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We are sorry for my late reply.
This product is not compatible with English, thus we don't have a replacement that you require.

If you are not satisfied, we are happy to accept return. You can ship it back according to Amazon's product return policy, then we will refund to you.

We are deeply sorry for the inconvenience caused.

We look forward to serving you again.

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We are sorry for our belated reply.
This product is not compatible with English, thus we don't have a replacement that you require.

If you are not satisfied, we are happy to accept return. You can ship it back according to Amazon's product return policy, then we will refund to you.

We are deeply sorry for the inconvenience this may have caused.

We look forward to serving you again.

元の翻訳
Did you manage figuring out where the item is at? Tracking the item may be time-consuming as there are so many post offices in NY.
Regarding the possibility of re-delivery from Japan, I have checked with the person in charge of EMS at Japan Post. However he told me there is nothing we could do from our end once the item has gone through the central office.

You don't need to buy ◯ for me since I have already got one.
I obtained the new issue of your favourite ☆, so I will send it to you with ◯'s book that includes his autograph.
Count down on days until I send it to you by the middle of next month.
The time I used to play ◇ was when I was a junior high school student, so I couldn't buy the guide book to figure out the divergence.

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Did you manage to figure out where the item is at? Tracking the item may be time-consuming as there are so many post offices in NY.
Regarding the possibility of re-delivery from Japan, I have checked with the person in charge of EMS at Japan Post. However, he told me there is nothing we could do from our end once the item has gone through the central office.

You don't need to buy ◯ for me since I have already got one.
I obtained the new issue of your favourite ☆, so I will send it to you with ◯'s book that includes his autograph.
Countdown of days until I send it to you by the middle of next month.
The time I used to play ◇ was when I was a junior high school student, so I couldn't buy the guide book to figure out the divergence.

元の翻訳
Did you find the place of the luggage? In NY, There are so many post offices that inspection of luggage may take so much time.
I asked the man being in charge of EMS in post office whether you can resend the product or not. But he said that we can't do anything if the product was over exchange in America.

As I have ○, You don't have to buy my part.
As I got the new book of ☆ you like, I will send it with signatured book of ○。
Please look forward to waiting I think that the product will arrive in midterms in next month.

When I played ◇ ,I was a junior high school student . So, I couldn't buy strategy guide and couldn't find divergence.

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Did you find the location of the luggage? In NY, there are so many post offices that inspection of luggage may take so much time.
I asked the man being in charge of EMS in post office whether I can resend the product from Japan. But he said that there is nothing they can do once the parcel has gone through the exchange office in the US.

As I have ○, you don't have to buy mine.
As I got the new book of ☆ you like, I will send it with a signed copy of ○'s book.
Please look forward to waiting I think that the product will arrive in the middle of next month.

When I played ◇, I was a junior high school student . So, I couldn't buy strategy guide and couldn't find divergence.

元の翻訳
I received the returned item today.
I'll refund 125.03 USD, excluded for 13 USD for shipping fee and another 13 USD for return shipping.
Unfortunately we couldn't make deal, but looking forward to dealing with you again.
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
Thank you very much.

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I received the returned item today.
I'll refund you 125.03 USD, which is the balance after 13 USD for shipping fee and another 13 USD for return shipping are excluded.
Unfortunately, we couldn't make a deal, but looking forward to dealing with you again.
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
Thank you very much.

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I have received an inquiry from Mr. ●● of Garuda Indonesia.
He wanted to cycling tour around Mount Fuji and Yatsugadake.
As this area is our very familiar location, please let us handle this.
We have organized tour regularly.
Just last month, we have organized a tour of VIP from Taiwan with 30 people around Mount Fuji.

As the detail of the tour is not yet fixed, we are quoting the charge for the guide.
We send you the data of the list of service we provide for your reference.

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I have received an inquiry from Mr. ●● of Garuda Indonesia.
He wanted to cycling tour around Mount Fuji and Yatsugadake.
As this area is our very familiar location, please let us handle this.
We have been organizing tours for groups regularly.
Just last month, we have organized a tour of VIP from Taiwan with 30 people around Mount Fuji.

As the detail of the tour is not yet fixed, we are quoting the charge for the guide.
We send you the data of the list of service we provide for your reference.

元の翻訳
あなたから商品を手に入れたいと思いますが、どうしたらできますか？

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貴店と、貴店の商品について評価したいと思っております、どうしたらできますか？

元の翻訳
今回、この商品の価格をせり上げます。もし、こちらから価格を提示しきれていない場合、リストから除外してくれませんか？作業が追いつかないからです。80種類のゲームの価格をつけるのはたいへんな仕事なのです。

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この後で商品価格を確認します。もし、こちらから価格を提示しない場合には、リストから商品を除外してくれませんか？作業が追いつかないからです。80種類のゲームの価格を調べるのはたいへんな仕事なのです。

元の翻訳
今回は価格表示を致しますが、当方より御社に価格提供をしなかった場合は出品リストからはずして頂けますか？何故かとそれらの価格情報を入手できないからです。80もの異なるゲームの価格を表示することは並大抵の作業ではありません。

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この後で価格を確認致しますが、当方より御社に価格提供をしなかった場合は出品リストからはずして頂けますか？何故かとそれらの価格情報を入手できないからです。80もの異なるゲームの価格を確認することは並大抵の作業ではありません。

元の翻訳
We will deliver information to you about Japanese udon sold all over Japan.

After the 2020 Olympic was decided to be held in Japan, many people all over the world have been ordering Japanese udon.
Among all the Japanese food, udon is most popular.

Have you tried Japanese ramen noodles or udon?

We will try udon sold in each region in Japan and evaluate them in this site.

