chihirofk (chihirofk) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello, I am Yamamoto.
Tatsuya introduced you to me.
I heard that you take care of him very well.
It is very nice to know you.

So could you send me a list of items?
I will send it back to you after I fill in how many items I want.

About payment, I would like to use Paypal.

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Hello, I am Yamamoto.
Tatsuya introduced you to me.
I heard that you take care of him very well.
It is very nice to know you.
I look forward to doing business with you for many years to come.↵

So could you send me a list of items?
I will send it back to you after I fill in how many items I want.

About payment, I would like to use Paypal.

元の翻訳
She will appear on three radio program, "monaka" (9:00-12:40), "GOGOMONZ" (13:00-16:55) and "KIRAMEKI MUSIC STAR 'KIRASTA' " (18:00-20:00).

And "KIRASTA" will be public broadcast from STUDIO ARCHER!
Please come to the 5th floor and say hi to her!

[NACK5 SPECIAL 1 DAY programs for commemorating a release of KUMI KODA's newest album, "WALK OF MY LIFE"]
Thursday, March 19

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She will appear on three radio programs, "monaka" (9:00-12:40), "GOGOMONZ" (13:00-16:55) and "KIRAMEKI MUSIC STAR 'KIRASTA' " (18:00-20:00).

And "KIRASTA" will be a public broadcast from STUDIO ARCHER!
Please come to the 5th floor and say hi to her!

[NACK5 SPECIAL 1 DAY programs for commemorating a release of KUMI KODA's new album, "WALK OF MY LIFE"]
Thursday, March 19

元の翻訳
"monaka" 9:00-12:40

"GOGOMONZ" 13:00-16:55

"KIRAMEKI MUSIC STAR 'KIRASTA' " 18:00-20:00
* This is a public live broadcasting at STUDIO ARCHER.
* Entrance tickets will be handed out on the day around the venue. For more information, please check NACK5's official web site (http://www.nack5.co.jp/).
* Facility's information: STUDIO ARCHER
5th floor, ARCHER, 2-1-1, SAKURAGICHO, OMIYAKU, SAITAMASI, SAITAMA

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"monaka" 9:00-12:40

"GOGOMONZ" 13:00-16:55

"KIRAMEKI MUSIC STAR 'KIRASTA' " 18:00-20:00
* This is a public live broadcasting from STUDIO ARCHER.
* Entrance tickets will be handed out on the day around the venue. For more information, please check NACK5's official web site (http://www.nack5.co.jp/).
* Facility's information: STUDIO ARCHER
5th floor, ARCHER, 2-1-1, SAKURAGICHO, OMIYAKU, SAITAMASI, SAITAMA

元の翻訳
NACK5 "monaka"

Thursday, March 19, 9:00-12:40
on FM NACK5 "monaka"

KUMI KODA will hold NACK5 "monaka" for a day
for commemorating her newest album "WALK OF MY LIFE"!

It's not about how people feel,
but how you live your life.

KUMI KODA, who keeps walking and singing toward her 15th anniversary as a singer.

修正後
NACK5 "monaka"

Thursday, March 19, 9:00-12:40
on FM NACK5 "monaka"

KUMI KODA will hold NACK5 "monaka" for a day
for commemorating her new album "WALK OF MY LIFE"!

It's not about how people feel,
but how you live your life.

KUMI KODA, who keeps walking and singing toward her 15th anniversary as a singer.

元の翻訳
Finally her newest album, "WALK OF MY LIFE" will be released!
This time, she will take you to the cutting- edge of aggressive sounds that is full of sensation and surprise!

On the next day of the release, Thursday March 19th, she will have "NACK5 SPECIAL 1DAY, commemorating for KUMI KODA's newest album 'WALK OF MY LIFE' " and will appear on some talk shows of NACK5.

修正後
Finally, her new album, "WALK OF MY LIFE" will be released!
This time, she will take you to the cutting- edge of aggressive sounds that is full of sensation and surprise!

On the next day of the release, Thursday March 19th, she will have "NACK5 SPECIAL 1DAY, commemorating for KUMI KODA's new album 'WALK OF MY LIFE' " and will appear on some programs of NACK5.

元の翻訳
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答3：はい。ロゴの数などによっては値段が高くなるものもありますので、新しいコンセプトのスーツが欲しい時は、まずはじめに私たちに知らせてください。
答4：まず、革の詳細についてお話しさせてください。：
二種類の厚さの革：

修正後
答1：あなたが関心を持ったスーツを添付にて拝見しました。ご要望通り、透かしを無くすことも可能です。また、あなたのオリジナルのラベルや顧客のロゴ名をスーツに入れることも可能です。
答2：はい、承知しています。オンラインストアに注文が入りましたら、注文されたサイズと商品のイメージ、その他の詳細について私に送ってください。
答3：はい。ロゴの数や追加事項によって値段が高くなるものもありますので、新しいコンセプトのスーツが欲しい時は、まずはじめに私たちに知らせてください。
答4：まず、革の詳細についてお話しさせてください。：
二種類の厚さの革：