going to be released on December 23d.

You can make a reservation here.
Team Ayu official shop
(Send in Japan) *For personal computer and smart phone: http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/AOG.html
(Send abroad) *Only for personal computer: http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/TAK.html

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"Winter diary～A7 Classical～" Art Work is published!!

Winter Album "Winter diary～A7 Classical～" that is going to be released on December 23 ed is now open to public.

You can make a reservation here.
Team Ayu official shop
(Domestic shipping) *For personal computer and smart phone: http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/AOG.html
(International shipping) *Only for personal computer: http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/TAK.html

元の翻訳
The remittance was made today. Please confirm the details with the attached documents. As there was not enough time, the remittance was made using my personal details. Regarding EMS, please could you send over the documents needed for importation.

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The remittance was made today. Please confirm the details in the attached documents. As there was not enough time, the remittance was made using my personal details. Please send the import documents by EMS.

元の翻訳
I made a remittance today. Please confirm it in the attached document.
I did it by personal name because I didn't have time.
Please send me the document related import by EMS.

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I made a remittance today. Please confirm it in the attached document.
I sent the money from a personal account, because I didn't have time.
Please send me the import documents by EMS.

元の翻訳
I sent the money today. Would you check it with attached document?
As I did not have time, I sent the money by my name.
Would you send a document about import by EMS?

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I sent the money today. Would you check it with the attached document?
As I did not have time, I sent the money under my name.
Would you send the import documents by EMS?

元の翻訳
Hello.

I paid extra money already through Paypal.

November 16th The first payment

ID (★★)
€101.95

partly refund €32
Total （ €101.95 - €32＝ €69.95 ）

€69.95 EUR

November 16th The second payment
ID (★★)
Total €101.95

All the payment
€69.95 + €101.95=€171.9

So I paid total €171.9.

Can you check?

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Hello.

I paid extra money already through Paypal.

November 16th The first payment

ID (★★)
€101.95

partly refund €32
Total (€101.95 - €32＝ €69.95)

€69.95

November 16th The second payment
ID (★★)
Total €101.95

Total payment
€69.95 + €101.95=€171.9

So I paid total of €171.9.

Can you check?

元の翻訳
Hello.

I already overpaid via PayPal.

November 16th 1st payment

ID(★★)

€101.95

Partial refund
€32

Total ( €101.95 - €32＝ €69.95 )

€69.95 EUR


November 16th 2nd payment

ID(★★)

Total
€101.95


Total paid amount

€69.95 + €101.95=€171.9



That means, I paid total of €171.9.

Will you kindly check it?

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Hello.

I already overpaid via PayPal.

November 16th 1st payment

ID(★★)

€101.95

Partial refund
€32

Total ( €101.95 - €32＝ €69.95 )

€69.95


November 16th 2nd payment

ID(★★)

Total
€101.95


Total paid amount

€69.95 + €101.95=€171.9



That means, I paid total of €171.9.

Will you kindly check it?

元の翻訳
Hello.

I have already paid for extra amount in PAYPAL.

16th Nov　First payment

ID(★★)

€101.95

Part of refund
€32

Total（ €101.95 - €32＝ €69.95 ）

€69.95 EUR


16th Nov　Second payment

ID(★★)

Total
€101.95


Total payment

€69.95 + €101.95=€171.9



Therefore I have paid €171.9 in total.

Could you please confirm?

修正後
Hello.

I have already paid an extra amount through PAYPAL.

16th Nov　First payment

ID(★★)

€101.95

Partially refunded
€32

Total（ €101.95 - €32＝ €69.95 ）

€69.95


16th Nov　Second payment

ID(★★)

Total
€101.95


Total payment

€69.95 + €101.95=€171.9



Therefore I have paid €171.9 in total.

Could you please confirm?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact. I understood there weren't enough items in stock. I also confirmed you had returned the amount for □ items. But it's only for commodity prices without including the shipping fee. I paid ■ dollars as the shipping fee it took to order □ items. I hope for your reply.

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Thank you for your contact. I understood there weren't enough items in stock. I also confirmed you had returned the amount for □ items. But it's only for the commodity price without including the shipping fee. I paid ■ dollars as the shipping fee for the order of □ items. I am waiting/await for your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us. We understand that there is no enough inventory of the item.
We also confirmed that amount for xx pieces are refunded.
We received only the refund for the item and shipping charge was not refunded.
We paid xx dollars for xx pieces. Would you refund the shipping charge for xx pieces that were missing.
We are looking forward to your reply.