Please let us know if you find udon that interests you.
Thank you very much.

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We will deliver information to you about Japanese udon sold all over Japan.

After the 2020 Olympic was decided to be held in Japan, many people all over the world have been ordering Japanese food.
Among all the Japanese food, udon is the most popular of them all.

Have you tried Japanese ramen noodles or udon?

We will try udon sold in each region in Japan and evaluate them in this site.

Please let us know if you find udon that interests you.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Thank you for message.

The item might be lost, so we send it to you again.
Please refer to tracking number.

The item will arrive in a week.
Sorry to trouble you.

Thank you for your message.
Unfortunately this item is sold out, so we have no stocks anymore.
Excuse me.

Thank you for your message.
The item might be lost because this was due to be delivered to India.
We'll deliver to you by EMS in about 3 days.

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Thank you for your/the message.

The item might be lost, so we send it to you again.
Please check the shipping status with the tracking number provided.

The item will arrive in a week.
Sorry to trouble you.

Thank you for your message.
Unfortunately this item is sold out, so we no longer have it available.
We are sorry about this.

Thank you for your message.
The item might be lost because it was shipped to a delivery address in India.
We have started working on the reshipment of the item, and it will be delivered to you by EMS in about 3 days.

元の翻訳
it7150

再入荷するまで注文は受け付けないのですか？
私はイタリア人でスペイン人ではありません。英語で書いて下さい。

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it7150

再入荷するまで絶対に注文は受け付けないのですか？
私はイタリア人でスペイン人ではありません。英語で書いて下さい。

元の翻訳
Is there any issue for using the same ●● number registered in England and that of those being registered at Spain, Germany, France, Italy, America, Canada? (All will be common number)

What I am worrying is that if the ●● number is same, updating the list prices, for example, may cause to update the list prices of the other countries.

If there is no issue, I would like to use the same ●● number.

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Is there any issue for using the ●● number same as the one registered in England for Spain, Germany, France, Italy, America, Canada? (All will be the common ●● number)

What I am worrying about is that if the ●● number is the same as other countries, updating the list prices, for example, may cause to update the list prices for the other countries.

If there is no issue, I would like to unify all of ●● numbers as one.

元の翻訳
First, I would like to extend my deepest apology on behalf of our company for what has happened this time.

We have found out the detailed reason by utilizing the information you provided for us.

As you know, Amazon accept the return on behalf of seller.

For watches, Amazon decides the returns whether those can be sold again or not after inspecting by themselves, and if those can be soled, those are listed again.

Perhaps, this process have a problem, We will negotiate with Amazon for not to sell the return again regardless of the their condition.

We truly appreciate for your opinion on this matter.

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First, I would like to extend my deepest apology on behalf of our company for what has happened this time.

We have found out the detailed reason by utilizing the information you provided for us.

As you know, Amazon accepts the return on behalf of sellers.

For watches, Amazon decides the returns whether those can be sold again or not after inspecting them by themselves, and if those can be sold, those are listed again.

Perhaps, this process has a problem, we will negotiate with Amazon for not to sell the return again regardless of the their condition.

We truly appreciate for your opinion on this matter.

元の翻訳
First I would like to apologize to you as a representative of our company regarding the problem this time.

We found a cause by detailed information you have provided.

Amazon accepts returning of the pruchased items as you know.

As for watch, Amazon does not sell the returned item with problem but it resells if it has no problem.

Probably this process has a problem. We negotiate Amazon not to sell the returned item no matter under what kind of condition the item is.

We sincerely appreciate your indication.

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First of all, I would like to apologize to you from the bottom of my heart on behalf of our company regarding the problem this time（→the issue).

We were able to identify the cause based on the detailed information you have provided.

As you know, Amazon accepts returns of the purchased items.

As for the watch, Amazon does not sell the returned item with problem, but it resells if it has no problem.

Probably this process has a problem. We will negotiate with Amazon to not to sell the returned item no matter under what kind of condition the item is.

We sincerely appreciate your indication.

元の翻訳
I am sorry but another person has already purchased No.3839
I look forward to helping you at another time.

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I am sorry, but another person (→ customer) has already purchased No.3839.
I look forward to helping you at another occasion.

元の翻訳
Your item is at thencustoms in San Paulo Airport.
I am sorry that you have to wait.
It takes 2 to 3 days to be deliverd to USA by EMS.
But it takes longer in particular to Brazil.

I don't understand about one item.↵
It was sent by airplane from the airport in japan on June 16th 2014 and↵
it arrives at June 24th 2014. It took 8 days. Is it possible to fly 8 days?
It might take longer time before you receive it. I am sincerely sorry for you.

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Your item appears to be at the customs in Sao Paulo Airport.
I am sorry to have kept you waiting.
It takes 2 to 3 days for the delivery to the USA by EMS.
But it seems that it takes particularly longer time for delivery to Brazil.

There is one point that I don't understand regarding this shipment. Although it was sent by airplane from the airport in Japan on June 16th, 2014, it has taken 8 days, as it was arrived in Brazil on June 24th, 2014. Can an airplane keep flying for 8 days?
It might take longer time before you receive it. I am sincerely sorry about this.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting with me.
Your wife is having a labor and we are at a hospital.
I would like to send but we're not sure when the baby will come out so I can't leave here.
The doctor said we'll see by Sunday.
I'm sorry about this, I'll send it by Monday.
Thank you so much for your patience.

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Thank you for contacting me.
My wife has gone into labor, and I am at a hospital taking care of her.
I would like to ship your item soon, but I cannot leave the hospital as we're not sure when the baby will arrive.
The doctor said we'll see the baby by Sunday.
I'm sorry about this, but I'll ship it by Monday.
Thank you so much for your patience.