Porada Teparagul (cherryt_88) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
รับสมัครนักแปล!
สำหรับท่านที่มีความสามารถภาษาญี่ปุ่น สนใจแปลกับ Conyac และรับค่าตอบแทนไหม?

修正後
รับสมัครนักแปล!
สำหรับผู้ที่มีความถนัดภาษาญี่ปุ่น สนใจร่วมงานแปลกับ Conyac และรับค่าตอบแทนไหม?

元の翻訳
■$$00002$$ exercise【Complete Box】mu-mo shop Exclusive Sale starts：
June 14, 2014 From 14:00〜

■$$00002$$ exercise General Sale starts：
July 7, 2014

■『Ayumi Hamasaki Exercise DVD』Feature Page
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/A_exercise/　(PC/MB Compatible)
※Please note that the site may be overcrowded varies according to the time of the day, it may be difficult to access at such time.

修正後
■$$00002$$ exercise 【Complete Box】mu-mo shop Exclusive Sale starts：
June 14, 2014 From 14:00〜

■$$00002$$ exercise General Sale starts：
July 12, 2014

■『Ayumi Hamasaki Exercise DVD』 Feature Page
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/A_exercise/　(PC/MB Compatible)
※Please note that, depending on the time of your access, the site access may become slow due to the traffic jam.

元の翻訳
※Due to signal condition, transfer may not be possible.
※Broadcast content may change.

修正後
※Due to signal condition, distribution may not be possible.
※Broadcast content may change.

元の翻訳
The point is to bring out an active stylish look with random natural looking curls by rolling the hair from the mid-part to the tip and add spiral curls to it.

Add freshness to the hair by giving it some airy-feel with the Styling Spray.

Put some layers to the One-Length Bob, to that, style a neat straight hair for the bang. From there, cut the hair along the nap of the neck and give the style well shaped Mushroom Bob, the hair should be harmoniously lined from front to side without any parting. It is important to give the style a youthful impression by leaving a little volume to the hair to keep the hair well-set.

Then give the style a calm feeling with violet brown color. Complete the look by combing soft wax into the hair with your fingers.

修正後
The point is to bring out an active stylish look with random natural looking curls by rolling the hair from the mid-part to the tip and add spiral curls to it.

Add freshness to the hair by giving it some airy-feel with the Styling Spray.

Put some layers to the one-length bob, to that, style a neat straight hair for the bang. From there, cut the hair along the nap of the neck and give the style well shaped mushroom bob, the hair should be harmoniously lined from front to side without any parting. It is important to give the style a youthful impression by leaving a little volume to the hair to keep the hair well-set.

Then give the style a calm feeling with violet brown color. Complete the look by combing soft wax into the hair with your fingers.