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Thank you for contacting us. We understand that there is not enough inventory of the item.
We also confirmed that the amount for xx pieces is refunded.
However, we received only the refund for the item and shipping charge was not refunded.
We paid xx dollars for the order of xx pieces. Would you refund the shipping charge for xx pieces that were missing.
We are looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Three kinds of Dim sum (Steamed buns, Shumai the pork dumplings, Meat buns) / Mini Taiwanese Ramen / Almond Jelly
Favorite Drinks (Oolong tea, Pu'er tea, Jasmin tea)
Ramen Set with mini fried rice or mini crab omelet on rice

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Three kinds of Dim sum (Soup Dumpling, Pork dumplings, Meat buns) / Mini Taiwanese Ramen / Almond Jelly
Your choice of drink (Oolong tea, Pu'er tea, or Jasmin tea)
Ramen Set with mini fried rice or mini crab omelet on rice

元の翻訳

Three kinds of Chinese dumplings; xiaolongbao, Sumai,Steamed bun with meat filling/
mini sized Taiwan ramen/ Annindofu/Drinks you like; one of oolong tea, pu’er tea, jasmin tea/
Ramen set; mini sized fried rice or mini sized crab omelet on rice

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Three kinds of Chinese dumplings; Xiaolongbao, Sumai, Steamed bun with meat filling/
mini sized Taiwan ramen/ Annindofu/ Your choice of drink; Oolong tea, Pu’er tea, Jasmin tea/
Ramen set; mini sized fried rice or mini sized crab omelet on rice

元の翻訳
I received a AtoZ claim yesterday.
However, the date of purchase is August 25.
As far as the buyer's comment concerns, it looks like the item works properly.
I think the buyer wants to return it for his own reasons and there are no need to give him a refund.
I would appreciate it if you would give me your thought on this matter.

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I received aｎ AtoZ claim the other day.
However, the date of purchase is August 25.
From what I see on the purchaser's comment, it looks like the item works properly.
I think the buyer wants to return it for his own reasons and there is no need to give him a refund.
I would appreciate it if you would give me your thought on this matter.

元の翻訳
We received a complain of AtoZ the other day.
However the date of the product purchase was in 25th of August.
As long as I have confirmed the purchaser's comment, the product seems to work regularly.
We consider that we do not need to refund to this customer at this time due to the return is made by customer's reason.
May I ask you about your thoughts about this complain?
Would appreciate if you could let me know how to handle this complain.
Thank you in advance.


We apologize to have caused Amazon a tremendous inconvenience this time.
The details of the complaint mainly attributes to defect of the item.
Would you delete the history of the complaint of A to Z?
We had handled the customer promptly, and have already issued a refund.
We handled the customer by withdrawing the item, by which the customer does not have to do anything.
We appreciate if you delete it for us.

This time we received an A-to-Z claim from a customer..
First of all, we offer our sincerest apology for the inconvenience we have caused.
As for the claim, the main reason is the product’s defect.
Could you please delete the claim’s history?
We dealt with the issue and issued the customer a refund.
We asked the customer to dispose the item so that he wouldn’t send it back.
Thank you for your consideration.

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We received an A-to-z claim the other day.
However the date of the product purchase was on 25th of August.
From what I see on the purchaser's comment, the product seems to work properly.
We consider that we do not need to give refund to this customer at this time as the return is due to customer's own reason.
May I ask your thoughts upon this complaint?
Would appreciate if you could let me know how to handle this complaint.
Thank you in advance.


We apologize to have caused Amazon a tremendous inconvenience this time.
The details of the complaint mainly attributes to defect of the item.
Would you delete the history of the complaint of A to Z?
We had handled the customer promptly, and have already issued a refund.
We handled the customer by withdrawing the item, by which the customer does not have to do anything.
We appreciate if you delete it for us.

This time we received an A-to-Z claim from a customer..
First of all, we offer our sincerest apology for the inconvenience we have caused.
As for the claim, the main reason is the product’s defect.
Could you please delete the claim’s history?
We dealt with the issue and issued the customer a refund.
We asked the customer to dispose the item so that he wouldn’t send it back.
Thank you for your consideration.